"No, like you, I come from an urban background. I thought about it carefully and found that our books are slightly similar."
After hearing what he said, Yun Shuqian was also a little curious.
She knew that Song Jiamu's last book was about immortals. She had also written about immortals before, but her results were poor. After all, it requires writing skills to create a world, and urban backgrounds are naturally more immersive and more suitable for novices.
Song Jiamu also sat up straight, took out his laptop from his schoolbag, put it on his lap, and opened his own document.
Unlike Yun Shuqian, he does not write daily articles. He has a clear main line and upgrade route. At this time, an outline is needed, and the world view and other things must be made in detail.
"Look, I have created an outline, world view and upgrade route of more than 30,000 words."
"..."
Yun Shuqian, who had never written an outline or world view, felt inferior. For the first time, she felt that Song Jiamu was much more serious about something than she was.
She tilted her head curiously like she did when she was a child. The two of them were so close that Song Jiamu could easily smell the fragrance of her hair.
"About thirty years ago, the rules of the world were rewritten, and human history underwent tremendous changes. Human beings who were originally distinguished by hair color, skin color, nationality, and gender suddenly had to be distinguished by completely different indicators.
Let’s make a distinction.”
"That is, races that are no different from humans in appearance, but have decisive physiological differences between each other - vampires."
"Is he a vampire?" Yun Shuqian blinked and asked.
"Yes, today, vampires can be seen everywhere. Family members, neighbors, colleagues, lovers, all of them may suddenly turn into vampires and attack others one day. This is the world view."
Song Jiamu continued: "Since the appearance of the Vampires, various changes have taken place in the world, such as the Human Relief Alliance. They believe that the Vampires are the evolved form of humans and actively promote the human rights activities of the Vampires. They are considered radicals, and there are also plutocrats behind them.
Supported by other forces, there are also hunters. They believe that vampires are Category A disaster creatures and advocate their elimination..."
"The most fundamental contradiction is that vampires are originally ordinary people, and it is a phenomenon that can happen to anyone at any time. This makes the problem very difficult. No one wants to be wiped out as a pure disaster, so at this time...
"
Song Jiamu talked about his world view and power settings. Yun Shuqian felt dizzy listening to them, but he had to admit that he was very detailed in these settings.
It wasn't until Song Jiamu started telling the story he wanted to write that Yun Shuqian became interested.
"This is the background of the story. Of course, it will unfold slowly. The story begins with the mutation of the protagonist."
Song Jiamu is not just a newbie anymore. Writing the first three chapters of a web article is very important. If all of them are set up, it will definitely be a hit.
"The male protagonist suddenly mutates one day, and then the female protagonist comes to him as an inspector. Her job is to observe and record all his changes. During such days of living together, the relationship between the two deepens. This is the emotional line, and the main line is the female protagonist.
Guide the male protagonist into this new world. The male protagonist is actually a unique born vampire. This is his golden finger."
"The main line in the early stage is the daily research on how to mutate and control vampires, plus the daily relationship with the heroine, and then gradually come into contact with a more mysterious world. One of the core research items is called 'blood inhibitor', which can inhibit the urge to suck blood.
Even healing, this is a major event that changes the world and ignites the flames of new strife."
"Oh... I probably know your story." Yun Shuqian nodded.
Song Jiamu's writing is still relatively mainstream. I have also read some popular male videos with simple stories, such as mysteries and so on. The daily chapters in the front are also very interesting, and the story unfolds slowly.
"Then what do you think?" Song Jiamu asked.
"Well."
Yun Shuqian thought for a while: "I can't give you any advice on the world view, but I think the emotional line is a bit thin."
"I can't write the emotional lines well." Song Jiamu admitted that although the last book was about the fairy harem, it was just for fun, and the emotional lines were not written delicately.
"Have you ever considered changing the heroine's setting?" Yun Shuqian asked.
Song Jiamu blinked: "Do you have any suggestions?"
"Even in mainstream male-channeled online articles, the emotional line is very important. The icing on the cake can also leave a deep impression on people."
Yun Shuqian said: "How about you try that the female protagonist is actually the ex-girlfriend of the male protagonist. Under such a strange thing, the two of them live together again."
"Eh?"
"The female protagonist is not an inspector. She didn't know she was going to monitor the male protagonist at first. Only when she went there did she realize it was that guy."
"Then why did they break up then?"
"Hey, because the heroine is also a vampire. She mutated before and her future is unknown, so she broke up with the hero. But the hero doesn't know the reason. The heroine has always liked him."
"Because the female protagonist is also a vampire and has experienced mutation. In this process, she can be the guide of the male protagonist. Therefore, in the days of unexpected cohabitation, there is not only the daily research of the vampire mutating to control, but also the daily relationship between the two of them colliding again.
, so there are some different elements. For the development of the love line, you can try this, it is very awkward at first, try not to contact each other, treat it as work, and then slowly reconcile, and start to calm down from the most familiar stranger.
We get along with each other, helping the male protagonist go through the most painful stage of mutation, and experience a new world together. In the end, they become an inseparable part of each other, and the emotional line is much fuller."
After listening to Yun Shuqian's suggestion, Song Jiamu held his chin and thought seriously.
After a while, he made a fist with his right hand and clapped it with his left palm: "Wonderful!"
"With the collision of emotional lines, the daily daily chapters in the early stage will not seem boring. The heroine can also serve as an outpost for the hero to contact the new world. How wonderful!"
Seeing that he readily accepted his suggestion, Yun Shuqian also felt very proud. He turned on the kettle and drank two gulps of water.
Song Jiamu was so lost in thought that his mouth was a little dry. After she finished drinking, he took her water bottle and drank some water.
Yun Shuqian's eyes widened, she slapped him a few times in embarrassment, and grabbed her own water bottle.
"Why are you drinking with your mouth? It's disgusting!"
"Didn't I drink like this before... Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't pay attention."
He drank from the air before, but this time he drank directly into the mouth of the kettle, which happened to be where Yun Shuqian had just taken it.
I don't know if it was because of her saliva, but Song Jiamu felt that the saliva was very moist.
Yun Shuqian hid the kettle, glared at him, and said, "Then do you still write about the harem in this book?"
"Originally... I didn't plan to write it. Of course it would be a single female protagonist!"
"So, are you sure about the reconciliation between your ex-boyfriend and his girlfriend?"
"I have too much experience in this. Aren't we just making peace now?"
"Well, that's right...who is your ex-boyfriend and ex-girlfriend! Stop talking nonsense!"
Although the bench was very long, Song Jiamu and Yun Shuqian were sitting very close to each other at this time, with their shoulders touching each other. It was not until they reacted that Yun Shuqian calmly moved her buttocks and pulled with him.
Keep some distance.
Song Jiamu quickly typed on the keyboard to record the inspiration he just had.
"Have you thought about the title of the book? What about the names of the protagonist and the heroine?" Yun Shuqian asked.
"I haven't thought about the title of the book yet. As for the name, I can just generate it with a name generator. It will be easy to remember and easy to pronounce."
"..."
"How about the title of the book is "The Day I Became a Vampire with My Ex-Girlfriend". What do you think?"
"I think it's not as good as "Becoming a Vampire and Living with My Ex-Girlfriend", which is more reminiscent of Pianpian."
"Aunt's blood?"
"...You don't have to tell me your perverted thoughts."
"Hey Yun Shuqian, did you notice it?"
"What?"
"You are good at writing about daily life and emotional lines, but I am not good at it; I am good at writing about settings and worldview scenes, but you are not good at it; I am a man and my writing style is more refreshing, and you are a woman and my writing style is more delicate. Let's communicate like this
, learn from each other's strong points and make up for their shortcomings, find out what is missing and make up for the shortcomings, and become one, wouldn't they be invincible in the world?"
"Please be careful with your words, classmate Song Jiamu."
Song Jiamu was right. The two of them have obvious advantages and disadvantages. What they are good at is exactly what the other person lacks. Compared with chatting about books online before, when they talk about books face to face, they gain more experience, and they hit it off immediately.
a feeling of.
Yun Shuqian picked up the kettle again and took a sip of water.
Suddenly I remembered that he had just sucked it!
So the saliva in her mouth was neither swallowed nor spit out. Seeing that he didn't seem to care, she secretly swallowed it.
Before I drank it, I felt that the exchange of saliva was disgusting, but after drinking it, it seemed natural, my heart beat a little faster, and I even tried to taste it to find out what the difference was.
It wasn't until she drank it that Song Jiamu reminded him: "I just vomited some in it, I thought you wouldn't drink anymore..."
"Go to hell!"
The girl's face suddenly turned red.
"Hey...don't fight, don't fight...didn't you say there are three important things in this meeting, and there are two more?"
Yun Shuqian took all the water from the water bottle to water the flowers, and then said: "The second item is our next club activity. It has been twenty days since the last club activity."
"May Day?" Song Jiamu could guess the time of her next event with a tactful mind.
"Yeah, I just have five days of vacation, I've thought about it!"
As for the previous activity plans, they were basically never implemented. It was all her decision. This further strengthened Song Jiamu's intention to seek power and usurp the throne.
"Are you going to the haunted house again?"
"No, let's go further this time."
Yun Shuqian said: "It just so happens that the place where my new book is based is Suzhou and Hangzhou, so on May Day, let's go to Hangzhou to collect stories!"
"I want to code on May Day..."
"Let's go for three days... no, four days is fine."
"I want to code on May Day..."
"I'll go on holiday on the 30th, and then come back on the 3rd. I think I'll take the high-speed train to get a nucleic acid report. Then we'll do the nucleic acid test on the 29th."
"On May Day, I want..."
"what did you just say?"
Yun Shuqian looked at him in surprise. She was already looking forward to a new club activity. She hadn't left Sunan to play for a long time, and she was excited just thinking about it.
Of course, this is the same as last time, it’s still about collecting styles. Look at how much you gained from collecting styles last time. Both of their new books have magical elements.
"It's nothing. I said the weather is fine on May Day, suitable for going out and playing."
"You're not going to have fun, you have to write an activity report."
"What about one more thing?"
"Today is the twentieth."
Yun Shuqian said: "It's time to follow me every year."