There are too many problems with this book, and I am going to stop updating it. If it cannot be revised, I will not put it on the shelf. I will apply to finish the book.
So I’m sorry to those of you who are still reading and who have helped me with Zhang Tui in the past!
Let’s talk about the problem.
1: The setting is too complex, the world frame is large, and there are many elements. Although I try to control my desire to talk and not reveal it too early, the title of the book actually reveals some content, causing the early opening to not correspond to the plot and background that readers expect, resulting in
If you have poor expectations, you will also lose the sense of expectation. This is probably the reason why there are too many books to read and too little to follow.
Two: The author may have stayed in the period of writing martial arts novels, and did not write the feeling of Xianxia. Moreover, the trend of Xianxia seems to have changed a bit now. The weird flow of Xianxia obviously dominates the flow. The ancient Xianxia and martial arts started.
The subject matter seems cliche and it is difficult to open up the situation. Here I have to say that I am good at playing the role of human brother. The previous book "Gou Zai Shen Wei World" made me fascinated, but it is a pity that Kacha was cut... Oh, God
However, it also led to Gou Xiuliu, and many books followed suit and achieved very good results.
In addition, the problem with the writing is that it is not simple enough, that is, the writing is not simple. It is best to use simple language as much as possible. Yesterday, I was criticized by readers. You wrote "觳觫", "suddenly", "suddenly", suddenly these words are not at all
I know it, it’s uncomfortable to watch, and I don’t want to watch it.
Okay, I admit it, I may have written too much about martial arts and haven’t corrected it yet. Next time I’ll write more clearly.
Three: There are problems with the plot. In fact, in terms of plot, this book is already too craftsmanship. This is the fourth version. The three previous versions were all other golden fingers, but because the golden fingers are too
It's complicated, so the plot doesn't go smoothly. I'll just use simple panels as the basis and focus on the plot. But maybe Low Wu is a calculation between the dynasty and the emperor's grandson. Compared with the elder who cultivates immortality and reincarnates, the pattern is too low.
, so the sense of expectation is not strong, and the problem becomes huge.
In addition, if you change too much, you will lack a kind of aura and passion, and naturally you will not be able to write anything good. So sometimes what you think about with all your heart is not as good as a quick decision.
Even if we design many long-term lines, world views, and power systems, it will be useless because the gears meshing in the front are not aligned with the track, and if we want to enter the track behind, we have to take many detours.
Four: Time is too rushed. From finishing the last book to opening this one, I have been in a hurry. I originally planned to take a rest and write slowly to find the feeling, but I ended up on the road and promised old readers to open the book on the 27th, so
I have been rushing for time. When I wrote this version, it was changed in a hurry five days before the book was published. I couldn't even think of the title, so the editor helped me pick it up. So I am very grateful to my editor, but it is a pity that I was not able to write a good article.
Okay, that’s all. The Crimson King that I talked about the day before yesterday, it’s really you who read the book without your eyes, you should admit it, right? It’s not my fault, and you reported me... cough
Cough, forget it, you are still the author, so I won’t say anything else. The editor asked me to delete what I said the day before yesterday. But I didn’t say any foul language, I just told the truth. You don’t take it with you when you read the book... Well, just
so.
[To be honest, I have been using Yeguo to read and catch up on books recently. I can switch sources and read aloud with many sounds. www. Android and Apple are available.]