Hello everyone, I am Beer Dolphin.

I'm a little excited and embarrassed to call myself a temporary pen name like this, but more importantly, I'm excited - it's time to take the initiative to chat with everyone for a while.

This book has been serialized so far, with 144 chapters and 330,000 words, and I have finished the first volume. To be honest, it is longer than I thought.

In the beginning of these 300,000 words, I am constantly learning and pondering, trying to polish this story to be more like what I imagined.

And during this process, I intuitively felt the pressure brought by the results and popularity at the starting point - as an author, I naturally hope that the stories I create will be read by more people, which will inevitably lead to conflicts with

Grades are tied.

Therefore, you can probably read that I made many subtle attempts. My initial description was to create some sense of lens, but because the writing power and rhythm control were not very good, it seemed very slow and very slow.

It's lengthy. After I could see the results intuitively after putting it on the shelves, I spurred myself to make some more changes. Later, I even saw that I wanted to mix in some upgrade elements.

These attempts may not be successful. I must apologize to everyone for those parts that even I don’t feel good about after trying them, and I must also thank everyone for their tolerance of continuing to read.

There are some things that I don’t understand. The mix of skill mechanisms, equipment and game content looks weird and boring. I have to say that this is too normal and I’m sorry - I haven’t thought about these contents clearly, and I don’t want to really think about them.

I spent a lot of energy and ink describing these contents, because from the beginning, I felt that this should not be a book that lists calculation values ​​and drives for equipment and treasure hunting.

So, what kind of book should this be?

It's on the game channel. Readers who don't have many game fans have finished scanning the lol fanfics, added some articles about the cool equipment system, clicked on the book and closed it - the content they want to see is not here, even if

There were some sporadic attempts, but they were also shoddy and failed to live up to expectations.

It is not that straightforward and closely follows the hot mainstream. A lot of the text is not about the protagonist, and there is no happy and joyful element such as the system issuing tasks. The camera changes frequently, and the reading is correspondingly much more detailed.

Is it a fictional historical deduction? No, at least the layout design is very simple, because I know how much I weigh, and if I am not good at something I don’t like, I will definitely not be able to write well, so it doesn’t have that flavor.

In this way, although I avoided some of the weird pitfalls of online articles, I inevitably walked into many other forks. After filtering through the layers, I found that there were still living people watching and interacting. It was really gratifying and humbling.

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If my interest is maintained, then this book will be of great significance to me and will be of great help to other books I want to write in the future.

There are still ninety-nine and eighty-one difficulties in obtaining scriptures from the Western Heaven, and Han Dongwen is the whetstone I most desire. I want to learn more from this book while retaining my own characteristics, so that I can produce better stories in the future——

It may not be Han Dongwen’s story.

Well, those who give me this opportunity to learn and improve are the readers who keep reading and subscribing (bow)

After finishing the book, in addition to discovering problems, I also often think about what makes me attractive.

The narrative is fairly smooth (I think)?

The character creation is quite three-dimensional and quite likable (you think)?

The plot doesn’t have any silly bubblings (I think)?

Then I will write a story about beast control in my next book. Golden Finger is about making dishes to evolve pet beasts, eating hot pot to evolve in the direction of flames, and so on. I can also write about gourmet food. How happy it is to think about it, hahaha.

Okay, the above is nonsense, this is just the beginning of this book. I want to make a guarantee here. I will adjust the parts that everyone thinks are average and boring, and work towards a direction that makes it comfortable for me to write and comfortable for everyone to read.

After all, when upgrading the alt here, learning skills, etc., I directly wrote a mask of pain for myself, and had to rely on the whole winter tearing fist to adjust myself, which is really inappropriate.

Thank you all for your support. I was supposed to have a holiday after finishing the first volume, but as a newbie, I wanted to try out full attendance, so I will continue to update from Thursday.

Please look forward to the next content of "It's broken, I'm a fool". If there are any recommended monthly passes, please buy more, and you can feel more of everyone's encouragement!
Chapter completed!