The first case is finally over. In order to speed up the pace, three subplots have been deleted.
One is the plot about Lin Yuan's first wife, because Mei Xing'er is the second wife, and the reason why Lin Jiaoyue is so cold-blooded and ruthless is also because she was bullied by the eldest lady all the time when she was a child, and her psychology was distorted. The death of the eldest lady is also
It has something to do with her. I planned to write this before, and I also wanted to make the female villain feel less nihilistic, more real, and more logical.
Later, in order to keep up with the schedule, these plots were deleted. But in my opinion, deletion has no impact.
When reviewing some juvenile crime cases, I realized that some people are born to be bad. Don't talk about the influence of environment and family, they just have "badness" hidden in their bones. So it is not against the law to attribute Lin Jiaoyue's "badness" to his nature.
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In addition, some readers asked whether Lin Jiaoyue would be resurrected.
Here’s the answer: No!
I won't write a mentally retarded drama like being resurrected at a later stage and then whitewashed to become the heroine, unless I was kicked in the head by a donkey and jumped into the sea.
There were so many beautiful girls in the later period that it was impossible for such a woman to have a leading role.
The second plot that was deleted was the interaction with the heroine's wife, which lasted about a chapter.
The third thing deleted is the daily interaction between the male protagonist and Leng Xinnan, which is about half a chapter.
I really wanted to finish this damn case as soon as possible, so the two daily interactions were deleted. But it doesn’t matter, I can make it up later.
Because of my experience with the old book, according to the original idea, each case will have about forty chapters. When I was working on the old book, I wrote a long case with more than 100 chapters, but I ended up reading it quickly. The reason
It's very simple. If you follow the plot of solving a crime every day, you will feel very disconnected. And after a long time, you will forget the previous foreshadowing, etc. It is better to save it and watch it once.
Therefore, in view of past experience, the cases I designed this time will be completed within forty chapters, adding some daily life, picking up girls, etc., slowly and slowly, so that I will not lose patience because it takes too long, and can also keep everyone in a good position.
A more relaxed atmosphere.
However, I made a fatal mistake, that is, during the new book period, updates cannot be improved. The reason is very simple. You need to wait for the website to arrange recommendations. If there are too many words, you have to put them on the shelves in advance. The consequence of putting them on the shelves in advance is that there is no
Without the recommended data, I can only choose to cut the book and reopen it, so I will write a hammer.
So I shouldn't have put this case in the new book issue. As a result, when I was testing the water in the same period, my collection was barely OK, but I couldn't read it. The reason is that everyone has started to keep books. It's not that they don't want to read it, but that they are reading every day.
It's very uncomfortable to go around and around and guess at this point.
So I had to speed up the process and readjust the outline.
Originally, I thought about deleting and rewriting it, but the test recommendation came. If I delete it, it will have a huge impact. I can only speed up the update and delete the plot.
My next plan is to still keep the theme of detective work, but slow down the pace so that the roles of the various heroines can be blended in. The proportion of daily ambiguities will be higher, and I will try not to go around, make random guesses, and turn things around.
Reversing these doesn't matter.
Try not to force everyone to keep books, just read them easily every day. Therefore, please try to read the new book as much as possible. After it is released, there will be more updates from the author, which old readers should know.
In addition, in order to prevent the mistakes of old books, such as starting another case immediately after the end of one case, which can easily lead to fatigue, this book will have a small copy after each case, about seven or eight chapters.
This dungeon is basically about killing monsters, entering the Red Rain Dreamland to eliminate nightmares, etc. It is similar to upgrading to fight monsters. This dungeon of the Red Rain Dreamland has a lot of potential that can be tapped, and the atmosphere of suspense is very strong.
Also, I would like to take this opportunity to answer a question that some readers have been asking before, and that is why I like to write female villains.
How should I put this? Maybe it’s because I have been fond of some beautiful female villains in movies since I was a child, such as the female villain Sophie Marceau in 007: The Last Day, Eva Green in Sin City 2, etc. But the biggest influence is
The biggest one is from a TV series I watched when I was a kid, the villain Jiang Yuyan in Xiao Yuer and Hua Wu Que.
Not only was this actress's looks completely appealing to me, but more importantly, the character she played was so ruthless, making me hate her and yet find her so charming.
So when I write about some female villains, her figure always floats in my mind.
However, movies and TV shows are different from novels, and there are many differences between the good points and the poisonous points. Therefore, when writing the female villain, I will completely eliminate any emotional entanglement between the female villain and the male protagonist and avoid this poisonous point.
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As for some readers, they hope that there will be fewer female victims in murder cases in the future, because they were overrepresented in the old books, and some of them were minor characters, but their writing was more brilliant. I will pay attention to this, and the new book has also made big changes.
.Except for the first case, there will be changes later.
The next second volume is still in the small place of Dongqi County. The outline has been adjusted at present. I will write it first and see how it goes when the time comes.
Thank you for your support, please read it and collect it, okay?