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Today’s revision progress is Chapter 434-443.
Today's changes are quite big, including rewriting chapters 434 and 435.
In the original text, He Xiaoxiao's group chat suddenly merged with the Time Walker Conference, and a large group of people came in, such as Jian Shouqing, Shancheng Spicy Chicken, etc., but in fact they did not play a sufficient role in the group chat. These people
But they are really just a stranger, a stranger, and there is no need to join this highest-level group.
After some reflection, this may be the reason why He Xiaoxiao's group chat later disappeared from the plot. The characters were too complex and meaningless.
It’s easy to get bored while writing, so I gradually stopped writing.
There are also rules set by He Xiaoxiao (everyone must share information every month), which makes me feel very tired to write, so I don’t want to write anymore.
But in fact, the basis of group travel is not what exactly happened in the other world. I think the interaction of the time walkers in the first half is also one of the foundations of this theme, so in the change line, I tried to make the return of group chat.
So after the modification, the total number of people in the He Xiaoxiao group chat is 15.
The personnel list is as follows:
Bingyan-Qingchen
Jingshan-Zheng Yuandong
Taboo ACE-999-He Jinqiu
Fantasy Yu-Chen Yu
Zard-Zard Zheng Xiang
Qingbao-Kongyin of the Age of Gods
Yue'er-April, a member of the Taboo Tribunal
Lu Ya-Jiang Yichen, the time traveler of Kashima, the top young meat in the world
Chuang Wang-Zhang Chuang, mechanical dog
Liu Dezhu-Liu Dezhu
Li Si - Fortunately, there are guardians around me
Little Genius-Yangyang
Haicheng Wu Yanzu-Chen Sui
The best-Qingyuan
He Xiaoxiao-Jiuren
Let me talk about a few character setting ideas. First of all, I hope that all the members of the forces will gather in this group chat: Qing family, Kashima, Jindai, Chen family, Forbidden Inquisition, Spades, Matrix, Hongye, and Puppet Master.
The purpose of determining Yue'er's identity is to allow the Forbidden Tribunal to return to the plot in the middle and later stages (including the containment conditions of some taboo objects, and more descriptions of taboo objects)
The purpose of determining the identity of Li Si is to enrich the content of the Shadow War.
There are also Qingyuan, Jiuran and others.
In this way, the bond within the group will be deeper, and future collisions between time walkers will be more interesting, without causing some people to go offline inexplicably.
Make the characters richer.
I have thought about it for a long time, and I must admit that I am personally not only exhausted from long-term serialization, but also because I have no experience in writing super long novels, which leads to the spread of the stall being too large and too many branch lines, so it is easy to miss the branch lines.
These branch plots are even in the setting and outline, but as I write them, I don’t care about them.
If it is a traditional web novel, with the protagonist practicing and upgrading in a straight line, most of the supporting characters can be discarded after they cannot keep up with the protagonist's upgrade, but if it is a closed-loop plot, then something similar cannot happen.
Let’s talk about the subsequent changes: Chapters 440-443 were rewritten.
In the original text, the plot of Qingchen pretending to be a shadow to issue a mission was a bit sloppy, but the new version is more reasonable.
But now in this version, the mission released by Qingchen is no longer to go directly to the forbidden land No. 065 and prepare to trade Qingmu with the Gods.
Instead, focus on the Mechanicum first and finish writing this branch line.
City No. 10 is the headquarters of the Mechanicus and the birthplace of the Parents' Association. Therefore, if the Parents' Association wants to develop the plot in the future, it is bound to completely eradicate the force of the Mechanicus.
This plot was even hidden in the original text. This time I decided to at least write about it completely. At the same time, the eradication of the Mechanicus and the third round of shadow wars are parallel. At this time, Qingchen's power is still very strong.
He is weak and only has C-level strength, so he has to use the shadow candidates to achieve his goals.
This piece of content should be released after rewriting tomorrow, and I will explain the progress of the modification at that time.
