1. The inspiration for the level scene in this copy comes from the fourth level of "Call of Duty 6: Modern Warfare 2": Don't speak Russian. This is the material provided by a friend of mine. At the beginning, I actually planned to start with a small scene, and wrote about thugs killing people on the streets.

, but my friend said that readers now like big scenes when reading books, and small scenes cannot attract people, so he provided me with this material suggestion. After I read it, it was indeed shocking. You can search for it by yourself.

2. Regarding the reincarnation mechanism, some readers reported that the plot is repetitive or the pace is slow. I will pay attention to this, because the level plots are all my original ideas. I borrowed the lens narrative mode from "Source Code" to reflect the protagonist's experience.

The changes after each round of death loading were a bit delayed. After all, the movie is different from the novel.

The later levels will definitely be improved. In terms of rhythm, the first copy needs some foreshadowing, emotions and main lines, which have been reduced as much as possible. I will pay attention to it in the future.

3. In terms of character design, this is a weakness I have felt since writing Hunting. Except for the protagonist, the supporting characters are all more facial-shaped. In Ghosts and Gods, I focused on strengthening this point. I like to write the stories behind the characters, but when writing

In this chapter of Crisis, I still made the same old mistake. Jillian and others were a bit weak. I thought about sacrificing the middle-aged policeman to highlight the glory, but later I gave up because I was afraid that the plot would drag on. I will follow up

Try to use more language, actions, and demeanor to highlight the character.

4. In the early days of the new book, I saw a lot of wilderness and hunting old book friends who came to support me. I was really touched. Thank you all for your recommendations, monthly votes and rewards. I will work hard to update it and update it well! Update it as soon as possible! I hope you can continue to read more.

Support me, because now whether a book can be promoted depends on the reading data;

5. This book is the first time I have written a complete outline. I hope I can make further progress in this book, and I hope I can write a story that will satisfy everyone.

grateful!
Chapter completed!