Mental journey
Yesterday I saw a book friend asking me if this was about a travel agency? I’m sorry to tell you, it’s not.
It was originally called "Stepping into Cultivation", but this name was not friendly to newcomers. Compared with the works of the same period, my name was extremely ordinary. So I changed my name.
The purpose is to attract strangers, click on it and take a look.
Because of the name change, I always have to draw the main plot to the travel agency, so I cut a large part of the plot. Experienced book lovers should know that after Yang Zhao comes out of Cangcheng, he should have accumulated upgrades to increase his own force value.
stage, so as to prepare for the next meteor shower, but in order to fast forward to get the key props, I cut off this part. As a result, she was also suffocating in the meteor shower, which made me very tangled in writing.
My writing skills are not good. It’s my first time writing and I have no experience. I can’t write anything exciting. The plot drags on rather slowly. In order to speed up the pace, I cut out the plots of many small characters, such as the Qian’s old shop in Cangcheng.
I owe him a scene. He has a father-son relationship with the watchman who was kidnapped by Fang Shuli. When he saw the good clothes, he was reluctant to destroy them, but selling them would not be good for the female tenant, so he took the clothes
To the father who is a watchman. His father works at night and no one can see him in these clothes. After the incident is over, he should go and apologize to Yang Zhao. Yang Zhao gave him a reward, and he took this
Reward Yang Zhao with money to apologize.
But no, I designed too many small characters like this. If everyone has his own behavioral logic, the protagonist will not be revealed. The number of words is too high if written, and the small characters cannot be given too much ink. For a book
As far as the book is concerned, they are just NPCs.
Why am I so worried about these little people? Because I am a little person in reality, and my actions are logical. I think very well when I am not writing a book. Although I cannot write good works, I will definitely let these people do it.
Everything has its own logic? But as soon as I wrote it, I realized that it didn’t work. There are only a few protagonists in a book. You can’t write out the logic of everyone’s actions, especially for a slow writer like me.
, if you don’t get into the main story quickly, no one will want to read it. I found that I still care more about the feelings of book friends who can read this book.
But I communicated with the editor. My editor is very nice. He said that changing the name cannot be reversed. Changing the name frequently is not good for the novel, but I don’t have to cut the outline all the time. If the name does not match the reality, then the name does not match the reality. First of all
Write at my own pace.
The luckiest thing for me was that when I was a newbie, I met a very good editor, Hua Jiao. She answered all my stupid questions impatiently and asked me to write at my own pace and not to be distracted by others.
about.
So it’s still the same question as above. I’m sorry, but I’m trying to make a fool of myself.
Chapter completed!