"Senior, why do you keep these bad reviews? Why don't you delete them?"
"When readers open this book and see all the negative reviews, will they still read your book?"
He glanced at Xiao Yi with big eyes.
What's wrong with Su Yunqing?
"But what they said makes sense. I am indeed a novice."
“Also, wouldn’t it be bad to delete other people’s comments?”
Shrugging, Xiao Yi was not surprised by the gentle temperament of his senior sister, and immediately deleted some negative comments in the comment area that involved personal attacks.
The remaining ones discussing the plot are left behind.
Then he took a piece of apple from the cabinet and handed it to Su Yunqing.
The senior sister then stuck out her little head, pursed her lips and sipped the fruit in her mouth, her eyes narrowed to a slit.
She liked the affectionate behavior of her younger brother very much, which made her feel as sweet as before.
No, it makes people happier than before.
"Xiao Yi, readers all said that my kiss scene was too raw, and they didn't feel involved at all."
The faint moonlight slanted in from the window softly and fell on Su Yunqing's peach-like face. The senior sister bit her lip, her starry eyes were shining with meaning.
"so what?"
Xiao Yi joked.
"They, they asked me to use local materials so that I could better create the effect they wanted."
Su Yunqing cast an affectionate glance at the soft-browed young boy next to her, and there was a lingering affection in her eyes.
"Using local materials? What's the method of using local materials?"
Holding back her smile, Xiao Yi replied seriously.
As soon as he finished speaking, a small body threw himself into his arms arrogantly and unreasonably. His small hands straightened his face, and a pair of warm thin lips pressed on it.
"That's it!"
Huo!
A sneak attack, right?
Senior sister, you are getting better and better now!
How much knowledge did you acquire in this one month of summer vacation?
However, Xiao Yi is naturally not a passive person, and instantly turns from defense to offense!
Before he could taste the soft and smooth touch, Su Yunqing suddenly pushed his chest and squeezed out a sentence through her teeth.
"Xiao Yi, wait, wait a moment~"
"What's wrong?"
Xiao Yi let her go, looking a little curious.
Then I saw my senior lying down at the counter again, picked up her phone and started editing in Didi.
About a minute later, Su Yunqing put down her phone and posted it again.
"I, I wrote it down, Xiao Yi, do you want to continue?"
Xiao Yi:???
Are you really using me as a tool for collecting information?
When he couldn't laugh or cry, the two blurry figures overlapped again.
Two more minutes later.
"Xiao Yi, wait, wait a minute!"
Isn't it?
Coming again?
After repeated attempts, the anger in Xiao Yi's heart was aroused.
He seriously doubted whether the doting, shy little girl in front of him was teasing him like this on purpose?
The moon is actually not very bright tonight.
The dim stars hang alone in the sky, exuding a flickering luster.
After some plundering, Xiao Yi let go of the man in his arms with satisfaction.
Xiao Yi pinched her fair little face and teased.
"Have you collected enough information?"
"Would you like some more?"
"Enough! Enough!"
"No, I'm going to faint."
After taking a few quick breaths, Su Yunqing leaned cutely into the arms of her sweetheart.
There is a mixture of shyness and sweetness in my heart.
Before coming here, she never thought that progress with Xiao Yi would be so rapid. She thought it would be a protracted battle, but she didn't expect that her junior disciple's attitude towards her would change so much.
This is naturally the result Su Yunqing dreamed of.
It was too late for her to be happy.
Xiao Yi asked, looking at the seductive look of Xiafei's cheeks on the beauty in his arms.
"I can write kiss scenes now, but what if readers have other requests later?"
"any request?"
Tilting her little head, Su Yunqing asked curiously.
"When two people fall in love, they must experience encounter, acquaintance, holding hands, hugging, and kissing~"
"You have already written the previous plot, but what about the next step after the kiss?"
"At that time, readers will still feel that your writing is too jerky and does not give people a sense of immersion. So, should you collect the material in advance?"
When it comes to pornographic matters, even though Su Yunqing has read a lot of romance novels, she is no match for the veteran Xiao Yi. He has successfully led her away in just a few words.
"It seems so~"
Blinking her big eyes stupidly twice, Su Yunqing looked at the slightly raised corners of her junior brother's mouth, and then gently retracted into the quilt.
There was a tremor in the quilt, and then she waved to Xiao Yi: "Xiao Yi, you, come up~"
With a pretentious hum, Xiao Yi took off her shoes and got on the bed, leaning gently on the head of the bed.
Outside the bed, Su Yunqing's little hands continued to tap on the phone.
Beautifully named.
Get materials!
It's just that it's unclear who is doing whatever they want in the name of collecting materials.
The senior sister also put down her phone.
She has already written more than a thousand words, which is enough to fill in the details.
Glancing at Xiao Yi shyly, Su Yunqing's body slowly slid down, and after a while, only her eyes were left exposed.
"Hehe, Yaxin said the same thing~"
Zhao Yaxin?
Fellow-minded people!
It seemed like I had a chance to chat with her about my experience.
However, when he thought about the unhappy breakup between her and him before, Xiao Yi felt bored again.
Thinking of this, Xiao Yi suddenly lost much interest. He glanced at the time and realized that it was almost eleven o'clock at night.
"Okay, go to bed now, see you tomorrow."
After saying something softly, Xiao Yi prepared to leave the guest room.
"Good night, Xiao Yi~"
The person on the bed responded softly.
"Good night, senior."
It wasn't until the figure of the junior high school student had disappeared outside the door that Su Yunqing flapping her little feet on the bed with an excited look on her face.
yeah!
Su Yunqing, you are the best!
………
………
The time came to twelve o'clock at night.
At this time, Xiao Yi had also fallen asleep.
The stars outside the window completely hid behind the clouds at this moment.
The whole world was completely silent, except for the occasional croaking of frogs.