Chapter 186 The final draft and Wang Xue's reminder
Li Da just asked casually at first, mainly because he didn't really want to ask Luo Dongqing why he asked this question, he just wanted to express his shock.
However, seeing Luo Dongqing's eyes dodge, Li Da felt that something was wrong.
Play the erhu, why are you shy?
Then, he quickly understood.
The corners of his mouth raised slightly, revealing a smile that made Luo Dongqing panic.
"why are you laughing?"
Luo Dongqing said fiercely, but Li Da bullied him, scaring Luo Dongqing so shy that he took half a step back. He looked at Luo Dongqing and said slowly: "I find that I like you more and more."
"You, you, you..."
Although Luo Dongqing had been told this by Li Da many times, this was the first time that the two of them were face to face and in a separate room. She heard her own heartbeat, as if playing a drum.
Li Da took another half step forward, and Luo Dongqing subconsciously closed her eyes, not daring to look at him.
In this way, it seems that he is ready to be kissed by Li Da.
Li Da originally didn't want to do this. After all, this was Luo Dongqing's home, and Wang Xue and Tang Youyou didn't know where they were yet.
But Luo Dongqing looks like he is willing to be picked by you, who can withstand this...
Li Da put his hands on Luo Dongqing's shoulders. Luo Dongqing seemed to realize what was about to happen, and his whole body tensed up.
"holly……"
Tang Youyou's voice suddenly came, accompanied by the sound of knocking on the door. Luo Dongqing was startled and quickly pushed Li Da away.
"May I come inside?"
Tang Youyou's voice came from outside the door.
Luo Dongqing ran over and opened the door. In fact, the door was not locked and could be opened from the outside.
"What are you doing?"
Tang Youyou asked. Luo Dongqing then remembered that she had been here for a long time and even played an erhu. No wonder Tang Youyou came here.
"nothing."
Luo Dongqing said in a panic, Li Da had no expression on his face, but he was complaining in his heart, "Do you look like it's nothing?"
Sure enough, Tang Youyou immediately asked: "Why are you blushing?"
"It's very hot. I just played an erhu for Uncle Da."
Luo Dongqing's explanation was very reluctant, but Tang Youyou didn't dig into it, just said: "That's it, it's a pity that I didn't hear it."
"It's okay, I can do it again."
"No, no, no, let's go study first."
Tang Youyou held Luo Dongqing's hand and said with a smile. Then, naturally, they went back to the study to continue studying.
Looking at Luo Dongqing's manuscript, Li Da also felt very confused.
This is indeed the best version Luo Dongqing has written so far, but it is still a little short of Li Da's requirements.
Li Da has been an editor, and his review ability is no worse than that of a Chinese teacher. This is considered good, but not excellent.
Just a little bit different.
"You're still not emotionally invested. This story is actually good, but it still doesn't express the emotion well enough."
Li Da took a look at this story. It was a very common story about lovers who failed to get together due to the interference of their parents.
It's a very clichéd plot, but the more clichéd it is, the more royal it is.
It is precisely because of the royal way that many people write about it. When more people write about it, it becomes commonplace.
The only way to stand out from the many similar writers is to write your own novel ideas and express your own feelings. It may not be the best, but it will make people's eyes brighter.
However, Luo Dongqing's manuscript failed to do this, mainly because it lacked emotional rendering and failed to arouse the resonance of others.
Luo Dongqing drooped her head, about to enter autistic mode.
Li Da did not give up yet. He reminded: "Just write according to this framework, but imagine that you are the protagonist of this story."
Luo Dongqing followed what Li Da said and began to imagine that she was the protagonist of the story, and then...
She was completely absorbed in it.
She thought of the scene where she and Li Da were beaten by her father, and almost shut herself up. Li Da thought she was just feeling the protagonist's feelings, so he reminded him: "You can start writing.
, grasp this state of mind.”
Luo Dongqing nodded and began to write quickly.
In order not to affect her state, Li Da did not make any sound when explaining the topic to Tang Youyou, but just wrote what he wanted to write on the paper.
"You have to be flexible in your thinking. As long as you see through the intention of the person who asked the question, it will be easy."
Li Da once again taught the secret to see through the intention of the person who asked the question.
This is the key to winning the exam.
Tang Youyou: "I think the person who asked the question just wants me to die."
An hour later, Luo Dongqing finally finished writing the composition, but when Li Da looked at her eyes, there seemed to be tears, and he was shocked at that time.
Did you move yourself to tears?
This is also a common thing. If the author's writing can't even impress himself, let alone impress others.
But Luo Dongqing's huge reaction still made Li Da very curious, what did she write?
When he took it over and took a look, Li Da's expression changed slightly.
The heroine of the story has a rich family, while the hero is a very poor but outstanding person. They also have a female friend in common. The heroine and the hero were eventually forced to separate from the hero due to family reasons, and then the hero...
Got together with that female friend.
emmmm, Luo Dongqing, are you also a Bai scholar?
Li Da complained crazily in his heart, but it had to be said that Luo Dongqing finally succeeded.
She probably wrote it based on her own feelings.
No wonder it's so sad.
"The writing is good, I can pass it."
After Li Da finished speaking, he put down the manuscript.
Luo Dongqing did not look happy, and was still in a very depressed mood.
Tang Youyou also curiously took Luo Dongqing's manuscript. After reading it, she looked at Luo Dongqing's expression a little complicated.
But he didn’t say anything, he just sent the manuscript back.
Li Da's mission has now been completed. He looked at the time and saw that it was already half past nine in the evening.
It's almost time to go back now.
He had no intention of staying at Luo Dongqing's house. He would only do this if Luo Dongqing really couldn't write. If Luo Dongqing could finish it, then there would be nothing for him to do if he stayed.
Might as well go back and code.
Luo Dongqing didn't try to keep Li Da, but just asked the driver to see Li Da off.
As for Tang Youyou, she was left behind by Luo Dongqing.
"I'll give it to you too."
After Li Da got in the car, Wang Xue also got in the car.
Li Da had no objection to this. He guessed that Wang Xue had something to say to him, so she came to see him off specially.
As he expected, Wang Xue said shortly after getting on the bus: "The boss told me that he plans to let Dongqing transfer to Junsha, probably in the spring of next year."
Li Da: "..."
Chapter completed!