In the woods, there were just vernacular whispers, without the cadence of ordinary people singing poems. It seemed that because the other party was thinking about it, he occasionally laughed, and the conversation became more like a joke. If it weren't for the "the missing moon hangs the sparse tung trees, the leakage is broken"
The two sentences "People are still at first" are really not in the vernacular format, and it was difficult for Zhou Bangyan and Li Shishi to be sure that they were poetry sentences.
They stopped there and looked at each other. After understanding this sentence, the contrast was actually very beautiful. Once they heard it, it was a rare and beautiful sentence, but they didn't know whether it was a poem or a lyric. In the light over there, Yunzhu
He also leaned next to Ning Yi and listened quietly.
She was in Jinfeng Tower a few years ago and came into contact with many literary talents. When she was alone in the brothel, someone would occasionally recite a love poem in the hope of impressing a beautiful lady. It was just that she cared too deeply about her own situation.
, she has never been moved by this. Ever since she got together with Ning Yi, the atmosphere between the two has always been unrestrained. Ning Yi usually doesn't look like a great talent. He occasionally writes a few crooked poems and nondescript lyrics, and she has a lot of feelings in her heart.
When she met him, she only found it interesting. She also knew in her heart that Ning Yi was very talented and knowledgeable, but this was the first time that they had seriously composed poems together like ordinary talented people and beautiful ladies.
After Ning Yi thought for a while and said the sentence "Who sees lonely people walking around alone, misty and solitary shadows?", she nodded and knew that this was a "divination operator".
Not far from the forest, Master Li glanced at Zhou Bangyan, and then said softly: "Businessman..." I had never heard of this word before. At first glance, it was a bit difficult to place it, but Shangqiu had only heard of it, and it felt like
It's good. The artistic conception is profound, but Ning Yi's slightly smiling voice becomes more relaxed, as if he is telling a story.
"Tsk, I was startled but turned around. No one spared me my hatred. I picked up all the cold branches and refused to live on them... It was cold on the lonely sandbank."
The two of them were still memorizing and savoring the words. Ning Yi also said the second half of the word calmly. He paused on the sentence of picking all the cold branches and refusing to live on them, and then read out the second part of "Yunzhu".
After thinking for a while, his eyes turned slightly red, but he raised a hand, covering the back of Ning Yi's hand, stroking his cheek. After a moment, he whispered: "Pick up all the cold branches and refuse to live on... Lonely Sandbank
"Leng, Li Heng, did you give it to me?"
"like?"
"like."
"I don't really like it."
"laugh……"
The two of them were talking softly, and in the forest over there, they finally understood the poem completely in their minds. The upper and lower parts of Bu Suanzi only have forty-four words, but here, they are completely integrated into one piece.
The mood of coldness and longing is sketched out. Generally speaking, the length of the lyrics does not determine the winner. However, it is always reasonable to have longer sentences to outline more things. But at the moment, there are only forty-four words.
Starting from the sparse tung trees and ending with the cold lonely sandbank, almost every sentence is filled with extremely rich information. The upper and lower parts are neatly aligned, but they are integrated together in an extremely smooth manner.
Just now, Ning Yi composed these words almost casually. No matter the neatness of the words or the sublimation of the artistic conception during the period, all prove that the lyricist has almost reached the peak of his poetic skills. Only now did Zhou Bangyan feel that the song "Ying Tianchang" should be written by someone else.
He felt proud of the work that was unattainable for a while, but at this moment, while chewing this "Divination Operator", he didn't know what kind of mood he should feel. He just looked at Master Li,
However, at this time, Miss Shishi was also reciting the words silently in her heart, trying hard to remember them, but she had no time to care about anything else.
Ning Yi and Yunzhu talked quietly for a while. The two here didn't know whether they should leave now. Before they could make a decision, a soft song sounded in their ears. Although Li Shishi and Zhou Bangyan were against each other,
Yunzhu was not familiar with her, but he could tell that she was a woman. At this time, she was humming the melody of lyrics and music. Only then did Li Shishi realize that this woman also knew music. He originally thought that she wanted to sing "Business Operator" written by Ning Yi just now, but humming
After a few times, the soft voice sang: "I hate you so much..."
As soon as he sang the first line, Master Li understood what the words of this song were.
"Ten thousand hatreds, the utmost hatred is at the end of the world. The mountains and the moon don't know what's in my heart, the water and wind are empty, and the flowers in front of my eyes are swaying. The blue clouds are swaying.
After washing myself, I leaned against the Wangjiang Tower alone. There were thousands of sails passing by, but the water was flowing slowly in the slanting light, and the Bai Ping Island was broken by my heart!"
This is a poem "Wang Jiangnan" written by Wen Tingyun in the late Tang Dynasty. It describes the scene of a woman leaning on a building looking forward to her husband's return. The sentence "Thousands of sails are nothing, the slanting light is long and the water is long, and the heart is broken by Bai Pingzhou." The artistic conception of longing is extremely beautiful.
, is considered one of the must-learn repertoire for brothel girls, and Master Li is also very familiar with it. But to her surprise, the woman in front of her has a soft and melodious singing voice, which is no less than hers. She even expresses her feelings and sings beautifully at this time.
, is a bit more attractive than her. Although there is no silk and bamboo to accompany the music, during this soft singing, it seems that the whole world is melted into the soft warmth of the singing voice.
When it comes to feelings, the two of them are lovers, so it's okay if they can't compare. However, in terms of singing voice and singing skills, she actually has a feeling that it's hard to match, which makes her a little surprised. Naturally, she doesn't know that Yunzhu has been going through these days.
Since then, I have studied the modern singing methods that Ning Yi likes and integrated them with the singing at that time. Not only did I retain the artistic conception of the singing at that time, but in terms of elegance and grace, it also sang much better than others. If others think of this
If she sang it in a sung way, she might be criticized as being too vulgar and inferior. However, her own skills have reached the level of everyone, but when she sings it, it is natural and flawless.
The song "Business Operator" written by Ning Yi just now was due to her pity for her persistence, which was to pick all the cold branches and refuse to rest on a single sentence, but she knew that Ning Yi felt that this was a bit unfair to her, so the artistic conception of the words and sentences also seemed a bit unfair.
It was very sad. At this time, she sang "Wang Jiangnan" to express her gratitude. She sang in a relaxed and beautiful tone, without seeming sad. She sang "Thousands of sails are not worth it", and she expressed her gratitude to the person who "picked up all the cold branches and refused to live on them".
She also expressed her hope that he would come back soon. After singing the song, she felt a little shy and leaned against Ning Yi, letting him hug her.
In the past at Jinfeng Tower, some talented people chanted words of praise or expressed their admiration for her in poems. Although she had always been smart and talented in literature, she never had the heart to respond. It was only now that she tasted the fragrance of literature and ink in her feelings.
The romance is vague in my heart, and I am actually a little intoxicated.
After hearing this word, the two people in the woods not far away were slightly affected. In those legendary novels, the Jiangnan water town, talented people and beautiful women, may be such a scene.
It took a while for Ning Yi to laugh out loud: "Do you want to say the same thing to me, haha."
"I just suddenly wanted to sing..."
"Well, it sounds pretty good."
Ning Yi raised his head and looked at the sunlight shining down: "But... the artistic conception of these two poems is a bit decadent, which is not good."
"When Li Heng comes back, I will sing happy words."
"Well, let me think about it..." He thought for a while, and then the woods became quiet. It was already noon, the sun was shining on the grass between the trees, and the small flowers that would bloom in spring were dotted one by one.
In the field of vision, a moment later, what sounded was another artistic conception.
"The clouds make tricks, the flying stars spread hatred, the silver man and the man travel far away in secret, the golden wind and jade dew meet each other, and they are defeated, there are countless in the world... tenderness is like water, and good times are like dreams..."
On the other side, Li Shishi and Zhou Bangyan were already stunned. I have seen many people talking about love, and I have seen many talented and beautiful women who are full of poems when talking about love, but I have never seen such poems thrown around as if they were just playing.
Yes. At this time, Ning Yi was in a happy mood, and the words he spoke fluently: "...I can't bear to look at the Magpie Bridge on the way home. If our love lasts for a long time, how can we stay together day and night?"
This poem is easier to understand than the previous one, "Businessman", and it is easier to tell the difference in level. Zhou Bangyan swallowed silently. Relatively speaking, as a woman, it is easier to be infected by such words. Li Shishi's hand
Weiwei holds the lapel of his clothes, and among Zhou Bangyan, he is also a lyricist who is good at describing scenes and lyrical feelings. He is also better able to understand the good and bad of this kind of poetry. He has also written Chinese Valentine's Day poetry. If we talk about Ning Yi's previous poem
After "When Will the Bright Moon Come" is released, people no longer need to fill in the Mid-Autumn Festival poems, so if this song "Magpie Bridge Immortal" is released at this time, I... I'm afraid I won't be able to fill in the Chinese Valentine's Day poems anymore.
If after listening to the previous song "Bu Suanzi", he was still a little unimpressed by Ning Liheng's previous reputation, after this song, he only thought of Ning Yi's five poems in total.
Ning Yi laughed over there: "Come on, come on, do you like this song? If you sing again, I will sing another one... Well, this one is really for you."
He also wants to write...
Zhou Bangyan and Li Shishi were speechless. Yunzhu on the other side murmured this poem and was moved for a long time: "Isn't it okay if I lose? In fact, I also like the divination poem in front of Li Heng..."
"I'll give it all to you." Ning Yi thought about it, and then sighed with some hesitation, "Actually, I think that if the relationship lasts for a long time, how can we stay together day and night? This sentence is a bit despicable. Should I change it?
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"I won't change!" Yunzhu grabbed his hand and blushed after a moment, "I, I like it very much."
"I never said it before if I liked it..."
"Let Liheng express his feelings..."
"That's fine if you like it." Ning Yi said, thought for a while and then hugged her, "Well, if you ask what love is in the world, it will teach you how to make love between life and death, and how many times we have been together in the cold and summer..."
Yunzhu narrowed his eyes, as if his heart was filled with honey, but then he suddenly shook his head: "Stop it, stop it... What if you do so much at once and are gone in the future? I won't listen anymore."
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"Uh, don't you listen..."
The two chatted and laughed for a while, and their laughter spread among the woods.
On the other side, Zhou Bangyan and Li Shishi came out of the woods. When they saw the crowd, their faces turned pale. Li Shishi held his clothes with one hand and trembled slightly. If the first song "Businessman" gave her a feeling of amazement,
When the second song "Magpie Bridge Immortal" was recited smoothly, she was already a little frightened. How could it be like this? The third song...
"We are traveling all over the world, how many times has Lao Yi experienced the cold and heat... How many times has Lao Yi experienced the cold and heat... What's behind..."
Her heart was throbbing and her brows were knitted...
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From the time I wrote the second song "The Sapphire Case", I had already thought about using "Bu Suanzi" on Yunzhu, because the sentence of picking up all the cold branches and refusing to live on them is so appropriate. Of course, the whole poem is
The artistic conception was too lonely, so I decided to use another one to dilute it. As a love poem, "Magpie Bridge Immortal" is naturally the best. There was a prediction post in the book review area. I didn't read it carefully before, but I checked it last night, and the last one was also guessed...
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Hey, obviously you didn’t guess the third song ^_^