All I can say is that the writing in this volume was a mess, and I didn’t write what I wanted to write. Sometimes I didn’t even know what I was writing. It wasn’t until I destroyed Ji Mansion that I regained some form.
In addition, at the end, it was said that the heroine would raise the child. I hinted so much before that Leng Siyuan and his wife have no children! Leng Siyuan and his wife have no children! Leng Siyuan and his wife have no children!
Lord, if you think about it for a moment, you will know that it is for them.
Anyway, that's it, read it or not, this volume was originally written very rubbish.
Just by looking at the title of the volume, you can tell that according to the original outline, this volume was supposed to focus on describing Leng Xinnan, and at the same time, the protagonist and the sword fairy had an intersection, and then the plot centered on the destruction of the Ji Mansion.
It's a pity that Ye Yaoyao, who was supposed to be the protagonist of this volume, became a passerby.
There are many reasons for this. I am increasingly constrained. Whether it is driving or plotting, I am always afraid of being reported. I also don’t dare to mess around with some darker plots.
Another reason is that I adjusted the outline without authorization at the end of the previous volume. As a result, I failed to keep up with the subsequent ideas and wrote in a hurry. The more I wrote, the more chaotic it became.
A few days ago, Diandian asked me how many times I had adjusted the outline. I said three times, but it was actually five times. This also resulted in a complete disconnect between the plot and the rest of the story, and I could only modify it bit by bit. In the end, most of the outline was completely useless.
As for why I have to adjust the outline randomly, the reason is very simple. I think too much during the writing process.
On the one hand, I feel that there are flaws in the plot or the pace is too slow, so I need to adjust it. This happened when I was writing "The Lady", but at that time it was just a slight adjustment, and it had no overall impact.
But this time, the adjustment was a little bigger.
I made a big mistake and failed to hold on to my own ideas, so I read the book review and revised the article.
Logically speaking, this kind of situation should not happen to an old author like me, but it does happen. It can only be said that after the old book has some achievements, writing is like walking on thin ice, for fear that the plot will not be good, for fear that the plot will not be good.
That plot was criticized, and eventually it was changed over and over again, until it was changed into something completely different.
The tone of this book is not purely enjoyable, and it will inevitably look depressing at times.
Some readers hope that the protagonist can be more invincible, then I will add a plug-in. If there are readers who hope that the progress with the heroine will be faster, then I will let Luo accept Leng as soon as possible. Some readers hope that a certain heroine's character will be changed, then I will change it to a longer one.
Princess, I hope this character will not die, I hope this character will die soon...
In addition, in recent years, due to the epidemic and other reasons, everyone has been very depressed. Some readers hope that the overall situation can be more relaxed and that the cases should not be too heart-wrenching or tragic.
I thought about it and felt that it should be like this. It is too depressing and makes me uncomfortable to watch. It would be better to be more relaxed. Even when I watch TV, I will choose more comedies.
So I tried my best to change it if I could, and adjusted the twists or plots that were originally dark and heart-wrenching. As a result, I gradually became confused by the change, and the cases I designed and the daily emotional life were also messy.
In mid-November, I had the impulse to delete all the previous parts and write according to my original outline plan, but the amount of work was too large. Moreover, if I did this, the book would be completely scrapped, and I finally scraped it together.
Written down alive.
The original outline of this volume is that while the protagonist is investigating the Ji Mansion, he meets Ye Yaoyao in the world of Red Rain, and then discovers some secrets. Finally, he investigates the conspiracy of Ji Tianhao in reality. And Sister Leng is killing
After capturing He Jia, he sneaked into Ji's house and accidentally discovered the trapped Mrs. Jiang. As a result, Sister Leng was also trapped. But because of Sister Leng's special life experience (there was foreshadowing before), Mrs. Jiang finally sacrificed herself to help
Leng gained the power of the gods and completed the mending of his heart. Afterwards, Li Nanke destroyed the conspiracy, and then helped Lao Jiang and his wife rescue the child. At the same time, the person who connected the underworld was found out.
Although the Xuanyuan Society has lost Ji Xiuwan and Ji Tianhao, there are still people who have seized the power and are fighting wits and courage with the protagonist. Each other's undercover identities will continue to be reversed. Because I wrote before, my uncle has an informant who arranged to enter.
Xuanyuan Hui. This role should have been outstanding.
In the original outline, Lao Jiang will not die here, because he will be needed in the later plot and will die in the case of the Empress Dowager in Beijing.
In terms of emotions, the outline plan is to formally confirm the relationship between the protagonist and Leng Xinnan. At the same time, the protagonist's relationship with the eldest princess and the empress dowager will be further developed to facilitate the plot of the next volume. Yu Hongye and Ye Yaoyao will live in the protagonist's home.
But because it was too confusing, I temporarily abandoned the plot of the Red Rain World in the later part of this volume and focused on the actual investigation. I also temporarily put the eldest princess aside.
How should I put it? My ability is limited.
Although I kept saying that I would write according to my own ideas, I still couldn't stick to it, and it was ultimately ruined. I can only say that I still don't have enough confidence in my own work.
The reason why I was able to open low and go high in the last book is because I almost focused on doing it according to my own ideas. Even if some plots are controversial, I will not waver. In this book, I opened low and went high, which really shows that the consequences of random changes are very serious.
, blame my lack of confidence.
In short, this book has been very disappointing so far, and the results in the future will not be good, so I deleted the scenes of the two female protagonists who have not yet appeared. As for the role of He Panjun’s sister He Xinyue, I only
A name has appeared. It is easy to handle so far. You can add it or not.
After reducing the outline, the number of words in this book will be much less than that of Lady. Try to finish all the scenes of the heroine. As for other plots, Red Rain World will delete some so as not to drag on too long. The next volume is Wedding.
Little Rabbit, then go to the capital. Let’s talk about the queen. The plot in the capital is the case of Luo’s life experience, and the distinction between the true and false of the Empress Dowager.
The end of the capital is the plot of the underworld and the Sky Sect. The original outline plan was to include Ye Yaoyao here, so we’ll look at it later. Because the outline is a lot messy now, let’s adjust it again.
Anyway, that’s it for this volume. At the beginning of the month, I thought about just opening it twice, but I was persuaded by Lao Xu, so I’d better finish it with peace of mind.