As you can see, this book has finally come to an end after writing the separate chapters of the heroines. According to the usual practice, I want to express some opinions and talk with you, but when I started writing this article, I couldn’t stop writing it for a while.
I know what to say, and I don’t have any structure or rules, so I just write wherever I think of it. Please forgive me if there is any inappropriateness.
When I was writing online articles before, I saw a post written by a senior. The general idea was that he would only think about the ending wholeheartedly after writing online articles. At the time, I didn’t think so, because I had written many books in succession.
Although the length is not too long, there are always hundreds of thousands of words, I don't really feel this way, but this book really made me feel it.
The feeling that I was struggling to move forward at the end of writing, that I couldn't move forward even if I picked up the pen and couldn't continue writing, really made me sad.
In fact, I know the reasons in my heart. Some of them are framework problems left over from the beginning of the story. Some are new problems that emerged after I revised them. Some of them are problems caused by my limited energy due to my busy work, so that...
The last volume and chapter have to be written over many days, which makes the frequency of updates a bit abstract. This is my fault.
I also have to admit that I actually have regrets about this story. Some of the high-spirited things should be given, and some of the things that should be given are intact and overlooked by me. This is actually an old problem of mine. Sometimes I always subconsciously write.
It brings something less positive and uplifting, so every time when I finish writing my closing remarks, I think: I will definitely write a more uplifting story next time, but I always forget it unknowingly.
I revised part of the outline of this book midway, but left most of the rest unchanged. Especially in the early stage, I wrote a lot of things using the original outline. Once revised, there would always be a lot of conflicts, so the revised parts were not too many.
The biggest change is the relationship between Renee and Helaire.
I said in the early stage that Renee will run through the entire story and is also the most difficult heroine to conquer. In fact, the outline content at that time was based on the fact that Helaire and Renee were the same existence. I
In this way, many plots actually become extremely coherent, especially the appearance of Baimon at the end of the third volume and the sending of Fisher back in the fourth volume, so that the plot of the last volume will become reasonable.
One is the human side of the ocean; the other is the divine side of the ocean.
But in that case, Renee may become more controversial, even more controversial than Elizabeth.
So at the end of the third volume, I still relented and separated Renee and Helaire, but the result was that the plot got out of control.
The "Tsuki" in the fourth volume has become Helaire. In the fifth volume, the plot where Helel causes destruction everywhere should not have her direct figure. Instead, there are many plots and Shura fields in which Renee participates. In this way, the whole story is also different.
It will be more relaxed, interesting and passionate. It will not be until the final sixth volume, when Fisher realizes that Renee is the ocean, that the content becomes about searching for her last incarnation, which will bring a bit of heaviness.
This decision of mine caused a bit of heaviness that was originally felt at the end to arrive early, covering almost the entire fifth and sixth volumes, which is enough to be called a failure.
Maybe there is a way to remedy this, but I really lack the corresponding ability and energy to sort out the outline in detail, sort out the plot, and make the most perfect judgment, so I feel regretful.
There are some things that I should have changed but didn't, such as the plot of Asuka and Jasmine, and there are other small ones that I can only display here.
As for Elizabeth, I never changed her role from beginning to end. Her appearance, evil and pitiful character, and her reconciliation with herself and Fisher in the end were all part of the original outline.
In fact, I am very partial to Elizabeth, and I devoted a lot of content to her in this book, trying to describe her hysterical love as much as possible.
For this image, I made reference to the image of a yandere, which is a three-dimensional yandere.
Some readers may like her, otherwise there wouldn't be so many readers waiting to see her ending; or some readers may hate her and think she is an out-and-out lunatic, and curse her in the comments.
It's just that as far as I'm concerned, she has both. Fischer did something wrong, and she did the same, that's why she seemed so naughty.
In the previous chapter, I wrote a lot about the sweetness between her and Fisher when they were young in the extra chapter, and also wrote about her cruelty and madness in the main text, so in the extra chapter, I have actually written all of these, so I did not write any more about them.
Repeated things.
The only thing she lacks is a face-to-face reconciliation with Fisher, that's all.
After that, we all knew that she was greeted by a new student. As for the specific details of the new student, it was perfect to refer to the blank space of their past time.
Hey, looking back carefully, I just rushed all the way to a controversial place, which makes me laugh a little bit.
But everyone, this is not to prove how noble my taste is. Other plots that are more popular in the market are as kitschy as they are. I like to read various other articles. I read all kinds of topics, and I don’t care about any topics.
all write,
In fact, I envy those authors whose works are very light and interesting, because I can't write them myself. I have tried to add humorous content in many places, but the overall tone has been declining and heavy, and I have no confidence in the market.
Not very responsive, but quite sensitive to one's own emotional reactions (annoyed).
So when I finish writing each book, I will write in it what I am writing now, "The next book must be more positive." However, every change has some dissatisfaction with me.
"I will do better next time." I want to make this promise to myself, but I feel like I don't have the confidence.
However, writing is a wonderful puzzle to me. It is not easy to find something that can make me rush and focus in this era. Thinking about it this way, even if the next try cannot completely achieve the ardent expectations this time,
, and it is always a somewhat progressive change.
This may give you some inspiration when writing a story next time.
Okay, everyone, no matter what, I have finished writing.
Sometimes when I am busy with other things, I will feel incredible when I think about it: "Oh my God, I wrote a work of more than three million words." When I think about it carefully, this is something worth remembering.
I repeat chapters and chapters day and night, all relying on readers who have read this book.
Here, I would like to express my special thanks to everyone who has read this story all the way and seen it here.
Really, thank you very much!
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Everything about this book has been said. As for the next book, I have actually decided on the general content and written the corresponding outline, but I don’t want to draw any conclusions here, nor will I spoil the next one.
The corresponding content in this book can only ensure a different experience.
After I take a break and think about it carefully, I will upload a new chapter.