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After 66 days of posting, I wrote more than 270,000 words, and finally I am about to be on the shelves.
This book will eventually be released during the Sanjiang recommendation period. Thank you for your support for me all the time.
Let’s talk about some problems encountered during the creation process.
What was the study of flintlock rifles in ancient times, and the technology of climbing was too outrageous, and why guns could not be used when they entered the world of immortal cultivation.
Many book friends are confused about these things, which I was unexpected.
I don’t know how many years you have been reading. In my image, more than ten years ago, there were too many time travel novels about climbing technology and sweeping the world. No one said it was unreasonable. I just omitted the corresponding process.
As for why guns cannot be used in the world of immortal cultivation, I think every novel of immortal cultivation can issue such soul-questioning.
Why? Because I wrote a novel of cultivating immortals. I set it this way. If the real technology series of weapons can be used in the world of cultivating immortals, it would be that Li Fan would continue to reincarnate, create a torrent of steel, and reverse the world of cultivating immortals. That is another story.
There are many small problems like this, maybe because I was not careful, and I didn’t expect that readers can argue to this point now.
However, in general, it is not a big problem.
The one who really had a fatal impact on the structure of this book was Li Fan's first time to come to the world of immortal cultivation and found that the world of conglomerations changed. This process was too short and too urgent.
My original outline was like this.
Li Fan came to Liuli Island with great difficulty and worked hard to join the fleet.
Then he fought with Zhang Haobo and relied on the treasures that sank into the sea water in advance to steal the captain's position.
After that, the Spirit Pond washed away all the immortal miasma, and a few years later, he came to Wanxian Island.
After working on the island for a while, I finally saved up enough contributions and changed to a water-attribute exercise.
I thought that since then, I had a smooth journey of cultivation, but I found that within a few years, the water-attributed spiritual energy between heaven and earth became increasingly rare.
The speed of cultivation is getting slower and slower.
The entire sea of clouds was blocked, and they were allowed to enter and not leave.
Panic spread among the monks and the killing gradually began.
Li Fan had no choice but to escape from Wanxian Island and hid in a remote island.
Later, as the sea water dries out, the seabed is exposed. Li Fan wakes up and understands the reasons for the differences seen in the past and next two lives.
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In the meantime, I originally planned to write at least one hundred chapters.
Just like the first volume of the Lord of Mystery, only after making enough preparations can the reversal be revealed.
But I had to change my attention halfway through.
Because you may not know that when this book was 100,000 words, it only collected more than 100 copies.
Even if you try the water and push it, you can't get it.
If you really follow the original outline, you will die.
So I had to speed up the progress and the reversal was completed in more than 40 chapters.
Although the results began to improve after that, they were still a little bit less meaningful.
The same thing is said, it's too urgent and too hurrying.
Many flaws were inevitably caused, such as the underwater treasures are too new and are not like treasures hidden in the sea.
But I can only try to make it as much as possible.
The second problem is that the Xuanhuang Refining Heart Curse shortened the charging time of [Real]. When it was set, it was not experienced enough, so it was directly reduced by 11 years.
This also led to me having to fill up these 11 years before I could continue the plot of the previous life.
This has long caused many readers to report slow progress.
Because I am not just writing about this life, I also have to consider burying the thread for the plot development of the next life.
These two issues I think have had a relatively large impact on the structure of this book.
The others are all trivial details and have little impact.
Let’s talk about several issues that have more feedback from readers.
1. The protagonist's cultivation has improved too slowly.
This book is not a traditional upgraded monster-killing article. In addition, the protagonist practices hundreds of times, so a lifetime of practice is useless to him.
2. The protagonist's cheating is too big.
I only ask one question, the protagonist's current skill configuration will raise his realm to the immortal realm. Is he the opponent of the Heavenly Lord of Dharma?
Even the Tao you practice is left for you by others, how can you fight?
So the hang is not big enough, so you have to continue to open.
3. [Really] The foundation-building issue.
[It's true] It is transcendent beyond the world and involves the law of time. It is definitely impossible to build the foundation in the early stage.
Please wait and see how the protagonist should be used to build the foundation.
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Next are some instructions.
I am indeed a newcomer, not someone's vest.
So I'm sorry for the writing style.
I will work hard to improve myself, and I hope everyone will encourage me.
My job is good, so I won't be miserable.
Most of the writing depends on interest.
He is a part-time job and a novice. It is really difficult to write 4,000 words every day for more than four hours.
Maybe your brain will get faster in the future and your typing efficiency will be higher.
The so-called writing carries the truth. There is a paragraph of the first lesson of He Zhenghao's cultivation of immortals that day:
["Some peaks seem to be tall, but in fact their fate has ended and cannot go further in their lifetime. Some are just small slopes now, but how can they know that they will not grow into a pillar supporting the sky in a few years?"
"Just like the Shaowei Mountain under your feet, it was inconspicuous at all that day, but in just a few decades, I could see all the mountains small."
"Of course, it is like countless peaks under the sea of clouds, and can only serve as a foil from beginning to end, silently looking up at the mountains above the sea of clouds."
"The mountain is still like this, is it true for people?"]
This sentence is also for me to hear.
At that time, the book collection was not yet broken. There were thousands of books from the same period.
I can only encourage myself in this way.
Now, with everyone's support, the results of this book are better than those of most books of the same period.
Thank you again.
Thanks to my friends who have been voting and rewarding.
Thanks to the editor Whisk for his continuous help.
It will be released at 12 o'clock tomorrow, and there may be a few minutes delay.
First, I will release three chapters in a row, and I will add two chapters later to the evening.
If you think this book is pretty good, please give me a first order.
Chapter completed!