Immortal Tea Party 13 - The boat has passed the Ten Thousand Mountains
The debate on "hydrology" in the book review area is somewhat fierce. After a period of observation and thinking, Shuiyun decided to hold another tea party to respond to everyone's concerns.
The focus of debate probably focuses on the following two points:
First of all, some book friends believe that the current Golden Plains volume has too many side tasks and the main line is advancing slowly.
Secondly, the protagonist often chats and fools around with his friends, and adds food descriptions, which is not enough.
The daily update space is limited, and the above two points lead to reading it over and over again, resulting in a poor experience of following updates.
If there are any other questions, please add them later.
Let’s talk about the first point first, let’s take a look at the main plot and branch plots of the volume of “Flash Gold”.
The main plot of this volume is to unify the Golden Gold Plains. Everyone has no doubt about this, right? So the next point to watch is, how can the protagonist do it?
If it were another novel, the dark blue would be dotted, and the gold finger would be bolded. In the later stage, it would be pushed flat and crushed, and it would be full of fun.
But this is not in line with the tone of the book, nor is it the selling point of the book. The only golden finger in the book is not very good to Mr. He.
As the old saying goes, it's easy to occupy a place, so why should it be your turn to occupy it? The protagonist wants to unify the flash gold, so there is no other way but to follow the steps step by step and make a lot of careful and meticulous preparations.
Thinking back to the second volume of "The Utopia of Demons", the main plot is to cause trouble in the Heavenly Palace and take back the lid of the square pot. The climax is only a few dozen chapters, and the book only lasts for a short two-quarters of an hour. How much preparation and effort has the protagonist made in advance for this?
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Are so many words and descriptions just fillers added by the author in order to lengthen the article and get some royalties?
There are actually as many as eight branch lines in the second volume of "Monster Kingdom". The eight lines run in parallel, gradually merge, and finally converge into the main line, working together to promote an overwhelming and earth-shattering climax.
Each branch involves different events and characters, which not only allows everyone to take on different perspectives and see through the strength and weakness of the six-hundred-year-old empire, but also makes it possible for the weak to defeat the strong in the Battle of Tiangong. In fact, in the future, they
It will also connect with subsequent plots, and their significance and weight will continue to increase.
Returning to the "Flash Gold" volume, the protagonist faces the same problem again: the task is too difficult and the opponent is too strong.
He Lingchuan's opponents are not only the powerful ones with flash gold, but also all the forces that don't want him to become too powerful.
If you want to win the entire glitter gold, you still need the familiar formula:
Only fast will not break.
When he actually strikes, he must do it with lightning speed, so that no external force can be caught off guard.
People often only see the earth-shattering avalanche, but fail to notice the gradual accumulation of ice and snow. This is He Lingchuan's latecomer advantage. What he has to do now is to steadily guide quantitative changes before triggering the much-anticipated "avalanche"
to the process of qualitative change.
What kind of person or force is the most terrifying?
Is it the one who clamors to suppress you every day? Is it the one who does countless little tricks to humiliate you? Is it the one who takes advantage of you every day?
Oh, a wise man once said that if you really want to knock someone down, you'd better not let him know in advance. When he senses danger, your knife has already been pierced into his chest.
He Lingchuan planned to do this for the Flash Gold Plains; conversely speaking, in order for the final unification of Flash Gold to be able to overcome all obstacles and become unstoppable, all the preparations to serve it are actually the main line, right?
What preparations is He Lingchuan making so far?
The first is to run hometown associations.
This is not just about simply recruiting talents and establishing an information network, nor is it just because these people are easy to win over. Their role will gradually be reflected in the future.
Second, use the activities of the Chamber of Commerce as a cover to penetrate the power of advocating good into every corner of Flash Gold.
Third, the Black Armored Army enforces justice for heaven and establishes the myth of Emperor Jiuyou, while cooperating with Yang Shan's propaganda team to carry out extensive publicity.
The above tasks are relatively hidden and will not easily attract the attention and vigilance of local powerful people, but they can achieve subtle and silent effects.
Let’s talk about the actions of the Black Armored Army and the Nine Nether Emperor. Some book friends said that they don’t want to watch “Anti Violence and Peace” and don’t want to see the suffering of Flash Gold. In fact, the emergence of the Black Armor Army is of great significance to the Flash Gold Plains:
It breaks people's superstition that bullies are invincible, and then awakens people's instinctive desire to resist oppression, which is the so-called "sowing of fire."
It has also been recognized by the people of Flash Gold, laying a solid foundation for the subsequent unification of the people's aspirations and expectations of Flash Gold.
These are all related to wish power and Yuan Power, and will be mentioned in subsequent stories.
While controlling the general strategy, we also need to sketch individuals. There are many characters sketched in the "Flash Gold" volume. Let me give you an example:
Wan Qiliang. (In contrast, Sha Wei in Panlong World)
When he first appeared, he had a "prickly" image. He was aggressive, aggressive, and always looking for trouble. He was not a qualified soldier at all, let alone an excellent general.
Many people say that the world is just a giant grass-roots team. I think this is only half right.
I am born with a talent, it just depends on how I polish it:
If it's not polished well, it's just scrap metal; if it's tempered properly, it's a magic weapon.
In the hands of He Lingchuan, Wan Qiliang will of course become a magic weapon. To illustrate, I will let everyone see from the "Wan Qiliangs" the transformation from a good warrior to an elite division. After that, their gathering
It is no longer a grassroots team.
The growth of the characters represented by him will demonstrate Lingchuan's eclectic approach to promoting and cultivating talents.
In addition, I would also like to explain why the warriors who admire goodness are willing to fight for the golden plains thousands of miles away. This is a change in identity, and it is also a sublimation of mentality and character.
There are many similar examples. If you are interested, you can go back and look for them; if you are too lazy to go back, the plot behind them will also be presented.
These contents are small, complex, but necessary. They fill the skeleton of the whole book with flesh and blood and human nature, and affect the cause and effect of everything that is not as it should be.
But none of these contents can form an independent chapter. I will let them lurk in each story, like a dragonfly on the water, but in the end it will fall into place.
What preparations and efforts are needed to unify the chaotic land and create a powerful empire, and what hardships and fights must be experienced? This is the history that the "Flash Gold" volume wants to present, and the questions that need to be answered. As the curtain slowly opens, with each
Passers-by appear on stage, and the above answers will be like hydrological stones at the bottom of a river, gradually revealing their true features as the water level drops——
This chapter is not finished yet, please click on the next page to continue reading the exciting content! It is always there, but it needs the right opportunity to come out.
Book friends always ask me, when will the volume of Flashing Gold be finished? In fact, He Lingchuan’s preparation work is already over halfway, and the book “The Immortal” is also over halfway through.
Inside and outside the book, everything is progressing step by step.
I hope that when this volume ends, the plot, subplots, and characters will have been fully and fully interpreted. And the opponents of the protagonist, those forces who do not want to see and acknowledge us, are roaring crazily, waiting for opportunities to retaliate.
After the suppression was fruitless and even a heavy price was paid, it was suddenly discovered that the boat had passed the Ten Thousand Mountains, and the rise of new forces was unstoppable.
Situ Yu analyzed He Lingchuan and said that a person always has a purpose in doing so many things, but he could not clearly see He Lingchuan's purpose; then, Shuiyun also hopes that his thoughts and feelings can be gradually passed on to everyone as the novel unfolds.
a reader.
If you friends can give me a little more trust, believe that I am a serious, hard-working, and patient person, and believe that I am responsible for the quality of "The Immortal" to the end, if you friends can let go of your guard and follow the rhythm of this book
Let’s move forward together and enjoy the world that Shuiyun has drawn for you——
I think our mentality will be more relaxed, and we will all have a more pleasant experience, right?
After nagging for so long today, I seem to have only answered the first point of contention.
Due to limited space, the second focus of debate involves the creative thinking and concepts of "The Immortal". If I want to explain it clearly, I will write another tea party.
If everyone wants to see it, we can arrange it later.
I know there will be some friends who will say that it is better to write more text of novels than to have a long tea party. But writing is writing, communication is communication, and they are not perfect substitutes for each other.
Shuiyun is willing to take a little time to eat, sleep, exercise and relax every day on the premise of working at full capacity to respond to everyone's concerns, so as to enhance communication and reduce misunderstandings.
Long live understanding, it is more than just a slogan.