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9.18 Modification progress

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There are only 444 chapters modified today.

This chapter has been rewritten by 7,000 words. If you are interested, you can read it again as an extra.

This plot is not particularly exciting (without the context), so this section is mainly to fill in the gaps between the Shadow War and the follow-up of the Mechanicus.

In this plot, the main theme is that Qingchen designed the shadow candidates to capture the Mechanicus, use the power of the candidates to destroy the Mechanicus headquarters, and help the Parents Association eliminate obstacles to its development. During this period, Li Changqing helped Qingchen

, specially came to City No. 10 to add some small details and the interaction between the two.

The foundation of the Parents' Association is in City 10, and the headquarters of the Mechanicum is also in City 10. Without this plot, if you look closely, you will feel that there is a problem with the development of the Parents' Association, and the disappearance of the Mechanicus is also very problematic.

So in this round of shadow war, the shadow cooperated with Qingchen to release the mission. In the end, Qingwen arrested 8 cardinals, Qingyi arrested 9 cardinals, Qingyuan arrested the pope, and Fortunately, four were arrested.

Elder.

Celebrate poetry, celebrate without elimination.

Qingshi then withdrew from the Shadow War, while Qingwu returned to Ginkgo Manor to practice and protect the old family master. These plot lines will also be corrected in subsequent revisions.

Here are some plot details to complete:

The first one is that in the original text, Li had implemented a reverse time travel plan and replaced some big figures in Kashima and the Age of Gods, but later in the plot, these replaced time walkers did not play any role (not even one appeared)

Pass).

So in this battle, Li Changqing used the Time Walker of the Gods she controlled to help Qingchen lure nine cardinals to surrender.

The second is that these nine cardinals were handed over to Luo Wanya, and the Parents' Association was used to drain the Mechanicum's family fortune as the first pot of gold for the Parents' Association.

"Gene Era"

In the original article, the parent-teacher association did not have cash flow until it opened a property management company, which makes the rapid development of the parent-teacher association in the early stage seem a bit unreasonable.

The third is that the Mechanicus has been infiltrated by the Puppet Master and has become the Puppet Master's power. In the current plot, the Puppet Master is forced to abandon the Mechanicus in order for Qingyuan to advance in the Shadow War.

The fourth is that he was fortunate to have died in this mission, but was rescued by the shadow, which foreshadowed the subsequent surrender of Qingyu (Qing's frontline commander).

This kind of plot that requires new writing is very tiring, so I wrote it a little slower, but it still makes people feel more pleasant after reading it than the original blank plot.

Tomorrow I will start the torture plot. I hope this plot can be made more reasonable so that it will not be as criticized as before.

Okay, that’s all for today.

See you all tomorrow!


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