First of all, I wish you all a happy Mid-Autumn Festival, happiness to your family, and good health!
There are relatively few chapters revised today, 339-344.
The main modifications are concentrated in Chapter 339, and 6,000 words of new content have been added to the middle part. Friends who have subscribed to this chapter can watch it for free. Old book friends can read it as a side story.
Then talk about the ideas for this part of the modification.
First, the relationship between Qingchen, Li Ke, and Qingyi progresses.
In the original text, the relationship between the three people was not actually written well. It was just that they all studied together in Qiuye Villa, Qingchen gave Qingyi initiation, and then Qingyi was a little touched and surprised, that's all.
But in the plot where Qingchen is the inspector, Qingyi suddenly starts to follow Qingchen. This is very abrupt, as if the plot arranges that he should follow Qingchen.
So in the new plot, Qingchen helped Qingyi eliminate some opponents and got more substantial help.
In this way, the subsequent plot will be natural.
Secondly, the master-disciple relationship between Li Shu and others and Qing Chen has improved.
In the original text, Mr. Li suddenly faked his death, and there was no progressive plot between master and apprentice. After Qingchen met Li Shu, he was always indifferent because the relationship between them was not in place.
So some new interactions have been added here, and everyone can beat other shadow candidates together.
Finally, there is the interaction between Qingchen and Li Changqing, which makes the relationship between the two people more natural and makes the subsequent rescue of Qingchen by Li Changqing more reasonable.
Then there is the plot connecting Li Yunshou and Li Xiurui.
In the original text, Qingchen wanted to give Li Xiurui initiation to extend his life by 21 years, but Li Xiurui refused because he had lived enough.
According to the timeline, Li Yunshou already knew his ending at this time.
If Li Xiurui also knew what Li Yunshou would face, then he should choose to extend his life by 21 years and bear all the consequences for his son. However, Li Yunshou chose to hide it and did not tell Li Xiurui anything. He did not want his father to experience the scolding and tattoos he had experienced.
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This father and son should actually be well written, and Li Yunshou should also add some detailed descriptions later, but there is a high probability that there will not be a 6,000-word extra.
No anti-theft novel network
Okay, after talking about today's content, tomorrow we will welcome the plot of the old man passing away.
Finally, I explain the doubts of some book friends. Some people say that the reason for changing the text is to sell the copyright...
In fact, except for Catastrophe, all my books have been sold out for a long time. Ye Ye sold them out when they first opened a year ago. My copyright is not that difficult to sell...
Now that I have suddenly changed the text, my collaborators are quite nervous. They all come to ask me if I will change the main plot. After all, everyone is almost finished. If I change the main plot, everyone's mentality will collapse.
I can only reply quickly. I won’t change the main story. I just want to enrich the characters and plots and optimize the plot...
By saying this, I just want to explain that the act of editing is not a utilitarian act. I hope everyone will be more considerate. After all, the previous plot is considered a free extra for old book friends. If you have any questions about the new plot, you can also give feedback to
This paragraph.
Okay, that’s all for today, let’s finish work early for the Mid-Autumn Festival!
