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end of book

The War of Gods and Demons ends here. The last chapter is a bit famous. Have you been scared?

The main line I set in this article at the beginning was the battle between the protagonist's forces and the abyss forces, but at the beginning of this volume, it was introduced a little late. Considering that it was just the main line of the war between gods and demons, it would be too monotonous, so I incorporated some branches into the main line, such as Sophia, Frost Elf, and Mindel Plane. Of course, some copies are foreshadowing for the future...

It is worth mentioning that the Frost Elf dungeon is an attempt made by me based on my previous experience. This relatively independent chapter is almost entirely written from the perspective of a player. I want to see how this writing responds. In terms of the result, it seems to be pretty good. Although some readers said it was a bit embarrassing to read, it seemed to have deceived many people into tears.

This also gave me some confidence, because the theme and writing of this book are too special, completely different from most other online articles, and the perspective changes, making me unable to determine my level at all. If the plot of the Frost Elf can be well written, it means that if I start a new book in the future, I should be able to control this kind of behind-the-scenes article from multiple perspectives.

Of course, there are also many flaws in that plot, such as it is in the midst of the explosion, which leads to more moisture, poor rhythm, and some descriptions of excessive sensationality.

Overall, the planned progress of this volume has been achieved.

However, there are also many dissatisfactions.

One is in terms of rhythm. I feel that I will gradually lay the groundwork, but the climax is still awkward, and I need to continue to think about it and continue to work hard.

One is the repetition of the plot and the use of words to make sentences. This is a big problem. I think the former is that when I conceived the plot, I did not open up my thoughts further, while the latter is simply accumulation. In order to solve these two problems, I think I should watch more things and recharge.

Another thing is that the character portrayal is too weak, templated and stereotyped, and some do not even have facial features, especially the protagonist, who is like a tool person, I think this is my worst part.

Overall, the more you write, the more you discover your many shortcomings, too many. Sometimes when you think about these shortcomings, I think it is really a miracle that everyone can continue to read...

Unfortunately, this book has been finalized. Let’s reflect in depth when the whole book is finished.

There should be two volumes at the end, according to the current rhythm... the number of words may be quite large. It depends on the progress of my writing. Although I have already thought about the main line and the ending, during the writing process, the detailed outline of each volume is written while thinking and improving, so I can't say the specific progress.

The secret of the origin of the world, the conflict between the protagonist and the gods, will be unfolded in the next volume.

I will try my best to tell you this story and to paint a magnificent fantasy world for you. I hope you can continue to support it.

In addition, there will be double monthly tickets next month. I hope everyone can vote for more monthly tickets next month. I will continue to make up for updates. The new book will definitely be the time when the literary thoughts are pouring out.

I haven't made up for the past few days. One is because I'm busy working days, and the other is because I have to think about the plot of the next volume, which is a bit stuck.

There is no way. Compared with the many tentacle monsters, I am still too disabled. I will write a chapter that everyone can read in five minutes.

The above is the summary at the end of the volume.

Thank you again for your support.
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