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Today, the full text has been revised. The last two chapters (966, 967) have been rewritten, that is, the last life and death test has been rewritten. There are about 8,000 new words added. You can take a look at them as easter eggs.
This is probably the last time to write and revise the progress. The update will resume tomorrow. In order to complete it safely, one or two chapters will be updated before 12 o'clock every night.
Now let’s summarize the overall modifications.
I won’t go into the small details, but let’s talk about the main points first.
Even if you haven’t looked at the revision progress before, you can get the full picture of the revisions by looking at this one.
1. In terms of rationality, the bugs in the full text have been fixed to make the overall logic smoother.
Some students said that bugs are getting more and more fixed. I looked at the feedback and found that they were mainly concentrated in more than 200 chapters. There was a problem with the background cache of the starting point, which caused the new content to not overwrite the old content, so everyone needs to scroll down when reading.
Refreshing or re-downloading the full text does not require any money as long as you have subscribed.
Here we also explain why some students asked why they still need money. One possibility is that they skipped the booking before, and another possibility is that they used event coins or enjoyed limited exemptions before, so this situation occurred.
2. In terms of characters, the level of spending pen and ink is divided into three levels, with the first level being the most, followed by the following.
The first level enriches the details for the characters such as Kamidai Yunluo, Chen Yu, He Jinqiu, and Li Yunshou, making the characters' words and deeds more consistent before and after, and also increasing their richness by creating backgrounds.
For example, Kamishiro Yunluo and the inheritance of Onmyoji, as well as killing Kamishiro Chiaki with his own hands.
For example, Chen Yu hated his father when he was a child, and why his father later became his inner demon.
Such as the changes this autumn, from being selfish and distrustful of others, to regaining your original intention.
The second level contains rich details for characters such as Li Dongze, Dayu, Chen Jiazhang, Zheng Yuandong, Li Shu, and Li Changqing.
Li Dongze unlocks the second level of weather forecast, which allows him to actively change the weather and lower the temperature by 40 degrees.
Dayu obtained the forbidden object ACE-005 Dafu, and was informed by Qingchen about the conditions for unlocking Dafu's second form.
Chen Jiazhang's path to becoming a knight was cut off, but his hope was rekindled by Qingchen.
Before He Jinqiu died, he gave Boss Zheng the correct gold coin, and Boss Zheng used the correct gold coin to house the steam train. The steam train had been collecting gold coins, and it was actually this one that he was waiting for.
Increase the scenes between Li Changqing, Li Shu and Qingchen. In the original text, Qingchen never took Li Changqing out to play. He didn’t have much interaction with Li Shu and other Li family members, but now they have fought together and watched fireworks with Li Changqing.
, which can be regarded as perfecting the character relationship.
The third level is for Jiang Xiaotang, Wang Yuchao, Zhao Mingke and others to arrange nodes.
When Li Yunshou sacrificed the Li family, Jiang Xiaotang organized civilian airships to attack the Blackwater City fleet and sacrificed his life.
After destroying the Age of Gods, Qingchen went to the north and erected a monument for the fallen soldiers at the A02 military base.
Although this level is not that important, it is the finishing touch for some characters.
3. Major changes in plot.
The first change is that Qingchen can hide better in the early stage.
The second change is to delete all ambiguous descriptions.
The third change is to delete Qingchen’s behavior in the early stage of putting Joker playing cards when he was idle. It seemed quite embarrassing. He did it many times in the original text, but now he did it once to deliberately provoke the opponent.
The fourth change is to modify the last battle in the octagonal cage to make it more reasonable and exciting.
The fifth change is to modify the role of the Heaven and Earth chessboard in the overall situation. Among them, the role of Li Shutong's concealment in the mid-to-late stage will appear in the near future.
The sixth change is the process of Qingchen being captured by the gods and going to the A02 base. There are major changes here, and many plots involve rewriting. It is more reasonable and more consistent with Qingchen's character.
The seventh change is to add details of the Parents' Association's annexation of the Mechanicum, which also involves a lot of rewriting.
The eighth change is to add a plot in which Qing Chen takes Li Shu and other Li children to find other shadow candidates, increasing his bond with the Li children, and making Qing Yi convinced.
The ninth change is to rewrite the sea surfing life and death test to make it more thrilling, and also adds a small easter egg with Yangyang.
The tenth change is the change of He Xiaoxiao's group chat, which is merged and simplified. I once wanted to re-write Chuang Wang and others here, but I gave up after the change, because the friends in these subsequent group chats are really not the same.
It's so important, it seems like there are only a few words in it.
The eleventh change is to modify some details of the interaction with Jinguji Maki to make this section more reasonable.
The twelfth change is to add details of the containment conditions of forbidden objects (Red Long Sword, Chen Yu Qingniu, etc.).
The thirteenth change is to modify the details of Shadow Qingzhun's farewell, such as making his lost century more reasonable and more consistent with his own choices.
The fourteenth change is to correct the inconsistency in the settings of Dayu, Zhongyu and Xiaoyu.
The fifteenth change is to correct the details of the identity of Kamishiro Senchi.
The sixteenth change is a complete rewrite of the skiing life-and-death test. The original text was abbreviated on Mount Everest. The new version is about coming to the other world and taking Chen Jiazhang to the Southwest Snow Mountains. The two of them walked through the life-and-death test again, awakening Chen Jiazhang's original intention.
What is written here is more detailed and meaningful.
The seventeenth change discovers the sequence of the secret of becoming a god. In the original text, Qingchen somehow knew how to become a god. In the new version, he slowly discovered it. Boss He found it for him from the superconducting world.
The last piece of the puzzle.
The eighteenth change shortens the plot of Qingchen's solo adventure in the Western Continent, moves people as quickly as possible, and increases the role of the protagonist group.
The nineteenth change is that after Zhongyu possessed the Time Walker through nanorobots, he successfully 'smuggled' back to the surface world, gathered the remnants of the kingdom organization, and established the Extreme Night Organization, and later joined forces with the Puppet Master.
The twentieth change is to modify the clearance chapter of No. 001 Forbidden Land Amusement Park, where Qing Chen and Ren Xiaosu interact.
The twenty-first change is an embarrassing part of the original text: after Dayu and Zard were controlled by the puppet master, they disappeared and did not even appear again when they returned to the table world, so they were revised here and they were also online again.
The revised content of the entire book accounts for about 50% before chapter 900 and 50% after chapter 900. When it comes to Dayu, the rewritten plot is: after he is controlled, he will use his tricks to cooperate with the puppet master, which is actually to help Qingchen lay out the plot.
To lure out Zhongyu and the puppet master, and control the remaining kingdom members under his command.
During this period, Zhongyu's role in the outside world was increased, including how to gather the remaining troops, how to join forces with the puppet master, and how to interfere with Qingchen's last life-and-death test.
Then it was written that Dayu borrowed Dafu according to the puppet master's arrangement, and prepared to return to the other world to fight for his life.
The twenty-second change is that the last life and death test of 966 and 967 has also been rewritten.
The whole revision rewrote a lot of the plot. The three life and death levels were all areas where I did not write very well. The sloppiness of the last life and death level made me disappointed with the later plots, which directly led me to the idea of revising the text.
These changes are just a refinement of a large number of changes, but they are not complete. There are too many details to describe one by one. They can only allow old book friends to read this modification and continue reading.
Of course, if I were to suggest it, it might be better to start reading again from chapter 900, but I also know that not all book lovers are willing to read it. Those who are not willing to read it should just read this revised content.
Next, Qingchen is about to take his last step across the other world. Can he prevent the seven old monsters from being resurrected? Can he become a god?
Updates will resume tomorrow!
Next, it is expected to be completed in one month. You don’t need to vote for this book. I will finish writing this book with peace of mind.
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That’s all for today, see you all tomorrow!
Thanks to the book friends who made suggestions, to the book friends who encouraged me, to the book friends who never scolded me, and to the book friends who never left.
