First of all, the time for coding is really limited. I only have two hours after get off work every day to conceive the plot and then code. I will try to write as much as possible, save it, and then publish it slowly.
The plot advancement was very problematic at the beginning. Many readers pointed out the irrationality of some plots. After I thought about it carefully, I also felt that it made sense, but there was no chance to modify it. Once modified, it would almost be a major change.
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Then, explain some of its shortcomings.
First, the protagonist smokes.
This is not explained.
Second, selling Lao Wei’s account card is too cheap.
Say a few words about this.
I have never played Honor, so I don’t know the price. I can only refer to the actual price.
Qualified skill points, full body orange equipment.
Honor does not have an enhanced amplification system, and these orange equipment can also be obtained through channels. It is unrealistic to say that a set of orange equipment can sell for tens of thousands of yuan.
And if it is sold to a partner like Lao Wei who has been taking care of the business for many years, it will naturally be an internal price, otherwise who will buy it.
Third, the character positioning is like Kuroko Tetsuya.
I very much agree with this point of view, it is very similar, and I have learned from some settings, such as Tetsuya Kuroko's enthusiasm, Ryota Kise's ability to imitate and improve, Shintaro Midorima's mentality of doing everything he can to accept fate, Atsushi Murasakihara's talent and deliberately hidden enthusiasm
, and Akashi Seijuro’s pursuit of victory.
But they are them, Lin Feng is Lin Feng, and Lin Feng is more like Zaraki Kenpachi, who is constantly liberating his own power, because he has fallen off a cliff many times.
Just like that sentence, once you start to be lazy, God will take away your talents at an extremely fast speed, and Lin Feng has already experienced it twice.
Fourth, save money.
There is an explanation in this article, but people still keep complaining about it.
I think the person who complained about this must be no more than twenty years old, or he was just looking for trouble.
Too lazy to explain.
Fifth, character strength rating.
In several of the chapters, there are mentions of shadow strength rankings, which are based on player performance.
Some people say that it is difficult for Zhang Jiale to be number one. Let me explain. In the seventh season, Tiny Herb won the championship, and Zhang Jiale got the third runner-up, but his strength did give the best performance.
Tiny Herb has star players like Wang Jiexi, Deng Fusheng, and Liu Xiaobie, but Baihua only has Zhang Jiale, who can't even be the second best player.
Under such circumstances, Zhang Jiale still reached the finals, which shows his strength.
Then those tactical and operational points were drawn from the official archives to a certain extent, and combined with my subjective evaluation, this ranking emerged.
for reference only.
Sixth, the plot of showing off and slapping someone in the face.
To be honest, I'm not very good at this kind of plot. I hate setting up clown villains with cerebral palsy.
As soon as the protagonist broke out, the gods were beaten to the ground. It felt so good that I felt like I had lost my mind.
I try to write as little of this kind of plot as possible.
Seventh, jumping plot development.
There was indeed some jumpy plot advancement in the early stage. Many things were mentioned in passing, and even some were not focused on, such as how Zhang Jiale communicated, what kind of training Shadow went through in Tyranny, and what kind of life he experienced. I don’t think so.
It's easy to write, and it's not nutritious to write. Once I write it, I feel like I'm just over-evaluating the number of words.
Eighth, the age issue.
I came into contact with Glory at the age of eight. This is something that many people have been criticizing. It always feels unrealistic.
But, that is a game. How many children don’t like to play games?
Others asked, can he understand how to play at the age of eight? Can he understand the skills?
That's why someone taught him, so he could be connected with Su Muqiu as he should, and his relationship would be better, and his strength would even improve, and he would be taught by someone who was good at the training business from the beginning, so he could
As it should be, becoming a shadow is not just a training shadow, but also someone's shadow.
Nine, readership.
This really doesn’t exist. Even I am in other people’s readership groups. I said before that I would create a group if twenty people join me, but that’s not enough.
Then, my personal q is 910815716, and everyone can join. I will create a group whenever I have 20 people.
I also understand that everyone dives and reads books, because I like it too.
Ten, laugh point design.
I really want to design such a funny point, but actually I don’t know how to do it, so I can only use the jokes that some people know to create a funny point, but in the end, only a few people know it.
The two memes about the unlucky guy Yu Tian and the sap Lin Feng didn't have a particularly big response. As for the director's research rival memes, no one paid any attention to them. I tried to insert them as less bluntly as possible.
Finally, let’s talk about it again.
I really didn’t delete the comments. The entire network has been rectifying them recently. I can see your comments and thoughts, but they don’t appear on the reading side.
I don’t know if my replies can be sent out, but I have replied to most of them anyway.