Su Xiaotian feels that Su Manxiu's book is indeed stiff in some places and not very imaginative enough.
But it's only slightly lacking.
For this period of time, it is already a very rare work.
If we could revise the entire manuscript and improve the unreasonable parts, it would probably take half a year.
The time is right to submit it within half a year.
There is a high chance that this book will be serialized or published.
In this way, my aunt will become a cultural person instead of the housewife she is now.
Su Manxiu didn't know that Su Xiaotian still had so many thoughts in her heart.
She felt that these manuscripts were just random scribblings. At that time, she didn't know why she had so many fantastic ideas in her mind.
It's okay to let your children read such a mess, but how can you really publish it as a novel?
"Xiaotian, let's forget it. I don't think it's possible. I've never even studied."
When Su Manxiu said these words, he even lowered his head.
She has never been a confident person, even though Chen Zian's presence in the past two years has made her life very satisfactory.
However, the inferiority complex that has been deeply rooted in her bones since childhood has always affected her, and she still has no self-confidence.
Su Xiaotian is someone who knows Su Manxiu well, so of course she knows what Su Manxiu is thinking.
But she wasn't very worried. Although her aunt was still not a confident person, she was much better now a few years ago, wasn't she?
"Auntie, if you don't believe it, just show the manuscript to a few of us. If my brothers and I think it's good after reading it, how about you submit it?"
Su Xiaotian thought about it and said, "It's just right. I also pointed out the shortcomings so that my aunt can make better improvements."
Although Chen Zian didn't quite believe in the judgment of a young girl like Su Xiaotian, he still took the manuscript and read it with great interest.
He planned that as long as the writing was readable, he would definitely praise it.
After all, it is a work written by my daughter-in-law, so I must praise it no matter what.
But as he read word for word, these words deeply shocked Chen Zian.
He never knew that his wife had so many magical ideas, which was simply unbelievable.
Will technology really develop to this point one day in the future?
If technology can really develop to this extent, how will the country be prosperous and strong?
Chen Zian, who had always been steady, unexpectedly became excited.
Seeing her husband's expression, Su Manxiu became more and more uneasy.
She asked hesitantly: "Isn't it good?"
"Show, great, great, you know?"
When Chen Zian spoke, his tone was very excited.
"You are simply a genius, Xiu'er, you are a genius."
If it weren't for his mother-in-law and nephews and nieces, Chen Zian would have picked up Su Manxiu and kissed her beautifully.
Su Xiaotian looked at Chen Zian like this and smiled.
They are children, and Su Manxiu may not believe what they say, but Chen Zian is different.
"Really, aren't you comforting me?" Su Manxiu said hesitantly.
"It's indeed good, Xiu'er. Although I have only read a few pages, I am already attracted." Chen Zian said firmly.
Su Manxiu didn't quite believe what his nephew and niece said.
But her husband's words made Su Manxiu full of confidence, and she decided to seriously revise the manuscript after returning.
It's just that Su Manxiu doesn't have much time and energy in the short term. She has to follow Chen Zian.
Before she set off, Su Xiaotian had read the entire novel.
Overall, I sorted out some of the problems I found.
Su Manxiu was so excited when she saw the questions and suggestions that Su Xiaotian had compiled for her.
"Xiaotian, thank you so much. I felt there was something wrong with what you said when I first wrote it." Su Manxiu hugged Su Xiaotian and kissed her excitedly.
The little guy Chen Xiuyuan saw it and hurriedly joined in.
"Mom, mom, kiss, kiss." The little guy hugged Su Manxiu's thigh and struggled to get Su Manxiu to kiss him.
After asking Su Manxiu, Chen Xiuyuan said to Su Xiaotian: "Mom, mine, mine!"
Su Xiaotian couldn't help laughing, then she hugged Su Manxiu's arm and said, "Auntie, mine, mine."
Seeing the two children, one big and one small, having fun, Su Manxiu smiled.
The happy days that I never imagined before are right around me, what else is there to be dissatisfied about?
She kissed her son hard.
Before departure, Chen Zian and Su Manxiu originally wanted to sell the yard where they currently live.
They don't have much savings in hand, and they have a lot of expenses when they move to a new place. If this yard can be sold, they can have more money.
As soon as they expressed this idea, they were opposed by Su Xiaotian.
"Uncle, do you remember that I told you before that you should not take action on this compound under any circumstances?"
"Why?" Chen Zian asked doubtfully.
"Of course there is a reason, but I can't say it now. In a year or two, uncle, you will know."
Although he didn't know why in the end, Chen Zian remembered that Su Xiaotian had said this a few years ago. This child was not a talker, and there must be a reason for saying this.
In the end, the couple decided to keep the courtyard and they could stay there when they return to their hometown in the future.
As for the tension in my hands now, I can actually overcome it.
Now that the position has been promoted, the salary can also be increased a bit.
If there is a chance, Manxiu can also find a job, and then the two of us in the family will be able to make money, and they will be able to live no matter what.
Grandma Su probably also thought of the real reason why Chen Zian and Su Manxiu wanted to sell their house.
She privately gave Su Manxiu 100 yuan and a thick stack of tickets.
How could Su Manxiu be willing to accept it?
As a daughter, she feels very guilty for not being able to honor her parents. How can she let her family support her?
"Mom, this won't work. It's not easy for you to save this little money. How can I get it?"
Although the family's current conditions are good, it is not easy for my mother to save so much money.
"Take it, I'll give it to you. I have it in my hand." Grandma Su smiled and handed the money to her daughter again.
"Mom, you always subsidize me. Even if my sisters-in-law don't say it, I'm afraid they feel uncomfortable in their hearts."
"Your sisters-in-law are not confused and know the importance. In the past few years, how little have you and Zian helped our family overtly and covertly?"
Grandma Su sighed. On the surface, she would show off meat and eggs to Su Man, but in fact, Chen Zian helped them more.
Not to mention anything else, in the past two years, Qi Liangying and Liang Xiu have become more and more comfortable in the factory because there is Chen Zian behind them.
Without Chen Zian's care and support, they would not have been so successful in the factory.
Not to mention that the third child has only been in the car team for a few years and has already reached the position of vice-captain.
"Xiu'er, your brother and sister-in-law are both sensible people. If you hadn't helped us, you wouldn't have been unable to save any money."
Grandma Su was very serious when she said these words.
In the past few years, Grandma Su has given Su Manxiu some bills, but very little money.
Chen Zian has a job and earns a good salary every month, but because he always has to take care of the orphans of several comrades in arms, he is not very able to make ends meet.
But every time they took the notes, Chen Zian and Su Manxiu wanted to give them something in return.
Every time I send them things that are scarce and can only be purchased through special channels.
He would even think of ways to give some benefits to Director Li and the people in the team.
Those cost a lot of money.
Su Manxiu originally planned to just get things done quietly, but she didn't expect her mother to say it directly and she became silent.
"Xiu'er, now that you're gone, our mother-in-law may not see each other for a long time. With money in hand, you will also have more confidence." Grandma Su said something serious again.
After all, it is a flaw that her daughter cannot make money. This is the knot in Grandma Su's heart.
In the past few years, her daughters-in-law have been able to make money, which makes her feel more and more that her daughter should have a serious career.
Su Manxiu refused and collected the money and tickets.
"Mom, I lent these to you, and I will definitely pay them back to you in the future."
Grandma Su said distressedly: "Silly boy, what did you say?"
"Mom, since this yard is not for sale, someone needs to take care of it, and I'm afraid it will have to be hard on you." Su Manxiu said.
"What's the matter? Don't worry, I'll come over every few days to ventilate and clean it. It won't be difficult." Grandma Su agreed immediately.
"If someone wants to rent a house, you can rent it out and subsidize it to some extent!" Su Manxiu warned again.
Grandma Su also agreed wholeheartedly.
After that, with the reluctance of Grandma Su, Su Xiaotian and others, Chen Zian's family of three set out for the south.
This was originally a normal thing, at least that's what Su Xiaotian thought in her heart.
In her opinion, whether her aunt and uncle are in the county or not, it does not have much impact on their lives.
But she didn't expect that on the third day after her uncle left the county, trouble would come to her door.
However, this gate is not a home gate, but a school gate.
Duan Xingguo's mother found the school and went directly to the principal's office.
She asked one question and insisted that Su Xiaoba beat his son and asked the school to deal with Su Xiaoba.
Principal Guo actually didn't pay much attention to the two children competing against each other.
After all, it's just a matter of children playing around.
Besides, Su Xiaoba didn't injure Duan Xingguo, he just stepped on him and lost face.
But now, Duan Xingguo's mother Chang Huiyun came to the school aggressively and seemed not to discuss it, which really made it difficult for Principal Guo.
But he still explained patiently.
"Comrade Chang Huiyun, at that time it was just a competition between children. Although Su Xiaoba defeated classmate Duan Xingguo, it did not cause any substantial harm."
How could Chang Huiyun listen to this? When she heard that her son was being trampled under someone's feet, she wanted to come to her door.
However, the man in the family said that the Su family relied on Chen Zian.
Chen Zian is someone who cannot be provoked in the county. Several families that have provoked Chen Zian have all declined.
In the words of Duan Xingguo's father, the Duan family cannot afford to provoke such a powerful opponent.
Although Chang Huiyun was stopped by her husband, she actually didn't listen at all.
She kept thinking about when she could avenge her son.
"I know that you are the uncle of this guy from the Su family. But you have to see clearly that the county magistrate is not as good as the county magistrate. Then Chen Zian has been transferred."
Chang Huiyun was sitting on the chair with an arrogant attitude. She didn't look like the daughter-in-law of an ordinary small official in the county. Instead, she looked like the first ladies of foreign countries, which made Principal Guo very uncomfortable.
"The words are so wrong, but Minister Chen..."
Before Principal Guo finished speaking, Chang Huiyun had already slapped the table and stood up.
"Principal Guo, you need to be aware of current affairs. You should know who is in charge in the county now. There are many people in our Duan family who are engaged in politics."
Principal Guo had not heard such a straightforward threat for several years.
He looks bad, but he just looks bad!
"Principal Guo, if you do as I say and deal with all the children of the Su family, I will not hold your school responsible!"
"Comrade Chang Huiyun, you should think twice before speaking. These children are students in the school. I have no reason to deal with these children!"
Principal Guo was furious when he said these words. He never thought that there would be an unreasonable person in this world.
The Duan family is not considered a high-profile family in the county. In other words, the family is relatively well-off and has several officials, both big and small.
But as the previous big families fell one by one, the Duan family emerged.
I didn’t expect that a newly prosperous family would be so unreasonable. If this really develops in the future, will there be a way for others to survive?
Principal Guo used to have no ill feelings towards the Duan family, but now he suddenly feels that the Duan family may not be a good family.
When Chen Zian was in the county, they didn't dare to take action. If Chen Zian moved forward, he would touch other people's relatives behind.
Such people are shameful!
But Principal Guo did not dare to say these words.
The women of the Duan family are unreasonable, which shows that the men of the Duan family who support her are probably not generous either.
He is just the principal of a small middle school, how can he provoke such high-ranking people?
But it was not something he could do to expel all the children of the Su family from school.
Even if it's not for Chen Zian, but for a few students who can bring honor to the school, you can't do this.
Principal Guo felt that he still had to work hard to protect the children of the Su family.
"Comrade Chang Huiyun, I know that you love your son very much, but it has been so long, and classmate Duan Xingguo has no health problems, so why bother about this?"
When he said these words, Principal Guo had lost his patience and just suppressed the frustration in his heart and spoke.
Chang Huiyun sneered, the meaning was very clear, she never intended to end it so easily.
"Principal Guo, what kind of family our Duan family is in the county, you should know in your heart whose side you should be on. I believe you should make a choice yourself!"
This directly forces Principal Guo to make a decision.
Principal Guo felt very uncomfortable. The County No. 1 Middle School could have the current results, but he was just a bad guy who could be overthrown at any time.
He felt sorry for several children with outstanding talents, but also felt annoyed about his own lack of ability.
What would happen to the enrollment rate of County No. 1 Middle School if there were no children from the Su family?
Principal Guo doesn’t know how many people can get into college.
But I can be sure that it is absolutely impossible to get into the top one, two, or three places in the province.
"Comrade Chang Huiyun, don't you know that although Minister Chen was transferred to the south, he was promoted. If he comes back one day, he will not be the minister he is now!"
Principal Guo suddenly thought of this possibility and still explained the matter to Chang Huiyun earnestly.
Chang Huiyun didn't care whether Chen Zian was promoted or demoted.
She only knew that her son had been wronged and had to find his place.
Even if you get promoted, you won’t be able to come back in a year and a half, right?
Therefore, she refused to listen to any advice and insisted on asking Principal Guo to expel all the children of the Su family.
"Principal Guo, why are you doing this for a few irrelevant babies? If you don't expel those idiots from the Su family, I will let you leave the County No. 1 Middle School.
Principal Guo fell silent.
Duan Xingguo's mother came to make a fuss and wanted the school to deal with Su Xiaoba and others. The matter quickly spread in the school.
Although the students are young, their ability to spread gossip is not weak at all.
In just ten minutes, the news had spread widely throughout the school, and also reached Su Xiaotian's class.
Su Xiaoba didn't expect that it would lead to such sequelae after so many days.
The Duan family forces Principal Guo to expel them. What choice will Principal Guo make?
Su Xiaoba frowned. He was not stupid. Of course he could understand why they were making trouble now.
Now is not the time when my uncle is still in the county. There is no one behind the Su family, so they may indeed suffer a loss.
Even if my uncle is promoted, the county magistrate is not as good as the current one, and water from afar cannot quench the thirst of the nearer.
The Duan family members waited for their uncle to leave before they came to cause trouble, just to kill him with one move.
"Xiaotian, what do you think we should do?" Su Xiaoba asked her sister anxiously.
It doesn't matter if he can't study himself, but he can't bring trouble to his brothers and sisters.
Su Xiaotian, however, pretended to be an old god and didn't seem to take this matter to heart at all.
"Xiaotian, please talk. Will we run out of books to read?" Su Xiaojiu also asked worriedly.
He didn't like studying, but seeing his brothers all going to college, he quietly set a goal for himself to go to college in the capital.
If I had known that people in Duan Xing's country were so unreasonable, they wouldn't have had that fight.
If Duan Xingguo wants to hit someone, there is nothing wrong with letting him hit him a few times.
Besides, if you really want to suffer a loss at the hands of Duan Xingguo, you have to secretly let Duan Xingguo suffer a loss.
For example, you could secretly put a sack on Duan Xingguo and beat him up, or block him in an alley at night and beat him up.
Anyway, Duan Xingguo didn't know it was them.
Why did we have to fight openly? Are we being retaliated against now?
But now it was too late to think about these things, the Duan family came to visit.
Their current stay and stay can only wait for Principal Guo's arrangements.
The two teenagers have never been so worried.
[The author has something to say]
After working overtime for a long time, I went home to code. There are only so many words left. Babies, don’t forget your tickets.