34, On-site proposition composition
The three teachers in the conference room looked at each other, and Huang Juemin smiled and said, "You are very confident."
Li Xiang: "When the year is not good, if you have food at home, you won't feel panic. Although the year is not good now, with my ability, I don't need to panic about the future. Moreover, I can sit here today and sit in front of the three teachers. I believe that in the hearts of the three teachers, I think the same way of thinking about me."
Huang Juemin said: "It is good to have confidence. We really appreciate you very much and have learned deeply about your usual performance, so we give you this opportunity. This is the School of Literature, so we will pay more attention to your Chinese. Your college entrance examination essay, which means this article "Kaleidoscope", has received full marks. It can be seen that your writing ability is very strong. What is even more rare is that you have ideas and ideas. Can you tell us what you thought when you wrote this article "Kaleidoscope"?"
The title of the college entrance examination essay is about an old man falling down on the side of the road. People are watching. Some people think they should help him, while others think they should not help him... The test paper requires candidates to write an essay from the perspective of this material.
Li Xiang wrote "Kaleidoscope". Kaleidoscope is the kind that children play with. Looking in, you can see different scenes that are ever-changing. "The elderly fell on the side of the road" is like a kaleidoscope, which can see the change of human nature and the complexity of society from it, and it can see both the passing crowd and the "the group of fallen elderly people".
After listening to Li Xiang's introduction, Huang Juemin's face was not fluctuating and he could not see any joy or anger.
Then the three of them asked some questions one after another, which should have been planned long ago, and the three of them took turns asking questions.
Huang Juemin is the vice president of the School of Literature. The other two around him are the director of the Admissions Office and the other is the vice president of the School of Foreign Languages.
The vice president of the Foreign Languages School even communicated with Li Xiang in oral English.
This situation lasted for an hour. After the three of them whispered and discussed for a while, the vice dean of the School of Foreign Languages left, leaving only Huang Juemin and the director of the Admissions Office.
Huang Juemin said: "The last question is that the person who drove you a week ago has been sentenced, do you know?"
"Know."
The verdict of the "608 Case" was announced a week ago. The suspect was sentenced to death for intentional homicide and endangering public safety. The other party appealed, so he is still struggling.
This is just a stalemate. There is almost no possibility of appealing to reject the judgment. The case is clear and the evidence is strong. There is no possibility of a turnaround.
Huang Juemin: "I believe you understand the other party's situation."
Li Xiang nodded.
"Do you hate him?"
Li Xiang nodded: "Of course I hate it."
Huang Juemin said: "Hateful people must be pitiful, of course, it can also be said to be ridiculous. He believes that society is unfair to him, which makes him unable to show his ambitions, so he hates society. Now, I'll give it to you..."
He looked at the clock on the wall and it was 10:30 in the morning.
"I'll give you an hour and a half now. You can write an essay based on the case that happened to you. According to the standards of the college entrance examination, the number of words cannot be less than 800 words. You can choose your own angle and the subject matter."
"Okay." Li Xiang replied neatly, writing a topic essay now, in his vision last night.
"This is paper and pen." Huang Juemin handed the paper and pen to Li Xiang and said, "Then you write quietly here quietly. Let's go out. I'll get the composition at 12 o'clock."
Li Xiang nodded.
Seeing that Li Xiang had already started thinking, Huang Juemin said to the director of the admissions office: "Old Zhou, then go to my office first to sit down. I will trouble you later."
Lao Zhou waved his hand with a smile: "No trouble."
When the two of them went out and wanted to close the door, Huang Juemin said again: "On the way, you can go to the bathroom, turn right out of the door, and walk to the end. OK, I won't disturb you."
After the two left, the door was also closed, and the conference room suddenly became extremely quiet, and the buzzing sound of the air conditioner became more and more obvious. The bright summer sun was peeking out of the window. Outside the window was a lake with sparkling waves, and the breeze blew the water waves, and water birds were flying on the water. Looking into the distance, on the other side of the lake, there were students like ants walking in the sun, and green electric sightseeing cars passed by from time to time, and the cars were filled with students who were unwilling to walk in the sun.
The phone in Li Xiang's pocket suddenly vibrated, bringing back his mood.
He had already muted his phone before entering the conference room, but he didn't answer the phone, and stopped himself after a while.
Although no one supervised him on the spot and Huang Juemin did not say that he could not look at his mobile phone, Huang Juemin said that he would write essays according to the standards of the college entrance examination essay. Since the requirements for composition are based on the standards of the college entrance examination, the discipline of the examination room should also be based on the requirements of the college entrance examination.
Li Xiang still had this awareness. He didn't want to get gossip because he answered a phone call in the middle.
How to start writing this article?
Li Xiang thought through and thought quickly.
Huang Juemin set this topic, which has both advantages and disadvantages. The advantage lies in his personal experience and deep feelings. The disadvantage is that he is a victim and is easily influenced by personal emotions and writes some resentful words.
During the period of recovery, he has read many reports on this case, and has an understanding of the process of this incident, the work and life of the suspect, and his life.
Taking advantage of this opportunity, Li Xiang looked at the entire case from the beginning and tried to look at the perpetrator calmly from the perspective of bystanders.
After thinking about it for about ten minutes, he began to write: "When it comes to family possessions, people always think that this is a considerable amount of wealth. We usually say that someone has a family possessions, but they admit that he has a lot of family possessions, but they will not believe that an egg can be considered a family possession! However, Zhuangzi has long said that there are people who "seek wealth when they see eggs". Therefore, we should not underestimate the family possessions of an egg."
At about 12 o'clock, Huang Juemin and others appeared in the conference room on time. Li Xiang had already finished the work and waited for five minutes.
"Have you finished writing?" Huang Juemin asked while pulling out the chair and sitting down.
Li Xiang handed him the white paper full of words: "It's finished."
Huang Juemin looked down and saw that his handwriting was a bit grassy, and the grass looked beautiful. The whole white paper was full of writing. He turned to the other side and wrote more than half of it, which was estimated to be more than a thousand words.
All the words are written by hand, and the time is tight for an hour and a half, so it is really impossible to write without cursive words.
"Old Zhou, please look first." Huang Juemin said.
"You come, come, I cooperate with you, and I can't read the composition." Lao Zhou waved his hand and refused to answer.
Huang Juemin didn't force himself, sat down and looked carefully, and saw the title was "A House of an Egg".
The article tells a story, saying that one person got an egg, and excitedly ran to his wife and told him that he had money. His wife asked where the money was. He took out the egg from his pocket and showed it to his wife, saying that this was his property, but it took ten years to really make a fortune. In ten years, the egg hatched chickens and the chicken lays eggs. After this, it finally accumulated wealth and could realize the dream of getting rich in ten years.
It was such a fantastic dream, but the first step of this dream of making money was to steal and cheat, because he picked up the eggs, and he also planned to borrow the hens that hatched the eggs. After hatching them, he would take one of the many chickens from his neighbors' houses, regardless of the situation.
He was imagining, from an egg to a life of becoming a billionaire ten years later because of this egg. He felt happy and was complacent and wanted to marry a beautiful little wife, but he annoyed the wife of the same roof. In anger, she smashed the egg that had placed her dreams on the ground.
OK, the dream is shattered.
Li Xiang wrote in the article: "His wealth accumulation plan does not start from reality at all, but replaces reality with fantasy and complaining about the world instead of hard work. In the end, not only will he not embark on the road of making money, but he will easily embark on the road of no return to crime. Only truly honest workers have always understood the principle of labor producing wealth, can eliminate all the thoughts of making money, and steadily use their hard work to create wealth for themselves and realize their dreams."
The article does not mention that case and that person throughout the article, but the theme is very appropriate. It is not limited to this matter, but tells about such a group of people who dream of getting rich all day but do not work hard.
This group of people is "seeking wealth when they see eggs"! When they see an egg, they imagine themselves becoming a monetary. A typical utopian. Once their dreams are broken by cruel reality, they start to blame others, full of negative energy, hate everything around them, which leads to crime.
Chapter completed!