sixteen happy
It’s been a long time since I opened a single chapter,
It’s been one year since I wrote the book, and I’m quite bald.
This book is constantly updated, and I haven't even used the free leave request every month. There has been no interruption for a single day since I opened the book. Of course, the number of updates is also very few.
No more monthly tickets.
I still owe several bills and haven't paid them back, which is really embarrassing.
It’s not that I don’t want to update, I have always written as much as I can under the premise of ensuring quality. After all, I have already suffered a loss in the previous book. Until now, I still want to modify some contents of the previous book: it was originally a three-line parallel,
Because of the later updates, it became a double line, ignoring the pair of Xiao Yu.
Although there doesn't seem to be anything wrong with it, only I know that it has lost its better presentation.
I really don’t want to make the same mistake again with this book, especially as the more people watch it, the greater the pressure.
Then the thinking cannot keep up with the hand speed.
In fact, dozens of chapters ago, I was thinking about whether to focus on storytelling or entertainment. Of course, this has always been a light-hearted novel, but if I want to keep the story complete and smooth, it must not be done at the same time.
Too much ink is spent on paragraphs, and the story needs to move forward. If you stay at a certain stage for too long, those who are following it may not feel it, but if you read it in one breath, you will inevitably feel some aesthetic fatigue.
It can also be treated as a daily comic, with some small stories all the time. In this case, the completeness is abandoned. After all, even if the main plot is not promoted, just two people in the room without shame can still write an endless number of words.
(Speaking of which, I would like to recommend the two comics "Poor Father and Daughter" and "My Emperor's Bazaar Black", they are super good)
But now that I have thought about it clearly, the main plot must be promoted. After all, it is a novel, and the most important thing about a novel is that the story is complete and smooth.
As for suggestions... I actually don’t recommend giving too many suggestions, because a book already exists, and all I need to do is write it out.
Both the plot direction and style were decided before the first chapter was written.
Readers have different tastes. If you change it based on one suggestion, other people may not be satisfied, so they can only write their own.
After all, I am the one who eats this meal. Even if I write about it later, I still blame my lack of ability. If I really listen to someone’s random changes, who will I blame? I can only say that I deserve it, right? I have always known this.
Some people like Return of the God of War, some like the hot-blooded boy Thirty Years of Hedong, some like the little widow in the mountain village...
If you don't like it, it may be because you don't like it, rather than because it's poorly written. In fact, writing a book is a process of constantly screening readers. With such a long book, there may be something you don't like. After all, everyone has different tastes, so you can't point fingers.
The author of The Son-in-Law of the God of War asked others to change it and said you can't twist your mouth. That's too weird.
If you don’t like it, I can only say it’s inappropriate, just like the one who insisted on arguing with me earlier that there was a virus and the heroine had to die within five hours, and the one who said that more than a thousand years of time would superimpose and turn into a skeleton... that’s it
It's simply inappropriate. Don't force me to study viruses.
It's inappropriate to mention it, and some people said that Da Qingzi's ex-girlfriend was a scumbag.
This is even weirder.
What is the purpose of falling in love? Marriage, besides that, there is also the purpose of "trying everything", otherwise why not just go and get the certificate? What's the point of falling in love, right?
I obviously feel that I am not suitable for each other in the relationship. When nothing happens, the two of them get together and get away easily. This can also be called a scumbag.
Do you have to wait until everything happens before breaking up, or do you have to endure the quarrels every day after getting married and then divorce to be called a scumbag?
Co-author A person can only be called a scumbag if his first love lasts until the end, right?
If you feel that you can’t understand it, then swap the genders. A man who earns several thousand dollars a month, regardless of his own ability, buys his girlfriend bags worth thousands of dollars, clothes worth one or two thousand dollars, and gives her gifts. Is that good for her? OK.
Do you want this kind of man? You do.
Is it suitable? It depends on personal preference.
A woman who only wants to live a stable life must feel that it is inappropriate and she would be a scumbag if she breaks up with her? That would be too insulting to the word "scumbag".
Maybe many people have never seen how terrifying it is when a partner has a conflict and only sheds tears and bangs his head against the wall and pulls his hair. My friend has seen it.
My friend would rather be whipped or beaten with fists like Xiao He Miao. Xu Qing also made the same choice. Everyone has different preferences and choices.
At this time, it comes back again. It is simply a question of whether it is suitable or not. There is no right or wrong. This is also the reason for most breakups in life, not cuckold cheating - just read a novel and don't be so bitter.
Deep.
Some people say you can just stop writing this stuff, do you have to write it in such a disgusting way?
Some people also think that the single heroine is disgusting. If you don’t write about this, don’t write about that, just put down the pen and be done with it.
That's not what happened.
Reality may not follow logic, but novels have their own logic. It is inappropriate for an innocent boy who has never been in love to fool a girl from being innocent to getting under the covers.
According to Xu Qing's character, in the process of getting along with his ex-girlfriend, and for a long time after the breakup, he must have reflected on it more than once,
It was this long period of review that allowed him to understand what was appropriate, what was important, and what he wanted. Only after he discovered his own feelings later did he become the master Qing who acted decisively and patiently waited for the little seedlings to grow.
This person, it’s not that I set him to be a genius, he is a genius, and then he completely serves the plot. Otherwise, what’s the difference between adding a system to ding him?
Some people like unreal beauty, and some people like reasonable things. There is no need to scold me for this.
There are also those words that Jiang He said when he was growing up, changes and so on. If you understand Xu Qing, you will know that this is not pretentious, but he said it to Jiang He on purpose.
Or maybe it’s for Jiang He in the future.
As for some other questions...
Like when Xu Qing deceived Zhou Suzhi for the first time, Zhou Suzhi didn't believe that there were still people who had wandered since childhood. Some people said that I was floating in the clouds. I said:???
Is it true that Zhou Suzhi, a housewife, must be omniscient and omnipotent to lead her family to resist aliens and save the earth?
Some people said that I promoted violence and promoted butter, and they cried.
For these few friends, a little reminder, there are a few tips for reading novels, which can effectively enhance the pleasure of reading:
Distinguish between the character's point of view and what he says in a book, the book's point of view and what he says, and the author's point of view and what he says.
These three are really not the same thing.
As for the extra, it is an activity of Qidian. It can only be seen on Qidian. It seems that it is not available on other platforms. After all, this is the first website.
Go back actually means the same thing, "If you had it to do over again, would you still choose your current life?" It can be seen as having nothing to do with the text, or it can be seen as related, it doesn't matter. The other one is also for people who have always been passive.
When Jiang He took the initiative, some people said he was Teacher Jiang He. It was completely different, right?
Teacher He has always been restrained and has been burdened with too much, while He Miao has no restraint at all and can destroy Xu Qing...
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Nowadays, everyone likes to read something light-hearted and pleasant, so this book is very light-hearted... Although the previous book was also light-hearted, from the first chapter to the end, there was always a sense of depression from the past and present life, which was faint and lingering.
.And using six to seven hundred thousand words to prepare a confession is quite tiring to write.
This one is completely relaxing.
The pace of the follow-up may be a little faster, but the main plot will not change. If possible, I would also like to write about children. The ancient small grain seedlings were completely assimilated by the core values of modernism, and even despised Xu Qing in turn.
Relax when you like it, and save a few chapters when you're busy. There's not so much desire to express before you suppress it.
Just take a look and it will be fine.
Due to the daily update, sometimes I have to reduce the number of words, which seems a bit long-winded, so I apologize here.
Thank you for liking what I write.
Chapter completed!