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As I said in my introduction, I am a big loser and have not been able to support myself since writing books.

Fortunately, my grades were not bad, and I could barely make ends meet.

Lao Mou is very grateful to all book friends for their encouragement and subscriptions, as well as various rewards.

Today, March 15th, is also my birthday, so I take the opportunity to summarize:

My style of writing is quite disadvantageous. I always dig holes first and patch them later. As a result, at first glance, I think it is too buggy or even poisonous, or it is too unsolvable, as if it is a dead end, and readers preconceptions that the author is not good.

Go away... emmm... I have been criticized twice for this book from the very beginning. I have been told by so many people that it will not be long and will be a hit on the street. I have lost count...

But I still persisted.

Some readers often compare me with platinum or even great authors, and then criticize me and say how bad my writing is (there are also some who sincerely offer suggestions, and I respond seriously and thank you very much). In fact, this is a compliment to me, and I really don’t have the strength and ability to do so.

Compared with them, I know how much better I am. I just want to make money to support my family. I try to learn from the masters, maybe I can catch up with them in the future? I still have to have dreams, maybe they will come true...

Let’s talk about a few points:

1. The pits dug: 1. Why did the disciples betray and surrender; 2. The end of lifespan; 3. Missing memories; 4. The upper limit of cultivation; 5. Three volumes of the Book of Heaven. These are all big pits. I have already figured out how to bury them.

.Some other small pits, such as the tenth apprentice and so on, have also been arranged. Please remind everyone else.

2. The character design of the protagonist is indeed not clear enough. But I have to say two points. First, I did not intend to portray him as a high-level character from the beginning. He is a master who wants to teach his disciples how to cultivate themselves and how to behave, so

It should be a little bit like Hong Qigong (I have watched the Demon Emperor of Flying Eagle, and I think it should not be too cold and arrogant like Master Chen. In addition, without the writing power of Flying Eagle, I have to settle for the second best and create a protagonist who is not so cold and arrogant.

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What’s embarrassing is that currently, the senior brother and second senior brother seem to be more successful than the protagonist.

Awkward……

3. Ye Tianxin, you can actually find the original version of what I wrote. This is based on Huang Yaoshi and Mei Chaofeng, and I won’t explain the result.

4. Identity (race), these are all based on the Classic of Mountains and Seas...such as Bai Min, such as Sanye, such as Bai Ze, most of them are from the Classic of Mountains and Seas, and I am not making them up. And I have expressed other things very implicitly.

The identity of the disciple. The Taoist Ten Links come from Taoist classics, various sealing formations, etc. Because I want to write the plot smoothly, I did not write it in the style of a book, which is more in line with my capable style (reader: dry and dry)

Mama Lai Lai, do you have the nerve to say capable?)

5. The main card. Because the strength has not been restored, I can only use the card. In fact, I still have magical powers. Secondly, when I wrote it in my hometown, there were too many clues, and the environment and inspiration were poor. As a result, the writing was a bit fragmented, and it seemed that the protagonist had no goal.

It feels like a passive trigger... This is related to my writing style. I didn't let the protagonist shout out. The hole dug is actually the goal. For example, the problem of looking for life span has been buried since I wrote about Bai Min. Riding

Living up to two thousand years old, etc., but the protagonist has a card, so it is useless whether the protagonist wants to live or not, but think about it, what about the disciples? They will die of old age sooner or later... And why has no one broken through the Nine Leaves?

The target issue will become clear after the battle with Gong Yuandu. The battle between the two of them...e, hahaha, I thought no one would be able to guess it.

6. World view, this has never been revealed. Because I am too lazy to explain the realm of cultivation and maps. In addition, the writing is relatively concise, and the foreshadowing rhythm is short and brisk. I did not write those things, otherwise these current plots can only fill two million words.

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7. Gain merit. In fact, I didn’t explicitly write that this can’t be done and that can’t be done. Instead, it was said to be various bugs and the protagonist has a low IQ. In fact, it is implicitly expressed in many places that you cannot gain merit. For example, Ming Shiyin said that it is not possible at all.

Know how to do good deeds; for example, there is no merit in the second kowtow of a compassionate person; for example, the river beast in the sky does not touch ordinary people (ordinary people have no merit) and then become low-level practitioners and below without merit. There are many such problems, I blame me for writing

It's not detailed enough, so I'll try to improve it. After all, I'm new to writing, so I'll work harder to improve it in the future.

8. The writing skills are lacking, I think. For example, the fighting is not written like a turn-based system. Some of it may be because I feel good about myself. Secondly, some game settings are quite inconsistent (in fact, most of this has been changed.

), many details were not taken care of. Try to focus on the story in the follow-up and downplay the data. If you have any opinions, feel free to mention them and give me a chance to write a book review...
Chapter completed!