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10.1 Modification progress

Today’s revision progress is chapters 624-634.

There are two main problems to be solved today.

The first one is a foreshadowing of the rat tide in City No. 10, and then there are minor adjustments to the taboo referee in preparation for returning to the plot line when facing the Western Continent, especially the taboo object ACE-015 Jiyun Temple in their hands.

Muyu, if you sacrifice a person's body, you can get five minutes of interrogation time. This prop is in the original text and will play a certain role in the future.

The second one is a revision of Shadow's lost century. In the original text, he spent a lot of time studying neurotoxins on his own, but there was no mention of him searching for life-saving taboos and solving enemies.

There is a new plot interpretation about the former. The first is that he spent time going to the East and West Continent to find forbidden objects. Here, the information about the poisonous wine cup also appeared in advance. The second is that he has the information about the Concentric Lock and also knows that it is on Li Byung Hee.

, but the conditions for containing forbidden objects are to sacrifice the lives of their partners who have been together for twenty years in exchange for their lives. Ning Xiu and Qing Zhun could not meet the requirements, and the three immortal brooches had just been used by someone the year before Ning Xiu's accident.

Once, it only appeared in recent years. The first thing here is that the timeline of the shadow lengthening can only pull itself, so it will not affect the timeline of the objective world.

The modification here is that I think from the perspective of Shadow. He should make more efforts instead of stupidly doing research on neurotoxins by himself, because the principle of neurotoxins is destined that as long as he can't find the culprit, he will do the research on his own.

It's no use either.

The thing about "taking advantage of this century to kill the enemy" is actually explained later, that is, the shadow will touch the life force field of others when killing people, and the demigod can even break free from his control. Now this explanation is brought forward.

The issues I am reflecting on today are: when I was writing the plot of Li Yunshou’s heroic death, the plot included a suicide attack by civilian airships organized by civilians.

In this setting, the suicide attackers were members of Hengshe in City No. 18 and Jiang Xiaotang from Haitang Boxing Gym.

This is actually a very important line, but there were too many book friends who couldn't accept this abuse at the time, so I omitted it. Now I think about it, it is not appropriate to lose such important branch lines as Hengshe and Jiang Xiaotang, so I will write one later.

Insert an extra episode.

Okay, that’s all for today.

See you all tomorrow!


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