"The big fish carried Qiu, and the two of them went to the world on this shore together, and finally lived together."
After Shen Jie finished telling what he said about the plot, he was also looking forward to Luo Huan's evaluation.
"Wait a minute? Did I miss something in the end? Why did I jump to a happy life together in an instant?"
"Isn't this the case in fairy tales?"
Faced with Luo Huan's doubts, Shen Jie also started to quibble. In fact, he didn't think of a good ending, so he just made it up casually. Anyway, it's just the planning stage, and it can be done slowly in the later stage.
Supplementary.
"You are serious, you are not afraid of your fans beating you up."
Luo Huan listened to Shen Jie's sophistry and became worried about his personal safety.
"I am young, and they beat me for no reason because they wanted to get me into trouble."
Shen Jie naturally didn't care about Luo Huan's threat. In a society ruled by law, how could someone beat him up?
"Your ending, I can only say that the setting of this world view is in vain. It is obviously very good, but the ending has to be complete, and I am convinced by you."
Luo Huan said, and began to think seriously about what kind of ending Shen Jie's story should be. She also knew in her heart that the main reason why Shen Jie was like this was because she didn't have a suitable ending in her heart.
"Speaking of which, why did you decide that Chun Chun would come back instead of actually dying?"
In Luo Huan's view, Shen Jie's story had collapsed when he returned from Chun turning into a giant fish.
"Of course it's because movies need big scenes. In my previous plots, they were basically small scenes. The only big scene was a simple fight. But this is a movie. The audience watches it to see big shots and big productions.
Yes, there is no way to convince the public without some shocking aspects.”
"You're serious. That's not how you add it to a big scene. What you're adding now is really confusing. I don't even know what you're talking about."
Luo Huan also covered her head and sighed. She was finally convinced by Shen Jie's thinking.
And Shen Jie thought about it carefully, and what Luo Huan said was true. Because the appearance of the big fish in the end was too sudden. It was a bit like Chun and Kun in the original Big Fish and Begonia, except that it looked good.
It has no external use at all, and even if it does exist, ordinary viewers will look at it in a fog, and they don’t know what it is used for.
Unknowingly, he also made such a mistake. It can only be said that the routines of animated movies are very deep.
"That's not as good as this. The final setting is that Chun has been sent to reincarnation, because people like her who have entered the world and want to return to their own world can only go through the entrance of reincarnation, otherwise they can only wait.
Dissipated. The Lord of the Underworld was afraid of the emergence of unstable factors, so he forcibly sent Chun to be reincarnated. However, reincarnation is reincarnation after all, and the memory may not be preserved. It is very likely that the other party did not go directly to him through this channel.
The world has really been reincarnated. Do you think this is okay?"
Shen Jie also thought of a relatively suitable idea. In fact, this was Shen Jie's first draft, but he finally decided to give it up for the sake of the big scene. But now that Luo Huan has directly wiped out the big scene, then
He can also speak out.
"This is great, isn't it much better than what you just thought? Then there is the relationship between Qiu and the Lord of the Underworld. According to what you said, the duty of the Lord of the Underworld is to maintain order, and the first one from the other side of the world
The Qiu that was born is definitely an unstable factor in his eyes, so it must be eliminated."
Luo Huan immediately grasped the core issue in the story.
"That's right."
"That's good. In order to eliminate the unstable factors, and Qiu for himself, the two started a duel. This can not only satisfy the big scene, but also allow the story to continue."
"Wait a minute, the Lord of the Underworld should be the most powerful being in my setting. How can Qiu fight with him?"
Shen Jie was very surprised by Luo Huan's thoughts. He had clearly mentioned in the story that the Lord of the Underworld was the ceiling of combat power, and it was impossible for Qiu to fight him.
"Look, Qiu is a very special person. So naturally he must have some special abilities. So if you can fight, you can definitely fight, but you can only fight a little, otherwise the Lord of the Underworld you created before will collapse.
Lost."
Luo Huan said.
"In other words, Qiu can fight, but he can't win. But it's very frustrating. If I were an audience and saw this in the end, I would definitely want to hit someone. I'm still young and I want to live a few more years."
Shen Jie brought himself into the audience and found that this was not very appropriate.
"No, no, no, there are many ways to show that you cannot win. For example, if Qiu has something that makes the Lord of the Underworld fear him, for example, it will make the other world and the Underworld lose control. If he is afraid, the Lord of the Underworld will definitely not show up.
Full strength."
"Then what's the end of the story? It can't be that Qiu stands on the top of the mountain."
Shen Jie asked.
"It's not impossible, but I also have a better proposal. Although Qiu can threaten the Lord of the Underworld, the Lord of the Underworld can in turn threaten Qiu, for example, by tightening the Heavenly Duty so that the world on the other side can no longer do anything.
A person like Qiu was born. So the two people finally made a deal. The general meaning is that Qiu wanted the other party to guarantee that Chun could successfully reach his own world and not be reincarnated. And he himself was willing to become the Lord of the Underworld.
deputy."
Luo Huan said.
After hearing this, Shen Jie was also stunned. The deal, this sense of déjà vu looks more and more familiar. Isn't this the deal that Bailong and Yubaba made in Spirited Away? For this reason, Qianxun can go home.
Unexpectedly, Luo Huan was so terrifying. A method of fusion that he had never thought of was actually developed by Luo Huan. Even though he was a well-known director, Shen Jie still had a lot to learn.
"Leave an open ending at the end? You handled it well that way."
Shen Jie agreed with Luo Huan's idea.
"That's right, you don't want to see who your mother is, so let's do this first. You can sort out what you just said, make a draft and take a look at it, and then optimize it."
Luo Huan said.
The conversation between the two just now obviously cannot be a formal script. It is just an idea at best. It must be sorted out and then constantly revised by professionals.
"What, did you record just now?"
Shen Jie had a headache when he heard that he had to record it. He had just said so much and it was too much trouble to think about it again. Thinking of Luo Huan's habit of recording meetings in the studio before, Shen Jie also tried to ask.
"Hmm? Shouldn't you prepare this by yourself? Since you haven't prepared it in advance, then think about it again slowly. It just so happens that you can also go through the plot again. By the way, school starts in two days, so
It’s best to finish it as soon as possible in these two days.”
After Luo Huan finished speaking, he continued to play with the models in the room.