The first modification is the scene when Qingchen climbs Mount Everest. He holds back Gao from the Kingdom and the Future Organization, and lets Kunlun and the Parents Association sneak attack on the opponent's base camp.
But in the original text, Qingchen’s plan was not clear, and it seemed more like it was improvised.
In the new revision, Qingchen and Boss Zheng’s plan is clearer, which also makes his behavior on Mount Everest more reasonable.
The second modification is to revise the overall battle loop. A lot of this plot has been explained, but it makes the battle seem uninteresting, so it has been streamlined.
The third one is to change life and death this time and climb Mount Everest to ski.
In the original text, Qingchen fights with the king's substitute Arthur and Kashima Li Yunze, and life and death are abbreviated in a few paragraphs, and it is basically not written at all.
Therefore, in this revision, 743 was rewritten and the content of this life and death test was completely deleted. Qingchen did not continue the life and death test after the battle.
Originally, he needed to complete his life and death this time and return to the other world to face Chen Yu.
But this time, Dayu finally admitted that he was Qingchen's team, so that Qingchen didn't have to worry about it, which probably completed the line between Dayu and Qingchen.
In the follow-up plot, although Qingchen did not complete life and death during this time travel, it had no impact on the main plot, because he did not fight Chen Yu after traveling through time, but used the chemical reaction of Shroud and Dayu to defeat Chen's troops.
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Then he directly explored the underground base of Huozhong's bionic body, and Qingchen had no chance to take action.
Well, I will leave this matter of life and death until tomorrow. Qingchen will end up in the world this time, and the most important thing is to take Chen Jiazhang, the decadent knight, with him.
When Qingchen met the Chen family earlier, he saw that his uncle was drowning his sorrows in drinking, but he did nothing. This was very inappropriate.
Qingchen will take his uncle through life and death again. A knight should have the ability to influence and inspire others.
However, it would be inappropriate to sketch a life-and-death test, so I will mainly revise this tomorrow. I will let you know the specific revisions in the progress of the revision.
Okay, that’s all for today.
See you all tomorrow!
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