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Today’s revision progress is chapters 405-412.
I didn’t revise many chapters today, but I was really tired. I mainly rewrote the climax of life and death in chapters 411 and 412. There are about 5,000 words of new content. If you are interested, you can watch it as a free extra.
As mentioned before, this paragraph was written rather hastily in the original text.
I read the end of the chapter and remembered that that time was the competition time of the Dota TI International Invitational Tournament. As an old swordsman, I was updating 10,000 words a day while paying attention to the Dota competition.
The competition started immediately when I wrote Chapter 412 that day, so this climax was not refined.
According to convention, after writing the climax, it must be refined. For example, the plot of the god's scepter falling, and the plot of Qingchen climbing the cliff of Qingshan Mountain were refined two or three times before being released.
Under normal circumstances, the draft and the refinement are two different levels of content. The draft is to explain things clearly, while the refinement is the process of decorating the rough house.
After intensive revision, the original plot structure may even change.
For example, the last three chapters of the first sequence, "Darkest Hour," were completely different from the first version after being revised three times.
Many people think that the ending of the first sequence is too rushed, but in my opinion, The King is indeed unfinished, but the ending of the first sequence is indeed the abrupt end and soul-stirring I wanted. Many book friends want to know the follow-up, so I will
I wrote all the follow-up in the nomenclature of night instead of writing the postscript like a running account.
I sent the first and third versions of the ending to the supervisor of the first animation sequence, and she said there was a huge difference before and after the refinement.
Of course, I know my level is only about that, but it still makes me embarrassed to see such words.
Therefore, when writing Chapter 412 of Night, it has always been my regret that I did not refine it. Now that your emotions are not in the plot at that time, it may not seem that deep, but if you read it now, it is indeed better than before.
Better.
Recently, I have discovered a pattern. After 2-3 months on the shelf, many books will have a somewhat loose plot and a slightly loose structure. This also shows that the author is likely to enter a bottleneck at this time, which is a period of exhaustion.
You must learn a lesson for the next book. On the one hand, it is to remind yourself not to lose focus and to be wary of this happening again. Or you may choose to finish half of the book before publishing it, but then you don’t know when the new book will be released.
By the way, there is a little easter egg hidden in Chapter 412 about Qingchen and Yangyang, but it will not affect the direction of the subsequent plot. Again, this time the refinement only optimizes the plot and enriches the characters. There is no main line modification. It will be completed as soon as possible.
