The first volume has been written and has sixty-four chapters, which means "King Wen's sixty-four hexagrams". Therefore, the last chapter has a bit too many words.
Personally, I still didn’t get the feeling I wanted from the writing. I originally wanted to try a multi-line perspective, starting from the three lines of Henghua, Liuhui, and Laoyezi at the same time.
It seems that the plots of Fu Danwei and Fu Henghua are not connected. In fact, Fu Henghua's actions involve part of the energy of the Heavenly Demon Palace. And it was Fudanwei who was sitting on Panlong Island, and the five altar masters of the Heavenly Demon Palace did not pursue Henghua and his party.
, which made the Seven Difficulties much weaker.
As Song Chunqiu said, both sides of the Heavenly Demon Palace wanted to succeed, but in the end, everything was in vain.
Of course, Song Chunqiu and Ji Mingfeng contributed a lot. After all, they held back the Lord of the Demon Palace and sent Henghua and his party to Erlongjian. Only then did they achieve a satisfactory result in the end.
Regarding these two characters, we will gradually mention them in the next few volumes. They are both involved with a hidden figure.
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As for "Seven Emotions Refining True Reality, Human Tribulation Replaces Heavenly Tribulation", it is one of the two routes in the original setting.
Should I choose to survive the Heavenly Tribulation at Buried Turtle Reef or directly use the Seven Emotions Tribulation? I thought about it for several days and decided to choose the second option.
But the writing was not strong enough, the description of the Seven Difficulties was too sparse, and the three lines were mixed together. Everyone said that the plot was too dragging, so they should have gathered together earlier and unified the multiple lines as soon as possible.
Regarding the plot of the Northern Territory, Henghua fights water ghosts. I should have taken the opportunity to understand a certain secret method that is very suitable for "The Creation Hui Yuan Gong". But after thinking about it, the relevant plot and settings were moved to the next volume. Metallurgical Taoist
Heling the Spiritual Painter is already complicated enough, let’s leave the ghost path lineage behind.
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According to the original plot setting, Fu Liuhui saved the panda mother and son on the way, which wasted time. When she arrived at Dilie Island, she happened to catch up with Ji Mingfeng and the master of the Yuanhuo Altar duel, which triggered the Dragon King's wrath. Next, she encountered
Song Chunqiu got his advice and went to Bury Turtle Reef to guard it. In this way, Song Chunqiu's appearance would not be too sudden.
However, the main text deletes the plot of Fu Liuhui and only retains the outcome of this plot. It is mentioned in a few simple sentences, which is a bit blunt.
The content of the original seventy-two chapters was compressed to sixty-four. Although more words were crammed into the last few chapters, a rough calculation shows that fifteen thousand words should have been deleted, right?
Therefore, Fu Liuhui, a female character who was originally intended to be well described in the first volume, was considered a failure.
This also indirectly leads to the fact that, in addition to Xiaoyu, who is relatively transparent and has no luminous point of his own, and Jin Xian'e, who is relatively flat, the first volume highlights the description of male characters.
The yang rises and the yin wanes.
As for Fu Tongjun, although she was mentioned several times, it was just a hint after all, because she is the main character in the second volume.
In the conception, this book uses Heng Hua as the absolute protagonist, telling the story of the changes of a cultivating family. In each volume, several Fu family children will appear.
So I put a lot of effort into getting 121 brothers and sisters for Henghua. The first volume specially spent many paragraphs describing those people.
For example, with Fu Maiyuan, Fu Henghua was given the opportunity to use Fu Maiyuan's name. This is so that when Fu Maiyuan appears in the future, everyone can react immediately. Ah, this person is Fu Henghua's fifth brother.
There are also six talents inherited from Fu Jiabai Huangtang. In the future, these people will appear with different talents and show their different understanding and usage methods.
Fu Xiangfeng's understanding of Fengyu and Fengyin was simply weak in the first volume!
But this is to slowly strengthen in the next few volumes.
There are no weak abilities, only stupid users. This is what the first volume has been hinting at.
Henghua can solve a series of troubles even by using "Purchase Technique", which is in sharp contrast to Fu Xiangfeng.
The higher the skills and spells are, the better. The best ones are the ones that are suitable.
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Next is the second volume. If the first volume is just to let everyone see the Fu family and see one page of the world of cultivation, it spends a lot of time describing the settings.
Then the second volume is the real plot confrontation, and there will be much less explanation about the settings.
So, this kind of slow-burn plot, which takes a whole volume to set up, will definitely make readers complain!
This volume actually describes a lot of hidden things.
For example, in Erlongjian, Fu Xuanxing controls Lihuo, the nameless sword technique, and Song Chunqiu's inexplicable attitude towards the Fu family, etc.
If nothing unexpected happens, it will be explained in the second volume. We have to see how the chapter is broken in the second volume. Personally, I hope to break the plot on Huomen Island. But due to space reasons, it may also be broken directly between the Fu family and the Wei family.
Fight. Anyway, it depends on the situation.
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