In this plot, first of all, the same as the modifications in the past few days, the bio-pollution plan of Kamishiro Chika is detailed. He used Chen and Kashima to target the shadow of Sora, causing bio-pollution, and it was precisely because of the southern
The War of Demigods led to the transfer of the Forbidden Inquisition.
In this way, the plan will appear more reasonable.
Secondly, when I re-watched this plot, I still felt that although the character of Iodophor was very colorful, it was very well written. Only a few words were added later, which did not affect the main plot.
What I really want to change in this section is the embarrassing part, such as what the mistress said, "You are going to be your own hero!", etc. It's really out of place now, and I find it embarrassing.
So I’m really afraid of exerting myself when writing a book. When I write the climax, I listen to songs like st.reunion, Lonely Warrior, Infinity, The Internationale, Unstoppable, and Fade to arouse my emotions and put myself in a high and overdraft state.
Emotions, let yourself be there.
Sometimes I would even listen to it for two hours first, wait until my emotions are in place, and then write while crying... But when you watch it, there is actually no background music, and then my emotions may have been mobilized, and then it will be awkward.
This is not good, it means the level is still not good enough.
When I read Squid, the thing I admire the most about him is that he is very tough in writing. There are places where I can put it in, but he is very tough, which makes it even better.
I hope that in the next book I can be both relaxed and restrained.
Watching this drama again, Iodo and Qingchen didn’t say a word when they looked at each other across the building. It was so calm and quiet, but it made my eyes wet. I need to draw lessons from this experience.
Finally, there is a drama in which Kamishiro Chiaki survives this battle. In fact, the original text was intended to kill him, but I always felt that it would be too careless for such an old guy to die so recklessly, so I forced the story to be reversed within one chapter.
Now, the foreshadowing in the early stage has also been repaired, and this section has also been repaired, so that he can live a more reasonable life, and it will also cause him to have a deeper conflict with Jindai Yunluo in the later stage.