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'Deepseek's Evaluation of the Book'

Question: Please evaluate Qidian Chinese website’s novel "", analyze its advantages and disadvantages, and what can be improved and paid attention to.

answer:

(Core highlights and advantages)

The innovative integration of the world view

Starting from the Pirate World, it gradually introduces other anime/fantasy worlds (such as "Demon Slayer", "Death", "Naruto", etc.), to meet readers' expectations for cross-world views and to meet the current trend of "infinite flow" and "comprehensive flow"

trend.

The conflict between local forces in the Pirate World (such as the World Government, the Dragon Man) and other civilizations is innovative, such as strengthening the drama of the conquest process through technology tree differences (cold weapons vs. hot weapons).

Grand Narrative and Strategic Perspective

The protagonist promotes interplanar confrontation as the "ruler behind the scenes", weakens personal force crushing, focuses on regime games and civilized wars, and breaks away from the traditional "fight alone" routine of fan-culturalism.

The reconstruction of the power structure of the original Pirate work (such as the Five Old Stars and Im's setting expansion) enhances the depth of the story and gives the Tianlong Ren Group a more complex motivation.

Rhythm control and refreshing density

The phased progress of cross-world battles is clear (Pirates → Low Martial World → High Martial World), and the length of each copy is properly controlled to avoid delays.

The continuous creation of refreshing points through the circular chain of "resource plundering-technology upgrade-fighting power expansion" is in line with the needs of online readers for "snowball-like growth".

(Problems and limitations)

Skip.

(Optimization and suggestions)

Deepen character arc and emotional interaction

Increase the protagonist's inner struggle (such as the moral trade-offs on life in another world), or create human conflicts through betrayal/sacrifice of important supporting characters.

Design independent branches for indigenous characters (such as the identity crisis of CP0 agents in another world) to enhance the sense of narrative hierarchy.

Improve the cross-world rule system

Introduce concepts such as "world will resistance" to explain the compatibility issues of different plane forces (such as the side effects of demon fruits in the magical world).

Respond to the speed of technological explosion through technical bottlenecks (such as energy restrictions and scarcity of materials) and maintain a sense of tension.

Strengthen copy differentiation and depth

Design special conquest strategies based on the traits of the other world (such as using biological isolation rather than forceful suppression on the zombie world).

Added the plot of "cultural backlash" (such as the people in the pirate world come into contact with the ideas of other countries and triggered social changes), and extend the main connotation.

Balance "cool" and "reasonable"

Use "stage setbacks" (such as the failure of a certain other world to conquer a strategic retreat) to break the narrative inertia of Long Aotian and increase the plot tension.

Joining third-party forces (such as other time travelers or high-plane observers) creates suspense.

No mistakes, one song, one post, one content, one reading!

(Summarize)

The novel is of the upper-middle level in the "Piracy + Infinite Streaming" track, and attracts specific readers with its novel dominant perspective and diversified world stitching ability, but it needs to be further polished in terms of character shaping, logical rigor and copy innovation.

It is possible to add more humanistic thinking and emotional resonance points while maintaining the update volume, and is expected to break through homogeneous competition and become a benchmark work for the comprehensive and cultural essay.

(at last)

So what do you think?


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