Modification status
Last night, I saw some comments from book friends and looked carefully. The chapters that entered the eyes of the ice and fire were indeed seriously reduced in Chapter 73. I made a modification. I hope everyone will see if the protagonist’s reduced in intelligence has been improved after the modification. I hope to add more comments.
Then today I may update one or not, because in the past two days, I have to think about how to change it to be better. As many book friends said, my operation suppressed the protagonist too much. I really didn't think of this at that time. I just felt that this place was a major crisis moment in the early stage of the Oscars and had to be beaten hard. This will make the idealized ambitions of the early stage of the Oscars become more practical and step-by-step.
However, I am not particularly interested in the book friends’ thoughts about the mirror shadow intestine.
The first year is too low, only 20,000 years. This makes me a little useless as a protagonist who needs tens of thousands of yuan in the fourth soul ring. It’s tasteless to eat, but it’s a pity to throw it away. My original idea was that when the finals, the Oscars would reach level 50, but if you don’t hunt the fifth soul ring, the focus of the soul fighting competition will always be on Tang San.
The second effect is a bit unworthy. You can think about it. A sausage that only maintains the effect for three minutes requires one-third of its soul power. Oh my god, it would be fine if you prepare in advance. If you prepare on the spot, you really can't stand it. If you don't get the other party's Oscar in one or three minutes, it's so uncomfortable.
The third my fourth soul ring is a sausage that I want to replace with the mirrored intestine. The effect will be similar to the ultimate skill of Lol Silas, which will make the Oscar's changes even more weird. (Of course I will increase the price he pays to achieve balance)
If you don’t recommend me to raise this 20,000-year soul ring, I might consider adding it.
Alas! Actually, the most uncomfortable thing is that my manuscripts are all scrapped. It is better for newcomers not to leave too many manuscripts. The ability to control the articles is not necessarily enough. Of course, I also hope that when you read the articles in the future, you will be more tolerant to me. If you really can't stand the poisonous death, it's okay to leave me a last word (talk more about poison and vomit less fragrance).
Of course, I don’t like to be influenced by readers when writing novels. I will read and think about the suggestions you give. If there is indeed a problem, I will just say it and modify it. But I don’t think the problem is big. Besides, I will skip the chapters of the emotional drama that I write in awkward love drama. I don’t want to give up writing emotional dramas because of awkward love dramas. I have traveled through Douluo. I also write a single heroine, and I always feel uncomfortable all over. Especially for the character Bibi Dong, I am really annoyed, thinking about it physically, but if I really dare to accept it, I am afraid that I will die of poison and be entangled.
As for those who say that it is better to return it to the original character than to open a harem, I just want to say that he is a scumbag, and I am also a scumbag. They are all toads who want to eat swan meat. Why do you want to give it to? Is it because a toad is even uglier? You have to give it to that beautiful toad?
Chapter completed!