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Today’s modification progress is 465-479.
I am really tired today, because this plot is the biggest failure in the early and mid-term.
After Qingchen joined the crew, he went all the way north. Because the shadow took advantage of his fishing relationship, many people were killed. Finally, he was captured by Jindai Yunhe and taken to the north to seize their bodies.
This plot was quite controversial when it was serialized. Looking back, I think it was simply not written well, so this is one of the plots I want to revise the most.
I have always wanted to practice it.
Let’s just talk about the plot after the changes.
When Qingchen was besieged by wolves, he guessed that Jindai Yunhe was coming for him, so he chose to leave alone to lure away the pursuers.
Here, it is reset that both Yan Chunmi and Song Niaoniao are characters who assist the head of the Qing family in completing the plan. This plot underlines Song Niaoniao, mainly because this character is a bit useless. Song Niaoniao is set to be the secret agent Yao Falcon.
This is also to make her early appearance in the plot more reasonable, so that she will not appear again in the later stage. (This setting is actually not important, I just mentioned it)
Qingchen was surrounded by wolves and captured alive. The plot here is mainly optimized, there are no major changes, and the battle is not so deliberately sentimental.
Then, a new plot branch was added to the plot of seizing the body after arriving at the production base.
The Gods captured Qingchen alive and prepared plan A: send Qingchen to the A02 base, force Qingchen to return and be promoted to B level, and then his ancestors would seize him.
Plan B: Seize Qingchen’s body directly at the production base. If Shendai Yunhe cannot escape the encirclement with Qingchen, he will throw the captured Qingchen back to the Qing family. At this time, Qingchen has already been taken away.
, you can work as an undercover agent for Jindai, and even if you are exposed, you can destroy the shadow's right and left hand.
Originally, Kamishiro Yunhe was going to implement Plan A, but the head of the Kamishiro family intervened and did not want his ancestor Kamishiro Chiaki to get the knight's body.
So Plan B was launched.
After Plan B, Kamidai Yunhe discovered that Qingchen could not be taken away and informed the family leader of the matter.
As a result, the head of the family decided to continue Plan A, and asked Shendai Yunhe to send Qingchen to the ancestor, and planned to make the ancestor fail to seize the body.
When I first wrote it, I wanted to clarify the internal struggle of the Age of Gods, but I didn't write it clearly. This time, I wrote it more clearly.
In addition, in the original text, it was outrageous that a person like Kamishiro Yunhe didn't even have a satellite phone, so this time he was given one.
Also, in the original text, the God Generation Yunhe was forced to go offline suddenly, leaving God Generation with no idea that Qingchen could not be taken away for a long time, which was also outrageous.
So this time, these two bugs were modified. Later, most people in the God Generation did not know that Qingchen could not be taken away. The family owner concealed it and planned to trick Shen Dai Qianchi.
Isn't it more reasonable?
At the same time, because I had deliberately not written about the story of the Gods preparing to seize Qingchen’s body, many book friends questioned why I didn’t directly kill Qingchen, why I didn’t just cut off his hands and feet or castrate him. Although I read the article later
I'll understand why later, but this time I revised some things upfront, so that at least new book friends will know what's going on when they read it.
