Chapter 104: The Advantages of Online Papers
Fan Ziruo stared blankly at the title of the book written by He Yunxiao, and was a little unable to react for a moment.
Why can a colon appear in a book title?
Can the title of the book also be in vernacular?
Defeating the Martial Arts Leader only occupies a very small space in the book. Can this also be used as the title of the book?
Fan Ziruo looked at the title of the book written by He Yunxiao, and then looked at the title of the book written by herself, "Qing Ping".
Although she still thinks "Qing Ping" is better, looking at He Yunxiao, she suddenly has the urge to open the book and read it again. Even though she has read it several times and still remembers many plots in the book, she suddenly
I want to open the book and take a look.
Seeing her expression, He Yunxiao knew that his goal had been achieved, so he said: "Zi Ruo, bystanders know better. How about we ask Miss Du to take a look?"
Fan Ziruo, who was full of confidence just now, became a little unconfident now. She said: "Okay."
Fan Ziruo held two pieces of manuscript paper with the title of the book in his hand, and walked side by side to Du Yinyun's residence with He Yunxiao.
Sister Du is still the same as before, playing the piano, reading and doing embroidery all day long. Only when He Yunxiao is not around, will she occupy Fan Ziruo for a while and talk to her good sisters.
One of the embroidered handkerchiefs she was going to give Fan Ziruo had already finished, and the second one was still being embroidered.
The embroidery style was specially chosen to suit my sister’s temperament: “Lotus after the Rain”.
However, judging from the pattern embroidered in Du Yinyun's hand, this "Lotus after Rain" only has "Lotus" and no "Rain".
If she is as smart as she is, she will never miss the "rain" in the embroidery. On the contrary, the "lotus after the rain" without rain is the real stroke of genius.
Du Yinyun moved a chair and sat under the eaves. There was a bamboo basket on the stool next to it. The bamboo basket contained various needles and threads needed for embroidery.
Lotus flowers were embroidered on her hands, and there was an unconcealable smile on her lips.
I really want to see my sister "rain"...
After all, it is "Yu He"...
Fan Ziruo led He Yunxiao to Du Yinyun's residence. Standing a little further away, he called out: "Yinyun."
Du Yinyun heard Fan Ziruo calling her and was about to get up and tease Sister Fan a few words. Before she could speak, she saw He Yunxiao next to Fan Ziruo.
Sister Du kept her good young master in her heart every day, thinking about it in her dreams, and she would never forget his instructions.
Seeing He Yunxiao was there, she put away her plan to fight with Fan Ziruo, and her temperament became cold. She put down her needle and thread, stood up and slightly saluted He Yunxiao. There was a natural sense of distance called "coldness" in her every move.
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She bowed slightly and said, "Mr. He."
He Yunxiao returned the courtesy and said, "Miss Du, we meet again."
Fan Ziruo saw that the atmosphere was like this, so he stood between the two "estranged" people and explained to He Yunxiao: "Master, my sister is a little more indifferent. She is like this to everyone. She is neither cold nor hot. Don't take it to heart, Master."
superior."
He Yunxiao: "Apathy".
Du Yinyun: Why did my sister call me "Gongzi"? It was obviously me who called her first.
He Yunxiao replied to Fan Ziruo: "It doesn't matter, it doesn't matter. I've heard about Miss Du's character a long time ago."
He Yunxiao deliberately did not mention "I met Chunfeng Tower" to get closer. Firstly, he did not need to get close to Sister Du. Secondly, Chunfeng Tower was not a good memory. Talking about other people's sad things for no reason was a bit serious.
Fan Ziruo quickly got to the point. She handed the two pieces of manuscript paper with the title of the book into Du Yinyun's hands.
"Yin Yun, there are two books here. Just looking at the titles, which one do you like? Which one do you want to read?"
Du Yinyun looked at the two book titles in her hand, then looked up at Fan Ziruo and He Yunxiao. Then she pointed at "Qingping" and said, "I like this one."
Du Yinyun's choice made He Yunxiao a little surprised.
You didn’t choose my colon article?
If you think about it carefully, it makes sense. Sister Du's literary level is second only to Fan Ziruo, which is very high. It's normal to look down on vernacular book titles.
The two said goodbye to Du Yinyun, and asked several literate maids again. This time, just as He Yunxiao had predicted, the maids all chose colon writing.
The two of them returned to the study side by side, Fan Ziruo's expression was not good-looking.
He Yunxiao said with relief: "Zi Ruo's name is indeed good, but it is a bit elegant. Elegance also has the advantage of elegance. Don't you like it very much, Miss Du?"
Fan Ziruo said: "Young master, I don't understand. My sister is very smart. She must have realized that I came up with the title of the book, and chose this title deliberately to take care of me."
This made He Yunxiao a little embarrassed.
Everyone chooses themselves when it comes to relationships, and no one chooses Fan Ziruo.
After all, Fan Ziruo is also the most talented girl in Yin Jing. She has only reached the first level of teaching online writing, and her confidence has already been destroyed.
Confidence is a very tangled thing for the author.
Too much confidence will make people unable to listen to suggestions and make them arrogant; insufficient confidence will make people timid and the articles they write lack vigor and arrogance.
Therefore, a good author must retain humility and arrogance at the same time, which is difficult.
He Yunxiao, looking at Fan Ziruo who was feeling a little depressed, put the two manuscript papers with the book titles on them again in front of her.
"Zi Ruo, you 'Qing Ping' have achieved very well."
Fan Ziruo raised his head and looked at He Yunxiao seriously.
He Yunxiao said again, ""Qing Ping" is really good, even much better than the book's original title, "Taihu Swordsman Record".
Fan Ziruo's eyes were shining brightly. She looked at He Yunxiao seriously and listened to his tone. No matter how she observed his expression or distinguished his tone, no matter how carefully she observed it or how many times she distinguished it, she could only conclude that
came to a conclusion - He Yunxiao really thought so.
[Fan Ziruo’s favorability level changed from 75 to 75]
He Yunxiao:? Here you go again? What’s going on? The favorability score is 75?
Fan Ziruo looked at He Yunxiao with soft eyes and said, "No one likes the title of Ziruo's book, so why do you still say it is good?"
He Yunxiao put the system aside and turned to reply to Fan Ziruo's questions seriously.
"Zi Ruo thinks the title of my book is good?"
Fan Ziruo hesitated for a moment and said, "Okay."
"What a fart!"
He Yunxiao suddenly started swearing, which really shocked Fan Ziruo.
"Zi Ruo, you are the most talented woman in Yin Jing and the teacher of Lujiao Academy. With your level, do you really think the title of my book is good?"
"So many people like the title of Young Master's book, so naturally..."
He Yunxiao grabbed Fan Ziruo's hand and said, "Ziruo, where did your confidence and arrogance go?"
"I……"
"Zi Ruo hopes to be recognized by more readers. This is true, but in order to blindly cater to him, do he have to throw away his most basic judgment?"
"Zi Ruo, let me tell you, my book title is very successful, but it is not good at all! It is not useless, on the contrary, it is very useful and easy to use. But even so, I still feel that it is not good at all.
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"Zi Rui, think carefully about why I said that."
Fan Ziruo looked at He Yunxiao holding his hand, his face was a little red, and he pretended that he couldn't remember any strange "differences between men and women". He just pretended not to see it.
She said: "What I want to say is that the author needs to know what is good and what is useful. There is no conflict between the two."
He Yunxiao smiled and said: "Yes! Don't you want to write a book that others like to read? Okay, you can write it. What is the prerequisite for writing it? You know what they want to read."
Fan Ziruo pretended to take over He Yunxiao's words casually and said, "What novels does the young master like to read?"
At this moment, He Yunxiao looked solemn, like a loyal believer.
Chapter completed!