Chapter 313 The Teacher's Monologue (4/5)
"no."
After reading the script written by Makoto Futaba, Tetsuya Takahashi slowly put down his phone and shook his head.
"Eh?"
Futaba Makoto seemed surprised to see Tetsuya Takahashi rejecting him so simply. After all, he had pursued so many wives, and there were at least dozens of wives in the dustproof cabinet - when it came to encounters and exchanges with beautiful girls, it should be the same
It's not that bad, it's actually rejected by Takahashi Tetsuya.
"call."
Tetsuya Takahashi put down his mobile phone, and then showed a complicated look: "I say Cheng, if you really want to make a popular gal game, at least it will not be possible at the current level."
"What's the reason?"
"Okay, it seems you don't understand." Tetsuya Takahashi bent down and pointed to one of the paragraphs on the phone.
[·On the way to school, the protagonist bumps into the heroine who is rushing to school with a piece of bread in her mouth at the door of the wagashi shop on Meilin Street]
[Protagonist: Are you okay? (Reaching out to pull up the heroine)]
[The heroine: Ah...it's okay. (The heroine is shy)]
"What's wrong with this section?" Futaba Cheng scratched his head.
"No problem is the big problem." Tetsuya Takahashi said, "What era are you in, the girl is still holding bread in her mouth, and - I can guess the follow-up of your plot. Is it because of this incident?
Let the male and female protagonists intersect, and finally the heroine falls in love with the protagonist?"
Futaba Cheng gave a thumbs up: "How do you know."
"You write such a cliched plot, how can I not guess it?!" Tetsuya Takahashi said, "This type of drama, galgame, let alone I have seen dozens of similar ones."
Futaba Cheng touched his chin: "Is it that exaggerated?"
"No way at all! You have to rewrite it."
"Eh?! I stayed up all night to write this." Futaba Cheng said with a pitiful expression, "You are too harsh."
"You might as well write that the heroine deliberately meets the hero. In fact, she is a money-worshiping girl, and the hero is a second-generation rich man. This is her plan to deliberately create an encounter." Tetsuya Takahashi said.
Futaba Cheng thought about it carefully, and it seemed that writing it this way was not bad, but wouldn’t the heroine be unlikable?
"In this case, will the players hate the heroine?"
"It will be fine if it is whitewashed in post-production." Tetsuya Takahashi said, "In short, a script like the one you just had that was only available decades ago will never work."
"All right."
"Also." Tetsuya Takahashi swiped his phone again, and then showed it to Futaba Makoto, "Why do you always insert Meilin Street into every conversation?"
[It’s so hot on Meilin Street today, it’s like going to the corner kiosk to buy an ice cream shop.]
[Yui-chan, let’s go home together after school, and let’s go to Meilin Street to buy some things.]
【Ah, I’m hungry, let’s go to the ramen shop on Meilin Street?】
[Yes, yes, Merrin Street has recently...]
Tetsuya Takahashi complained vigorously: "What kind of weird protagonist is this three-sentence inseparable from Plum Street?!"
Futaba Makoto laughed, scratched his cheek with his fingers and looked away.
It was inserted a little too much...
"If you do this, it will make players feel disgusted. You can insert it, but you have to control the quantity." Takahashi said.
Now that the senior galgame player next to him said this, Futaba Makoto had no choice but to nod.
However, although writing a script is much easier than writing a novel, he still doesn't have a good plot in his mind.
Hmm...
"Can't think of a plot?" Tetsuya Takahashi asked.
"Indeed, it may be because I stayed up late and my brain's speed slowed down." Futaba Cheng said.
“Since you don’t have any good ideas, why not find some inspiration from around you?”
"Inspiration?" Futaba Cheng thought about what inspiration could be found around him.
After all, it is impossible for a boy to be surrounded by beautiful girls all day long in reality, and beautiful girls themselves are rare animals, so why should they surround a boy?
It’s not like that boy is extremely handsome.
Futaba Cheng sighed.
The next second, his expression paused slightly.
Why does a person who is surrounded by beautiful girls all day sound inexplicably familiar?
"Speaking of which, there seem to be many beautiful girls around me, although it is because I am a landlord." Futaba Cheng pondered, and a thought slowly emerged from his mind: "The landlord... the tenant, the beauty
Girl."
Suddenly, Futaba Cheng smashed his fist on his palm: "Yes, good script!"
"You scared me." Seeing Futaba Cheng's sudden excitement, Tetsuya Takahashi asked, "What's a good script?"
"What do you think of the theme where the protagonist is a landlord and the tenants are all beautiful girls?" Futaba Cheng asked.
"Well, I don't seem to have seen anything similar." Tetsuya Takahashi tilted his head and thought, "H games seem to have some of this type, but the core is not the landlord and the tenant, it is just easy to start."
"Then it's decided." Futaba Cheng's brain seemed to be full of inspiration at this time,
"The tenants are all problem girls. The protagonist's task is to solve the problem girl's heart knot and finally win the other girl's heart."
"Oh?" Tetsuya Takahashi smiled, "A girl with a problem, she has a galgame style."
"Then I'll look forward to it."
"Leave it to me."
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Chinese language class.
"Here, turn to page 87..."
The chalk and the blackboard made a clear clicking sound, and the teacher was narrating the content of this lesson on the stage. Ten minutes later, the teacher suddenly looked into the distance, slightly stunned - Futaba, who always slept in class,
Today I rarely sit upright and write something with a pen.
Next to him, classmate Gong Bai, was sitting quietly without sleeping, holding a pen and recording something.
The teacher is very aware of their grades, and also knows that they study hard all night every day, which makes them prone to sleepiness during the day... Sometimes, the teacher also wonders whether it is because of his poor teaching skills that the two top students have to choose self-study. Although
He would be a little shocked, but after all, those two children were among the top two in the degree, so he didn't say anything more.
"It seems that my teaching level has improved, which made them start to stop classes seriously." The teacher secretly thought, and a sense of pride emerged from his heart.
He couldn't help but straighten his waist a little, and his voice suddenly became louder——
"Okay, classmates..."
The students in the audience looked at each other in confusion. Why did the teacher suddenly become energetic in the middle of the lecture?
Did you come to feel it?
"Study hard, Futaba, Miyashiro, the teacher will work harder for you." After writing various contents on the blackboard, the teacher looked back at Futaba Cheng, nodding secretly in his heart.
"If you get admitted to a prestigious university in the future, you must remember the Chinese language teacher who worked hard for you."
…
At this time, Gong Shiro Yuyu, who was sitting next to Futaba Cheng, pushed his notebook over. Futaba Cheng, who was concentrating on writing the script, glanced at it and found that the notebook was full of breast shapes of various sizes.
Futaba Cheng: "..."
[(˙?˙)Which one do you like?] The girl next to her blinked her beautiful eyes.
"You're like this." Futaba Makoto said.
Chapter completed!