0. Most of the leave requests have been deleted, making the reading experience more comfortable. (The leave requests are all screenshots, and there are many comments. In the future, I may make a video to express my gratitude for this special and unforgettable writing journey.)
1. Corrected all typos from 158-218 (as long as they were pointed out by you)
2. A new character has been added in Chapter 190: Back Elephant, the second mate of the Kuli Pirates.
3. In section 191, some readers pointed out that the protagonist’s language was inappropriate.
The original text is——
The dragon boy smiled and said: "We are human race and the people of the empire, and dealing with the murlocs is the way to do justice! Of course, there is another important reason. The high price offered by Lord Dutong really impressed us."
In fact, it was intentional.
This is the superficial "slip of the tongue" of the dragon boy, but the actual "voice".
4. Some book friends pointed out that the first volume of "Beast Rider" is missing section 6. After checking, the reason was found: the first volume has been revised, based on readers' opinions, and after self-thinking, some descriptions in the opening sections have been cut.
, so that it is no longer bloated and cumbersome, and the reduction is about the same as one section. I forgot to modify the title, and it looks like there is a section missing. Now change "Section 5" to "Section 5-6".
5. In section 209, the two passwords of Huantong were modified and two more meaningful numbers were used, which are the official book club group number of "" and the group number of the Deacon Penguin group.
In Chapter 6.214, there is an error in the salary of Huantong’s recruitment of Zong Ge. There is an extra word “ten thousand”, which has been corrected.
7. Some book friends responded: Alchemy devices are used a lot in melee, and it feels uncomfortable to read. I am considering adding some descriptions somewhere in the previous article to make it less obtrusive. If there are any official changes in the future, another explanation will be given.
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8. Today the protagonist group officially leaves the island, and the plot about Double Eye Island has officially come to an end. Let me share some of my feelings here: The melee on Double Eye Island cost me a lot of thought, and it involved many characters, including pirates, mercenaries, merchants, and lords.
, fish-man type, silver-level lone ranger, etc.
Each of them has their own ideas, unique abilities, styles of doing things, and their limitations.
In this melee, everyone has their own performance, and it is these performances that make them collide with each other and influence each other.
Some people draw water from bamboo baskets but come to nothing, some people quietly make a fortune, some people go from heaven to hell, and some people fall into danger but survive.
Until the end, the outcome of each character cannot be predicted.
Even the protagonist team is like this, unable to help themselves and falling into a whirlpool.
This is exactly the literary effect I want to achieve - from this melee, I can reflect the weirdness of fate, the cruel life after the collision of reality and dreams, and the weakness and helplessness of a single person in the social game.
Even if the protagonist group has many trump cards, they are still walking on the edge of the cliff, almost ready for defeat.
Such an encounter also hints at the positioning of the protagonist group.
To the entire world, they are still minor players. If there are some disturbances in their destiny journey, they are in danger of being overturned.
At the same time, it also describes the main theme of the entire era from the side - the invasion of the Orc Continent by the Shengming Empire.
Under this theme, the Eye Island that Hutong worked so hard to manage was forced to be converted into a transportation island. The determination of the fishmen to regain their homeland is worthy of recognition, but in fact, even if they can capture it, they cannot hold it.
Failure is inevitable.
Under the tide of the times, both Hutong and the fish-men tribe are so weak.
It can also be seen that the current protagonist group cannot be on the stage of the times and does not have the qualifications. A little trouble can make them irreversible.
Next, how did this group of people step onto the stage of the times?
How many storms will sweep over them, separate them, torture them, turn against them, make them enlightened, and make them shine?
When I think about it, I think it's a bit exciting.