"You started wrong!"

Ogata stabbed the first line of the first page of the first draft with his finger.

"Didn't you say before that you spent several months collecting information before writing this script?"

"'Ogata Ittosai Fusuki has a shaved head. He has long hair.'——This level of information can be found out by just asking around, right?"

As soon as Ogata finished speaking, Nishino Jiro nodded confidently:

"I know, I know Ogata Ittosai doesn't shave Tsukiyo's head, he keeps his hair long."

"Since you know that, why did you design Ogata Ittosai in the script as a 'handsome man with a shaved Tsukiyo head'?"

"Because Tsukiyo is more handsome."

After saying that, Nishino Jiro lowered his head and showed his shining head to Ogata.

Nishino Jiro's hairstyle is Tsukiyo.

At this time, there happened to be a few beams of sunlight shining into the room through the window, hitting Nishino Jiro's clean-shaven head, reflecting a slightly dazzling light.

"Compared to the general haircut, the Tsukiyo haircut is more popular with everyone."

"So in order to make everyone like the Ittousai I wrote more, I changed Ittousai's hairstyle to a Tsukiyo hairstyle."

Nishino Jiro's words can be said to be well-founded...

During the Edo period, the most popular hairstyle that people considered to be the most masculine was the Tsukiyo hairstyle.

Since time traveling, Ogata has been living in this era for more than a year.

Although he has lived for such a long time, Ogata still can't accept the Tsukiyo hairstyle, which requires shaving all the hair on the top of the head...

Ogata couldn't tolerate having such an ugly hairstyle.

At the same time, we cannot tolerate anyone changing him into this.

So he immediately said to Nishino Jiro righteously:

"You can't do this."

"Didn't you just promise me yesterday that you would complete a work that would surpass "Lord of the Loyalty"?"

"In order to pursue the authenticity of the characters in my novel, I was specially invited to teach you Izumo accent and Izumo customs."

"Anyone who has a certain knowledge of Ittousai's deeds knows that the hair left by Ittousai is the total hair."

"Wouldn't it be equivalent to destroying the authenticity and completion of the work if you randomly change Ittousai's characters like this?"

"Maybe it will also attract abuse from some people who respect Ittousai."

Hearing what Ogata said, Nishino Jiro showed some hesitation on his face.

"...Okay then." Nishino Jiro nodded, "I will correct this later and change Ittousai's hair back to full hair."

After seeing that he had successfully persuaded Nishino Jiro to change his appearance in the script, Ogata nodded slightly with a satisfied look, and then continued to read the first draft in his hand.

Ogata read very quickly and quickly read through the first draft of the book written by Nishino Jiro.

When Ogata formally read the first draft of this book just now, he did not speak during the whole process, and just turned the pages in his hand expressionlessly.

Because Ogata has been slow to speak or express his opinions, Nishino Jiro, who has been waiting for Ogata's opinions, has been nervous and anxious.

After Ogata closed the last page of this first draft, Nishino Jiro couldn't wait to ask Ogata.

"How was it? What do you think?"

"...It's really just like what you said to me yesterday..." Ogata showed a wry smile with a hint of helplessness, "Every character in your works doesn't speak like a real person.

Yun people are more like Northeastern people."

"We Izumo people wouldn't say things like, 'Be careful, I'm going to cut you?'"

"And every character in there is eating the wrong food."

"I saw a scene in your first draft where Ittousai and his fellow swordsmen went to eat 'Wanko Soba' together."

"There is no 'Wanko Soba' in Izumo."

“We Izumo people all eat ‘Izumo soba’.”

"'Izumo Soba'?" Nishino Jiro asked doubtfully.

At this time, A-Machi also turned his curious eyes to Ogata.

"It's a special delicacy from our Izumo area." Ogata said slowly, "First, divide the soba noodles into three bowls in small bowls called "toroko". Each of the three bowls has different ingredients. The ingredients that are used the most

It’s raw eggs, mashed yam and mashed radish.”

"Pour the soup into the first bowl first, then pour the remaining soup into the next bowl and continue eating, and so on, until you finish all three bowls of soba noodles."

"It feels delicious." Nishino Jiro's eyes flashed with curiosity and excitement.

After Nishino Jiro's words fell, A-machi who was on the side also expressed her thoughts: "Can you divide the soba noodles into 3 bowls to eat...it feels so fresh."

Ogata has actually never eaten "Izumo soba".

Since he traveled to this era, he has actually only stayed in the Hirose Domain of Izumo for more than half a year.

I traveled to this era in May last year, and then broke away from the feudal clan at the end of the year and started traveling around the world.

In the past half year, Ogata has not had much opportunity to taste these Izumo delicacies.

However, "Hara Ogata" has eaten some Izumo delicacies including "Izumo soba", so Ogata has the memory of these foods.

"Except for some problems with the character dialogue and these living habits and customs, the writing is pretty good."

As Ogata spoke, he handed the first draft back to Nishino Jiro.

"It basically matches what I heard about Ittousai's deeds."

In Nishino Jiro's script, Hanyu I, the young man based on Ogata, is a lower-level samurai of the Izumo Hirose Domain.

He has superb swordsmanship, but due to his humble status, he has been living a poor but stable life.

The current lord of the Hirose Domain is a cruel and unkind tyrant. Although Hanyu I has a humble status, he has always been worried about the future of the domain and sympathized with the citizens who were tortured and devastated by the tyrant.

Until one day, the tyrant let Hanyu I's fellow swordsmen kill each other just for fun.

Hanyu I's brothers refused to obey, so they were all brutally killed by the tyrant.

Also killed was Hanyu I's swordsman.

Hanyu I happened to be away from the sword hall due to something else, so he escaped.

After learning that his master and brothers were all massacred, Hanyu I decided to take revenge and assassinate the tyrant.

After dormant for a period of time, the best time to assassinate finally arrived - when the tyrant went out hunting.

Hanyu I went to assassinate him alone, killing hundreds of the tyrant's guards, and finally succeeded in killing the tyrant.

The above is the outline of the first draft of the script compiled by Nishino Jiro.

"...You have collected all the information quite well."

Ogata crossed his arms over his chest, lowered his head slightly, and then whispered in an unusually calm tone:

"Even... we have found out the information that the masters and brothers of Ittousai were massacred by the tyrant and the reasons for their massacre, and it is also very accurate."

"As far as I know, the brothers of Ittousai were indeed coerced by the tyrant to kill each other, and then they were killed because they refused..."

Although there was nothing strange about Ogata's expression and tone, Amachi still unconsciously cast a concerned look at Ogata beside him.

"Humph." Nishino Jiro, who didn't notice Atachi's little move, smiled proudly, "I still spent a lot of effort to complete this script."

"But there are still some inaccuracies." Ogata smiled and shrugged, "The last part is a little inaccurate."

"As far as I know, Ittousai did not assassinate the tyrant by himself."

"He was with a companion at the time."

"Oh?" Nishino Jiro's face showed doubts and curiosity, "I would like to hear the details!"

Ogata told Nishino Jiro the real historical facts.

The elders of the family participated in that assassination, and they eventually went to the front line. There were seven assassins, including Ittosai, who assassinated the tyrant.

But in the end, only Ittousai survived.

After hearing this version from Ogata that he had never heard before, Nishino Jiro's eyes widened in surprise.

"I have indeed heard of the theory that members of the Hirose clan were involved in the assassination before."

"But Ittousai had other helpers at the time... This is the first time I've heard of this..."

"Anyway, before I left Izumo, a widely circulated saying in Izumo was that Ogata had six helpers at that time." Ogata continued, "At that time, for the convenience of calling me, and to avoid developing feelings, they all

Just use code names like 'Ichiro' and 'Erlang' to match each other."

"So the other six assassins who died during the assassination did not have their names passed down."

"Did Ittousai have any other helpers at that time..." Nishino Jiro's eyes rolled, and the excitement in his eyes became more and more intense, "Everyone stabbed together, and after a fierce battle, only one sword was left.

Did Zhai Renyi survive..."
To be continued...