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Let’s talk about the plot.

First of all, with only 800,000 words, you want to rush to see the finale? To be honest, you can't do it. Besides, he now has the Book of Heaven. Although the restrictions are large, it does not prevent him from being invincible.

The protagonist has ten apprentices, and he must catch them one by one. They are not stupid, and they need some means. Their cultivation level must also increase step by step, and they must even be stronger than at their peak.

Secondly, right now, the world view is not activated at all.

Some readers are so impatient that they want to reach the sky in one step. They want to grab all the 800,000 words and get the ending quickly. It would be more comfortable to just write the word "end" directly. The protagonist is invincible in the universe, Zhu Honggong, Zhaoyue

, Duanmusheng, what do you want them to do, are they holding you back? My level is limited, but I don’t believe that high-level “platinum authors” dare to write such a plot.

In addition, I think the plot needs to be coherent.

What you think is a small theater, you jump to the bottom, but in fact there is no foreshadowing at the top. If you look directly at the bottom one, you will feel very bored, so you will feel that it is useless, and then it will be a vicious circle, because you directly skip the foreshadowing.

... Just like Chapter 2 that was just updated today, how could Yu Shangrong chop down the rosette and rise to the nine leaves without stepping on the bones? He just slashed at the jade altar with his sword? Isn’t that considered mentally retarded? Would a normal person slash at himself with a sword?

Right, what happens after cutting it off? Being seriously injured and promoted to Jiuye for no reason? You need something... So if you don't read these two chapters, you will see directly later, wow, the second senior brother is Jiuye... and then after finishing it, he will curse: That's it.

Nine leaves? Silly than the author, nine leaves is so simple?

When the second senior brother came back, the reading was very high (it was lower when he wrote Shuntian Yuan, but if there was no Shuntian Yuan, the second senior brother would have already failed in thinking about it). Now when he writes about the Great Witch, many people don't want to read it, which leads to complaints.

and abandoned the book, but there will definitely be a wave of ups and downs in the follow-up, and they will scold me when I write about Senior Brother... because they ignored this part of the foreshadowing...

Uncomfortable with mushrooms.

I hope I can be more patient. I remember that I used to read books every day and it became a habit. Isn’t it nice to read something every day? Reading is just for comfort.

Finally, and an important point, it would be best if piracy can support the original version. After all, there is no data, so I really have no motivation to write it down, but I don’t force it. The original version is the most important thing to support the author’s progress. At most, it can be done in one day

It only costs a few cents for a month to read my books and smoke a few cigarettes, but this is my livelihood!

There are more than 4 updates every day, and sometimes there are only 3 updates when I am really stuck. I can’t compare to the big guys with incredible hand speed, but I can update it steadily. I have been in bad shape these past two days, so it is inevitable that my mood will be affected a bit, and I also have to write characters.

It's obviously not as interesting as before (I just want to push the pace quickly and write what the readers want to see, causing the originally interesting characters to immediately change their faces). If you feel that this chapter review is not pleasing to the eye, just think that the author is farting.

I'm really sorry.

I also hope that all brothers and sisters will support me, thank you.
Chapter completed!