On the day when the filming team of Wanhe Duoyu and the desert island survival quartet set out.

After studying hard for a week, Zhang Yang finally wrote the second version of the script.

For this script, he learned a lesson and did not accept Liu Ming's help again. Instead, he relied on his own ability to write a simplified version of the script.

That’s right, Mr. Pu’s special skills!

Just write the summary of the story!

Don't ask, I just don't want to write everything.

Of course, the publicity this time is for Mr. Pu to read it first. If the story is suitable, he can then deepen it. Then, based on his own story, he can just ask other people in the department to help complete a few details.

Last time they worked hard to come up with a good script, but Mr. Pu rejected it directly, and they felt uncomfortable for several days.

Especially Mr. Pu’s last request, which was to include the plot of aliens invading the earth, directly scrapped their last script.

The kernel is completely different, so it has to be rewritten.

"Dong dong dong~"

"Enter!"

Zhang Yang and Liu Ming came to Mr. Pu's office for the third time. Zhang Yang took a thin piece of paper and handed it to Mr. Pu.

"Mr. Pu, this is a script I wrote."

Mr. Pu felt happy when he saw this number of words.

"Well! Judging from the appearance, there is progress!"

As a senior novelist, Mr. Pu naturally knows that the more words in a novel, the more interesting it is. Especially when writing a new book at the beginning, there is no problem in having more words. You can delete and delete only the essential content and leave the rest in the end.

Some parts are condensed into a few sentences to leave suspense for the future plot. In short, there is definitely nothing wrong with having too many words.

If the number of words is too short and the author is reluctant to delete every word he has written, how can he revise it?

Mr. Pu looked at the A4-sized script handed over by Zhang Yang and felt that it was stable this time.

Zhang Yang is back again.

Familiar scrawled script, dealing with official matters.

'It seems that my last suppression was very effective on Zhang Yang, and it is probably about to break.'

If a carefully written script is directly rejected and then rewritten, any screenwriter will be extremely uncomfortable, not to mention that the time is very tight.

Mr. Pu took the script and started browsing it.

Movie name: "Alien Forbidden Zone"

Story content: Alien spacecraft descended on a certain area of ​​the earth, and then began to invade the earth. Human beings and aliens continued to rub against each other. The place was called the alien forbidden area. The protagonist Da Zhuang is a reporter who cares about his hairstyle very much. He feels that human beings

Both the aliens and the aliens are intelligent beings, so they should shake hands and make peace, then go to the alien restricted area alone, start a vigorous relationship with the aliens, and finally sway the aliens with their emotions, allowing them to leave the earth and become two civilizations

Ambassador of peace between.

over.

Mr. Pu:(°ー°〃)

Seeing Mr. Pu's expression, Liu Ming behind him was shocked.

broken!

As soon as Liu Ming saw Mr. Pu's look, he knew that Mr. Zhang's script must be finished.

He had read it before coming here and felt that it seemed like he was writing nonsense.

The collision between two civilizations actually stopped fighting by relying on one person to fall in love?

Where is the logic? Where is the law of heaven? Where is the law of darkness?

This is really a romantic drama in the guise of science fiction. What is the difference between it and the hot TV dramas on the market now that talk about romance in the guise of fairy tales?

In the end, he became an ambassador of peace, which was outrageous!

He felt that Mr. Pu would never want them to shoot something like this.

Now, Mr. Pu’s attitude is the best proof!

'Oh, if I had known better, I would have advised Mr. Zhang to write a new one. It's my fault that I didn't do my duty as a deputy.'

Silence, long silence.

Pu always expected that Zhang Yang would write simpler this time, but he didn't expect that Zhang Yang could only write these words after holding it in for a week.

It’s not enough for his usual 10 minutes of coding!

And this plot.

"puff!"

"Hahahaha! Zhang Yang, you are such a fucking talent! I really saw you right! You can write this script!"

Zhang Yang asked slightly nervously: "Then Mr. Pu...do I pass the test or fail?"

Mr. Pu clapped his hands: "A real hit! This movie will definitely be a hit after it is made! Just follow this direction! Don't change the main content at all, and then in terms of details. You must keep my four requirements in mind, and shoot like this

Come out. It will definitely look good!”

Zhang Yang has to take action himself!

This ability to write stories can be achieved with Dachun at 55.

What rubbish story?

From the short summary of the story, Mr. Pu has seen several poisonous points. If he writes such a novel, he will be thrown into the street!

First of all, aliens invade the earth in spaceships. Why do they have to stay in one place? It is also called an alien restricted area? Can't they fly and fight at the same time? They have to conflict with humans on the ground, right?

If this were written down, readers would directly criticize it as "depressing one's wits"!

Secondly, the role of individual power in racial wars is too small. The so-called relationship changes the world. I am afraid that this content can only appear in the Mary Sue TV series. If this movie was shot like this, it might as well be called "Alien Love"

"Fuck Me"! Maybe it can attract a group of young girls to go to the cinema to watch an interracial love!

If they were promoting a science fiction film, this content would definitely be sprayed to death.

As soon as the main story line of this movie came out, Mr. Pu seemed to see Douban waving to him with a score of 4.0.

A complete piece of shit.

When Mr. Pu said this, Liu Ming, who was blaming himself behind him, almost couldn't breathe.

(°ー°〃)

Mr. Pu actually gave such a high evaluation???

At this moment, his view of screenwriting was subverted.

Zhang Yang breathed a long sigh of relief: "I was scared to death. I almost thought I was not satisfied with this script. I stayed up for several days for this story and lost a lot of hair before I came up with it. It can definitely be done."

fulfill your requirement!"

Mr. Pu nodded with satisfaction: "Okay, I can see that you tried your best."

Sometimes, whether you can do something well or not has little to do with your attitude, it depends on your strength.

For top gangsters like Zhang Yang and Dachun, their strength ceiling is almost there.

Mr. Pu continued to explain: "When shooting, we must remember not to ask for the best special effects, but to ask for the most expensive. There is a little bit of cheapness in the expensive, so that the audience cannot see that we have invested so much money. It is best! Yes!

In order to give the audience some different experiences in terms of special effects, it is best to bring some physical discomfort."

The plot is disgusting, and so are the special effects!

The first step is to rely on the script, and the second step is to look at the shooting and post-production.

If these two points are well controlled, a bad movie can turn out to be great.

Faced with Mr. Pu's request, Zhang Yang waved his hand and asked Liu Ming to record it.

"Okay, Mr. Pu, then this film is decided like this?"

“It’s a deal!”

Although Mr. Pu didn't know how "Shanghai Fortress" was filmed, all the elements for a hit were gathered together. Even though the plot was different, the result was the same.

He suddenly remembered what a celebrity in the film and television industry said in his previous life: "Good movies have basically the same success story, while bad movies have the same bad tricks."

Discussions on the script have basically been completed.

Zhang Yang asked: "Mr. Pu, who are we looking for as the director of this film? The one we shot last time was Wu Ma. I don't think it's good. After all, he makes urban drama films and has never been exposed to the science fiction category. Although there are

We have two brushes, but that’s all we have, why don’t we find a director who is good at making science fiction films at home or abroad? Anyway, we have enough budget!”

With a total investment of 360 million yuan, as long as they are willing to pay, well-known science fiction directors in the industry can be invited to come over.

Mr. Pu’s eyes lit up!

"Okay! Then let Wu Ma do the filming! I think your view of people is too narrow. Doesn't it prove that you can't do it if you haven't filmed it? Is it right that this has been the case since ancient times? I saw Director Wu from the first time

From that day on, I felt like the light of science fiction was shining in his heart!"
To be continued...