Chapter 311 Blood Pressure Is Up (2/3 Ask for a Monthly Pass)
"Isn't this a debut? Brother Qian, you have released a lot of songs and even held your own fan meeting."
"Yang Qian is very popular. How many hot searches has he made since last year?"
“His songs are often on the music cloud search rankings!”
Huo Bo, who had changed his tune, and several other players who knew Yang Qian, complained about Yang Qian's modesty.
"Actually, I haven't debuted in the strict sense, because I haven't appeared on any show or released an album."
Yang Qian smiled helplessly.
He actually knew that these contestants who liked his songs had no ill intentions, but he wanted to keep a low profile, but in the end he was roasted by them.
"It's not like I made my debut just because I appeared on a show! So, if I appeared on "The Future of a Star" the year before last, that means I made my debut? But I am also a second-time traveler, and I am not even famous. No one knows me when I walk on the street.
, compared with you, Yang Qian, you are far behind."
Dong Huanyu spread his hands and complained in a sour tone.
"The Future of Stars" is an idol talent show. Like many idol talent shows, there are many trainees competing together. Dong Huanyu has learned professional music singing at the conservatory, and his vocal performance is also good.
It's okay.
But after all, he lacked some dance skills. Dong Huanyu was eliminated in the second round. Later, he returned to the company and continued to be a trainee. He also took on some online variety shows one after another, trying to find some opportunities to become popular.
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He didn't really know him when he walked on the street, but Dong Huanyu still gained some die-hard fans because of "The Future of a Star".
And before Yang Qian came, even though he was the most experienced among the dozen or so contestants currently gathered to participate in the blind audition, Dong Huanyu felt that he was the one who received the most attention...
The arrival of Yang Qian and the fact that he is now so popular made him somewhat disappointed.
But fortunately, Dong Huanyu was just a little bit jealous and didn't want to be Yang Qian's enemy.
After all, Yang Qian is too strong!
In fact, Dong Huanyu is a very smart person. From the very beginning when he got together with Hobo and greeted Yang Qian, it was obvious that he wanted to make good friends with Yang Qian.
"Yang Qian, I actually wrote some original songs. Can you please help me read my songs?"
Dong Huanyu moved a chair over and sat next to Yang Qian. When he was free, he came over and wanted to ask him about music composition.
"Okay, are you going to sing an original song on stage?"
Yang Qian couldn't refuse, so he took his phone, plugged in his headphones, and asked.
"Yes, to tell you the truth, I actually appeared on "The Voice of Chinese" and I didn't dare to think about winning the championship. I know how much I weigh. My main purpose is to promote and showcase my work to let more people know.
People like my work.”
Dong Huanyu spoke frankly in front of Yang Qian.
He is really smart. He knows that being secretive can make him appear to be scheming and can easily be feared by others. However, he is so frank. Yang Qian really has a good impression of him.
Of course, original singers still have to let their works speak for themselves after all!
After Yang Qian nodded to him, he began to listen carefully to the song he asked him to listen to.
This song is called "Leaving Home".
Looking at the title of the song, everyone knows that it is a song about longing for hometown.
While listening to the flickering prelude, Yang Qian scrolled through the software's lyrics and subtitles, wanting to see how Dong Huanyu's lyrics were written.
For him now, what he is best at is not composing, arranging, and original creation. He may not be very sure yet, but writing is his own specialty. Therefore, every time Yang Qian listens to a song, he is always fascinated by it.
I want to read the lyrics first.
The lyrics are very straightforward, and the rhyme level is not good in Yang Qian's opinion, because the rhyme is "I," over and over again. Although the rhyme at the end has changed, the words "year, think, far" are used.
, at this rhyme level, poems written by elementary school students may be better than his!
There are also some incomprehensible words, such as "sanctimonious". Can this word be used on himself? To express his perfunctoryness and impatience with his parents, using it casually and nonchalantly, Yang Qian feels that it is more in line with the context.
But are the lyrics of the song just a matter of one or two words?
Yang Qian felt that there was something wrong with the entire poem. Even the first part of the poem seemed quite emotional to Yang Qian, but the latter part was filled with some incomprehensible sentences and vocabulary just for the sake of rhyme and complaint.
Of course, later when Yang Qian heard Dong Huanyu start singing rap, he understood why there were so many meaningless moans and sentences without clues.
Understanding does not mean understanding!
What the hell!
I want to throw away my cell phone for you!
After seeing too many amazing works with lyrics, Yang Qian can't stand or listen to such works!
But he couldn't help but read on...
When someone sincerely asks you for advice, you can't say that the other person is useless, right?
You still have to choose some good ones to talk about and give the other party some positive encouragement.
for example:
Emotions are sincere - they all straightforwardly analyze that they deceived their parents and broke their hearts, so they are not sincere?
Express directly - speak plainly throughout the text...
And...no more!
Yang Qian couldn't think of anything else to praise, because he really couldn't listen to this song!
Not to mention the lyrics, even the singing skills, Yang Qian can find many faults.
His breath was erratic, he was panting heavily, and he felt like his headphone was about to jump out of his earphones and onto Yang Qian's hair.
The switching between falsetto and true voice is very stiff, just like a boy band with several people singing, each in a different tune.
The articulation... Yang Qian didn't know how to complain about this articulation!
He felt that the singing was messy.
Even in some raps, he didn't sing all the words in the lyrics. Several words were sung together into one sound, and he couldn't hear clearly.
The most outrageous thing is that the words "Mom and Dad" are in the rap, but Yang Qian heard him singing "Dad"!
Although he tried his best to turn around, Yang Qian felt that his tongue was tied...
Singing skills!
It seems that Yang Qian sent Dong Huanyu to Bowen School of Jincheng Middle School and asked him to follow those children and learn singing skills honestly for a few years before letting him come back.
What is "A Good Chinese Voice" at this level?
Yang Qian is very confused now. Dong Huanyu asked him to give guidance, but he didn't know how to give guidance tactfully.
"How is it? Is it not well written? Is it a problem with the composition? Or is it the lyrics? Teacher Yang, just say it, it's okay!"
Dong Huanyu asked with some anxiety when he saw Yang Qian's frown.