Chapter 727
Isn’t Li Yuanlang a rookie?
Why not leave this important task to him? Since no one else can do it well, let him give it a try.
If Secretary Tang is still not satisfied, Li Yuanlang will be blamed.
Thinking of this, Shen Cong got lucky, quickly adjusted his mentality, tried to keep his tone as calm as possible, walked up to Li Yuanlang with the printed speech, put it down casually, and said: "Li Yuanlang, you just came to our department, you should also bear the responsibility." Part of the work. Take a look at this manuscript. Secretary Tang rejected it three times without pointing out anything wrong. You try to correct it and I will check it for you."
Regarding his little thoughts, how could Li Yuanlang, who had been immersed in officialdom for more than ten years, not see through it.
He couldn't refuse because he didn't have the capital to refuse.
In any sense, he only obeyed and had no resistance.
In addition, he didn't come here just to hang out. This goes against his principles of life and work.
Even though He Wei on the other side kept signaling with her eyes that he wouldn't let him take it over.
Li Yuanlang just turned a blind eye and picked up the manuscript and read it carefully.
Although we are in the information age, Tang Zhi still likes to print out manuscripts and read them instead of facing them on the screen. From this, it seems that he is still a conservative person.
This is a speech on anti-corruption at a district-wide cadre meeting.
To be honest, Fang Ruxian's pen is indeed solid, and the words and sentences used throughout the article are just right. On the surface, there are no major flaws.
It's just that when Li Yuan read it aloud, he always felt that there was something missing.
There are slogans, but there are also examples. Anyway, there is still a lot of practical information, but there are just a few missing.
After all, Li Yuanlang was once the Secretary of the County Commission for Discipline Inspection. He wrote all his speeches himself and rarely let the office pen take over.
When he read it for the second time, Li Yuanlang finally discovered the problem.
One of the passages reads like this.
We work in one place and one department, and the grassroots level can see the difference between credit and mistakes most clearly.
We must regard the people's support or disapproval, approval or disapproval as the ultimate criterion for measuring our work.
Everything should be based on the interests of the people, be down-to-earth, work hard, and keep the value orientation of serving the people throughout the entire process of governance.
At first glance, there is nothing wrong with this passage and the sentences are smooth.
But Li Yuanlang thought about it and added a sentence after "the grassroots see it most clearly", "the evaluation of the masses is the most fair".
Moreover, he also added a few more words about serving the people and the common people in some places.
Several topics about farmers were also raised in particular.
After finishing the revision, Li Yuanlang read it again from beginning to end. Suddenly, he felt that the manuscript had flesh and blood and was no longer so dry.
In less than half an hour, Li Yuanlang handed the manuscript to Shen Cong.
"Deputy Section Shen, take a look and I'll change it if it doesn't work."
Shen Cong frowned slightly, as if he didn't believe it, and his eyes were full of doubts.
No way?
Fang Ruxian struggled with himself for several hours, but still couldn't figure it out.
It only took Li Yuanlang half an hour to submit the manuscript. Is it possible that he was fooling me?
Full of doubts and germs, Shen Cong read the manuscript from beginning to end.
Hey!
Why does this feel different from before? Anyway, after reading it, I feel a sense of pleasure and majesty from top to bottom.
It's not as soft and fluffy as before.
The people below probably fell asleep a lot after listening to the speech.
Forget it, never mind, who knows if it will suit Secretary Tang's taste.
After Shen Cong thought about it, he asked He Wei to quickly print it out, and then went upstairs to find Li Kewei.
Li Kewei was also confused about this speech.
He knew Tang Zhi's temperament and temperament. As a secretary, he had been thinking about and studying Secretary Tang all day long.
When Li Kewei took over this manuscript, he made a few simple modifications based on Secretary Tang's previous characteristics, and then handed it over to Secretary Tang for review.
As a result, he was beaten back by Secretary Tang the first time.
Li Kewei took it seriously and told Shen Cong to ask Fang Ru to revise it as soon as possible, and Secretary Tang would wait for it.
Then it was the second and third time that Li Kewei lost all confidence.
He was worried, so he called Shen Cong over and gave him a few harsh words.
Now Shen Cong brought the manuscript for the fourth time. Li Kewei hadn't even read it yet, so he asked, "Did Lao Fang change it?"
Shen Cong's little eyes twitched and he didn't answer directly. Instead, he said, "Let's see how it goes first."
Li Kewei then set his eyes on the manuscript and read it carefully.
As he read, Li Kewei's frown began to look unbelievable.
"Shen Cong, tell me the truth, was this changed by Lao Fang?"
Shen Cong smiled and pretended to be mysterious: "Li Ke, not only Lao Fang can write manuscripts for our subject, but others can also write."
"Who are you referring to? You?"
"Li Ke, please don't worry about this. What do you think of the revision this time?" Shen Cong had a hunch that Li Kewei was satisfied with the manuscript.
"What I said doesn't count. I'm not the one who spoke." As soon as Li Kewei finished speaking, the phone on the table rang. It was Tang Zhi urging him to get the manuscript.
Okay, let’s give it a try and then talk about it.
Li Kewei gave it to Tang Zhi with the mentality of giving it a try.
Tang Zhi was equally serious, and he read it not once, but twice.
Then he put the manuscript on the table, nodded with a smile and said: "This is the proper attitude. The original content is too empty and has no sedimentation for the masses and farmers."
He pointed at the manuscript with his finger and praised: "Look at it now, how penetrating it is when written like this, it makes reading exciting, and it can also arouse resonance and have a powerful shocking effect."
"But, the first subject is pretty good. Lao Fang and the others need to improve their abilities like this. If you squeeze in a lot, you can squeeze out some useful information."
He also did not forget to give Li Kewei a few words of encouragement, "Under your leadership, the first subject has made great progress. A manuscript may seem small, but its impact is big. Keep working hard, I believe you can do it if you have the ability." better."
Being praised by the boss, this is more powerful than two pounds of chicken blood.
Li Ke was so elated that he went back and praised Shen Cong a few words and gave him a cigarette for the first time.
Naturally, it is impossible for Shen Cong to credit Li Yuanlang's account. The main point is that under his guidance, Li Yuanlang revised it again and again to produce this manuscript.
But he mentioned Li Yuanlang, and Li Kewei couldn't help but be slightly startled, "You mean, Li Yuanlang participated in revising this manuscript, wasn't Lao Fang?"
"Lao Fang is just having a bad temper, let's forget about it." Shen Cong said, "I'll let Li Yuanlang give it a try. He's a pretty good rookie, a little worse than me, but he can be trained. You can't count on everything in one subject. Lao Fang, someone new has to step up, don’t you think?”
"Yeah." Li Kewei nodded, but there was a strange feeling in his heart.
This feeling is very strange, I can't explain it, but it doesn't feel very comfortable anyway.
At almost the same moment, He Wei was persuading Li Yuanlang in a soft voice.
"Brother Li, I kept winking at you just now, why didn't you respond to me? Shen Cong, you have to be careful. If you make sugar or make acetic acid, it will be his. If you do well, the credit will be his. If you don't do well, it will be his fault. It's all yours. You shouldn't have accepted the manuscript. Secretary Tang has reviewed it. If you don't say anything about it, you've offended Lao Fang. No matter what you do, it won't be good for you."
How could Li Yuanlang not know, but he had no choice but to do so.
If you want to make a name for yourself, you have to show your fangs when you show off your edge.
In the officialdom, in addition to having connections, you also need to have your own abilities.
Otherwise, such people will not be able to go very far and will be eliminated early.
Regarding He Wei's kindness, Li Yuanlang smiled slightly and did not make any statement.
When Shen Cong came back, he had a bright smile on his face, and he could tell that the manuscript was passed.
He walked directly to Li Yuanlang, brought a chair and sat next to him, and said with a smile: "Li Yuanlang, you performed well this time. Secretary Tang will pass in one try."
Li Yuanlang was neither surprised nor overjoyed, and said calmly: "It's mainly due to Deputy Shen and Brother Fang. It's because you laid a solid foundation. I just filled in some trivial stuff."
"Hey, tell me, why did Secretary Tang pass it all in one go? Tell me about your thoughts."
Shen Cong completely turned himself into a reporter doing exclusive interviews, and he looked like he was asking for advice humbly.
Li Yuanlang hesitated, whether he should say it or not, and felt a little apprehensive.
Go ahead, show your trump card too early.
Don't tell me, looking at this, Shen Cong won't give up.
Chapter completed!