Let me first explain some of the loudest points to the fathers:
One, unfinished
I definitely don’t admit this in my own heart.
Most of you find it awkward, but I predicted it when I summarized it at the end of the volume on November 18th. This is the last volume, with 200,000 to 300,000 words.
Maybe you also feel that the ending is not what you expected. Well, I pay most attention to logic. Later in the book, the characters acted independently, and I lost the ability to control it.
Maybe I haven’t seen enough of my father? Do you think there should be a lot of plots in the follow-up? Let me be a little narcissistic, haha. This was also mentioned in the summary at the end of the volume on November 28th. Yes, I cut at least half of the outline.
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I prefer writing about reform and literary drama.
The necessity of writing Che Tongwen, what is Che Tonggui, how much pressure the First Emperor carried when promulgating the county system, the fierce collision between feudal aristocrats and the revolutionary ideas of the new era, the pursuit of various scholars, and the profound meanings of hundreds of schools of thought. For this reason, I
I read a lot of historical materials and books.
But the fathers don't like to see it.
Don't be stubborn, the results are there in the background.
During the period when Ying Chengyu succeeded to the throne, both orders bloomed, and each one dropped more than the other.
If you still think that I am wrong, then you are right. Readers are your parents and they are always right.
After the Six Kingdoms were defeated and the Central Plains was unified, the follow-up was to recuperate and recuperate, a series of reforms to develop industry and people's livelihood, not to open up a new battlefield and displease my fathers.
It ended with the death of the Overlord, and the fathers were cursing and saying that the ending was unfinished and they wanted to see the follow-up. I actually thought it was pretty good, but of course, I still don’t admit that it was unfinished!
If the development of the story is said to be unfinished, I think it’s something that can’t be helped. The general framework has been set, and it will fall apart if the characters’ personalities are changed.
But if the ending is too sudden and feels like it shouldn’t have ended, I don’t agree with it. I don’t agree with it. I don’t agree with it! I made a notice two months in advance (??﹏??)!
2. Mohist forced tragedy and collective wisdom
I don't like tragedies. The older I get, the more I like to watch happy things. But that's what the Mohist family is like. If I don't do this, I won't be the Mohist family.
Why do you have to take revenge physically after making explosives? Why do you have to go into battle to avenge yourself and die?
Because the Mohists did not want to use explosives, too many people would die if they were used.
In the last battle, Ying Chengyu used explosives to directly bury all Chu soldiers and Zhang Chu surrender soldiers. The Mo family had a grudge to avenge and just wanted to kill Xiang Yu and end the war.
The Mohist family is not a military strategist. They kill people to protect more people, rather than enjoying killing. The last battle of the Mohist family was for the revenge of the giant, and also for the second emperor not to use explosives.
I didn't write down the reason in detail. I thought my fathers could guess from between the lines that it was my fault.
3. Ying Chengxi's character, when fighting the Xiongnu, he did not kill the old soldiers but the new soldiers. Finally, he was able to kill Xiang Yu but did not kill him early. He had to wait until the Mohists died in battle.
I've explained this before, and I'll repeat it again. People's personalities are contradictory. Real people are not facial masks. If you put a label on them, you won't take it off for the rest of your life. People have double standards.
Ying Chengxuan is not a saint, but a mortal. He can formulate strategies for his ideals, but he will also violate the rules because he offends people close to him. It is a Mohist giant who can uphold justice and kill parents and children who commit crimes.
Less than.
It is impossible to treat everyone equally. There is no need to find excuses to make up for this. This is just human beings.
Including Ying Chengyu's subsequent change in behavior, from accepting surrender to throwing explosives, it is very simple, revenge, revenge for the scientists.
Using explosives to blow down the city wall of Chen County was revenge, and killing all the Chu troops was also revenge.
The person closest to him, the scientist who was regarded as the pilot lighthouse, was killed by Xiang Yu. He didn't care about anything, but it was all settled, and he couldn't be unreasonable when his brain got hot.
The reason why he doesn't stop the Mohists is because this is their own choice. He doesn't want to change the Mohists. He wants the Mohists to continue to live purely and defend their doctrines for scientists.
As long as he, the emperor of the Qin Empire, does not target the Mohist family, the Mohist family will not die.
I have not overturned the character. These are real people. Murderers will also donate money to disaster areas. My father, who believes that people are black and white, must be too well protected by his family, or he is a young and energetic young man.
Four, pit
The basic pitfalls have been filled in, and the rest of Guiguzi’s prophecy, heaven, and the New Year conversation between Ying Chengyu and Guiguzi, I deliberately did not write out this pitfall, and will write an extra to fill it in.
In fact, it can also be written in the main text.
Mainly for those celebrating the Chinese New Year, I don’t want you to emo, Happy New Year!
If you have any other pitfalls, please leave a comment on this sentence. Within three days, I will fill it in for you! The main focus is service enthusiasm!