Notice: The back of this book is very disgusting, go away!
Notice: The back of this book is very disgusting, please run away!
Author: Gushan fishing snow
Notice: The back of this book is very disgusting, please run away!
Before the main film begins, I want to remind you of the past.
I discovered this when I was writing "Quest for Senluo".
In Qingding Senluo, there is a character who appears in the novel when there are only a few dozen chapters. As soon as he appears, I deliberately create a relationship between enemies and friends. He is an enemy, can scheme against the protagonist, and at the same time agrees with the protagonist.
The person with the protagonist's concept only has his own goals and ambitions because of his position, so he does not become the protagonist's teammate.
I gave a lot of writing and ink to shaping this character. When everyone started to expect him to join the team, I clicked the knife, and the protagonist's rescue came a little late.
That is the strongest emotional explosion point in the book "Awarding Senluo". The arc of this frenemy-friend character is very full. Because a lot of pen and ink was really spent, after the transformation caused by him, the arc of the protagonist is also very full.
full.
This should be the most impactful breaking point of "Quest for Senluo".
Before writing this paragraph, I have never tried to kill a character created with so much ink - some old readers may say that you even killed the heroine in "Blue Sky Battle Flag", but the "Blue Sky Battle Flag" was really the writing process.
I felt that I should issue a sword, but it was not planned from the beginning, and after all, I was only 21 years old at that time, and my strength was still not enough, and the overall arc and foreshadowing were not done well.
But "Quest for the Crown" gave me a feeling that I had accomplished something magical. I felt at that time that the readers who had followed me all the way to this point should be my biggest fans and my core base.
Then I discovered that there was no such thing.
I was surprised to find that for quite a few people, especially those who like to criticize me in Tieba, NGA and Youshu.com, they did not feel the shock I expected at all.
Then I further discovered that for these people, my previous portrayal of the character who was both good and evil was just a false impression. I was just an ordinary knife character to find reasons for the protagonist to cheat. They even thought that the person I was cutting was a person who had not yet become a professional.
The team's role and the protagonist's explosion are inexplicable.
On the contrary, I was shocked by them. I spent so much time and effort on completing the arc of the character, and conveying the emotions that I had accomplished so well, but they didn’t even feel it!
Then I discovered one thing: quite a few people have no appreciation and sensitivity. Even if their emotional communication efficiency is as high as mine, they still can't feel emotions.
Especially some pirate users who like to BB on platforms such as Tieba. The reason why they have always been pirate users is because they do not have the sensitivity to be moved by novels. Naturally, they are not "moved" and then come to recharge money.
"This link.
My sensitivity is very strong. When I watch movies and read novels, I will explode the little pearls hard when I should. I thought everyone is like this. But obviously it is not the case.
These are the people who would describe the scene in "I Teach Kendo in Tokyo" where Haru Ryū is rescued as a slogan-like outburst unique to two-dimensional writers. The most interesting thing is that I read that post and it was obvious that my skills are...
It has penetrated the heart wall of these people, and they have to admit that this section is indeed "a bit exciting", but they themselves are not aware of this.
They couldn't see the character arc, couldn't tell what was foreshadowing and what was filler, and they didn't understand the romance in my writing.
When I discovered this, I had the urge to drive all these people away so that they would not read my book?
Reading people’s comments is really very high blood pressure. I already have high blood pressure physically, but after reading these people’s comments, my mental high blood pressure is almost bursting my blood vessels.
But at that time, I was eager to achieve an average subscription of 30,000 yuan and to prove myself, so I endured it.
It's okay now, I'm just a bastard, I can let whoever I want to get out.
"The King of France" has yet to break away from conventional thinking, so the overall structure still looks like a web novel, but this one is different. A high wall has been erected from the beginning.
I really didn’t just start looking for something to make up for it because I was desperate. I was rushing to do it right from the beginning. After I finished writing the first chapter, I knew that this book was bound to be a hit.
The beginning of this book highlights a reader who does not meet my requirements for me to crawl over.
It seems that a girl is parachuted in at the beginning, which is a common romantic comedy beginning in the light novel area, but I just don’t write about the love interaction with the girl. I write about rockets, recovery training of astronauts, and the basic necessities of life in the spaceship~
I will make another protagonist who makes people want to slap him, and ruin the sense of immersion!
The rhythm of the story also highlights a straightforward narrative, with no contradictions or conflicts. Can I write it in a conflicting state? Obviously, for example, the mother of the girl who went on a blind date at the beginning is in the villain position. According to the general urban literary structure, later on
She should introduce a new villain and complete the loop.
But I don’t have it. The villain has left the show after a few thousand words, and there is no more villain behind him. Lu Yingying’s father doesn’t stand as a villain either. Hey, he just stands out and there is no conflict~
Until Chapter 9, everything is told in a straightforward manner, written like a road movie.
The only ups and downs before Chapter 9 is the emotional explosion point in Chapter 7, which is a preparation for the explosion in Chapter 10. But this explosion point can only be felt by people with the sensitivity I require. For those who have no feelings
For people with strong skills, this is "the unique embarrassing slogan of two-dimensional writers".
The entire first ten chapters are a carefully designed reader filter. For readers who are not selected, these ten chapters are boring, with lengthy dialogues, straightforward plots, and full of meaningless details.
But for selected readers, these ten chapters reveal a fascinating worldview, the optimistic and enterprising spirit of the Space Force, the protagonist's character arc, and that damn romance.
Do you understand romance?
Because I offended a certain big studio of Mr. Lu, when this book first started to be serialized, there were several analyzes written by Mr. Lu’s colleagues in the book review area. They analyzed in a serious way how poorly written this book was. I
I polished all these posts and pinned them to the top, hung them in the book review section like medals, and then mercilessly ridiculed these colleagues.
In my opinion, the "affirmation" of these colleagues represents the extremely successful design of the first ten chapters. Unfortunately, these colleagues may have been off guard by my continuous ridicule that they are literate Bai Ding, so these posts are all
I deleted it myself. I hate the setting of the Qidian Book Review section to allow self-deletion of posts.
Thanks to this filter, the posts in this book are pleasant to read most of the time.
I am writing my story recklessly, and then selected readers who can receive the emotions and romance conveyed in my book are immersed in the story.
But this wonderful feeling has begun to fade recently.
In March, Wensi suddenly suffered from diabetes and broke out for a day, and then the more than 10,000 words were still Angel's confession, because the character arcs of Angel and Wang Ping'an were very complete, and the relationship between the two was very complete.
The foreshadowing was also extremely sufficient. This confession burst out with amazing power and directly put me in the top 500 best-sellers.
I was confused because I didn’t even read how many subscriptions this book had before, and I didn’t care about following up on the book. This is just a 500-book subscription. Why should I care about this?
As a result, when I looked at my grass, how could there be so many people following it? How could there be so many rewards?
From this point on, the intermittent postings in this book started to feel strange.
Many of the posts made me wonder, "Brother, how did your aesthetic sensibilities pass through my filter?" and "Don't your brains hurt when you read my book?"
Then yesterday, Chapter 212 was released, and today when I browsed through it, there were several posts that made my blood pressure rise.
This brings me to my most proud character setting in this book, Xiao Fang.
The book has been repeatedly emphasizing that Xiao Fang is just an illusion, but in fact, those who read the book carefully enough and have high enough text sensitivity will find that there is a question mark as to whether Xiao Fang is an illusion.
Before Chapter 210, when she appeared, the protagonists were all in a weak observer state, either distracted or in a trance. This was deliberately set up like this.
Xiao Fang's description of this "hallucination" is all based on real people.
Chapter 210 says goodbye to Xiao Fang. While the protagonist’s entire character arc is complete, it also means that the story has entered a new stage.
But if Xiao Fang disappears, then she is definitely an illusion. This is too boring and not romantic. So she will definitely appear again, just like what was said at the end of Chapter 210.
Because this is my novel, and I like UC's very much. Although I won't really use green light to push away meteorites, the female ghost in the universe can have it. After all, there is "Ball Lightning" Zhu Yu in the front. I watched the ball flash in 2006.
Well, when I first entered college, when I saw Lin Yun in the quantum state, my first reaction was "Ralashin, is that you?"
I just want the female cosmic ghost to appear in the form of a quantum ghost. Don’t worry about whether Xiao Fang was stabbed by debris when he died or not bombarded by ball lightning. That doesn’t matter. I’ve said it many times, it’s reasonable.
When sex and romance come into conflict, I absolutely throw rationality into the trash.
How can we make her reappear without being too abrupt, and make her join the whole story more actively, and make it clearer whether she is an illusion or not?
The protagonist in Chapter 212 is not in a trance. He has been a strong observer from beginning to end, and he is no longer sick. His PTSD has been cured. But he saw Xiao Fang normally and complained to Xiao Fang.
The small square that appears again here is also different from the previous small square.
I also have a lot of preparation for this. The character Zhang Li appeared very early. Although he has always been portrayed as a pseudo-scientist and civilian, this character plays a very important role in the overall story.
When he first arrived at L2, the protagonist stopped a "bewitched" passerby. He borrowed the words of the rescued female psychiatrist and said that it was only the superposition of PTSD and psychological distortion caused by long-term space travel that led to hallucinations and tension.
Pseudoscience simply responds to this psychological need.
Then, through the protagonist's monologue at the monument, it is further shown that the protagonist has also read Zhang Li's book and felt, "I know it is false, but it would not be bad if it were true."
Even though Zhang Li was directly characterized as a madman in Chapter 210, I emphasized the sentence "but his theory is not inconsistent with existing common sense."
All these settings are designed to obscure what Xiaofang is.
Of course, it doesn't matter whether Xiao Fang is a real quantum ghost or a pure hallucination. What matters is the damn romance. This character is very loving, loving and sharp.
The value of this character is that he can cut people to pieces, and at the same time he is funny and cute. "I am a sweet cat."
Now she is back with her "daughter" carrying her own genes, and she is more alive and kicking. This is the most important thing!
I was very happy when I wrote this paragraph, and I think readers will be equally happy, because Xiao Fang is back again and can continue to kill you hahahahaha.
I have actually considered many ways to bring Xiao Fang back, including letting a quantum computer read Xiao Fang's psychological model and then anchor it. But that would negate the role of the quantum computer.
This is not good. In my idea, the computer must also have a role.
When I was in high school, I loved Heinlein's "Hard Moon". Anyone who has read this novel knows that the most charming character in the novel is the super computer, which is full of tricks and has a kind of newborn.
General curiosity.
When I created the character "Noah" in 2015, I drew on part of Master Heinlein's wisdom. Noah is omnipotent, but full of curiosity like a newborn.
But as a higher-dimensional being, Noah is too invincible, so she has to limit her performance.
I am very satisfied with the settings of the supercomputer in this book. It is limited by size and energy consumption, so it has to be limited by long communication distances in space.
Hey, it’s so clever to use network speed to limit supercomputers and prevent them from becoming too powerful.
However, the supercomputer exists and its role must be played. It cannot be replaced by Xiao Fangping.
Because I think supercomputers represent a direction in the future, and "runaway servitors" may be the back of this utopia in the book.
So the plan to use a supercomputer to bring Xiao Fang back was abandoned.
Likewise, the gratuitous encore was abandoned because I thought it would be too fantastical, and it would no longer be romantic without the "possibly hallucination" layer.
This is like the quantum rose in "Ball Lightning", which appears directly and can be clearly seen by the protagonist. Wow, it is so unsightly.
So I finally chose the option of cloning my daughter.
Of course, I made this decision the day before yesterday, because I didn’t think about the novel when I wasn’t typing. It was when I was typing chapter 211 that I decided to clone it.
After all, it was only in Chapter 210 that we said goodbye to Xiao Fang in the past, right? It also continued perfectly emotionally.
Moreover, there are foreshadowings ahead. The treatment of cloning and related technologies in the two camps has been foreshadowed many times. Wow, it’s perfect. From now on, the foreshadowing has been planned for a long time. I say it is it!
So I happily let Xiao Fang come back.
Then when I saw the post today, what the hell is this? No one paid attention to Xiao Fang’s return, but instead they were clamoring about something unreasonable and disgusting.
How did you pass the previous screening? Did you start reading it from Chapter 11?
Or did you skip Chapter 210? Skip such full emotional foreshadowing and skip the character arc?
Others were clamoring, "It's just a stitched monster made up of genes." Damn Xiao Fang even showed up, complained, and even said "I have to go now."
To be honest, this sentence "I have to go now" is a bad habit left over from many years of writing online. In fact, this sentence is very damaging to the aesthetics. I just habitually add wheelchairs to readers to facilitate the part with low understanding.
Readers understand.
Looking at it now, Xiao Fang should be allowed to sing "Defeat the Ambitious Wolf of the American Empire" here, which is more in line with the character's arc. So I changed it. Later readers will not have this wheelchair when they read this paragraph.
But before there was this wheelchair, some people came out and said it was disgusting. I can’t understand it.
I also re-examined the previous part and found that all the foreshadowing and emotional guidance were ready-made. There is nothing unexpected about the appearance of a cloned daughter here. It can even be discussed whether cloned people have human rights, because the previous
There have been discussions about this.
How did you become a genetically patchwork monster, how did you become a disgusting reader? You are disgusting me, right? How did you pass my screening?
As I write this, I reflect on it. Maybe it’s because after going to Ceres, I took out Maga Company as the villain. The novel is no longer a pure road movie and begins to have a story, which leads to some things that should have been
People who have been screened out can now be seen.
If Maga Company had not been cast as the villain at that time, it might have made the book as a whole closer to the sci-fi road movie feel of the first half.
But it can no longer be modified. Fortunately, the BOSS has already turned on its health bar.
Next thing I thought about, I went to Lone Star Country to play "Neuromancer" and "The Thirteenth Level" and the like, then have a drink with David Martinez, and then rush all the way to Arasaka - no
, the lowest level of Maga Company.
When confronting a supercomputer, I want to pay tribute to "Roadside Picnic" because I love Roadside Picnic so much!
Once these are done, it’s time to finish, and there’s no need to change the map.
I have already thought about the ending, and I can tell you now that it is both sharp and romantic, and I even arranged hints. I arranged hints as soon as I thought about it. This is my good habit, hahaha.
If you feel disgusted after reading Chapter 212, leave now, leave quickly. The ending of this book is even more disgusting for people who don’t understand romance, so don’t blame me for not informing you!
Those who have read the opening remarks also know that this book was originally planned to be completed before the release of "Tears of the Kingdom".
My original plan was to write about the recommended benefits after reaching a million words.
The current score of this book is close to 2,000. If I write one million words, I will receive a wave of recommendation benefits, and the quality chapter will be stable. The first 500 orders will lead to the quality chapter. It is still such a challenging subject matter. If it can be achieved, I will be very happy.
satisfied.
The last book, "The King of France", was just because it didn't have a million words, so I couldn't get the kind of recommendations that only a million words would have, so now I'm still short of 300,000 subscriptions.
I really plan to write a million words.
But now you see, "Tears of the Kingdom" will be released next month, and I will definitely be addicted to it. Whatever game I am addicted to, the plot of the game will appear in the novel I write. If it is not finished by that time,
, then maybe Wang Pingan will have to rescue Zelda in space.
So we still have to try to finish it on time.
Fortunately, now that I have thought of the following content, I feel that I can fill in about 150,000 words. 150,000 words can be written in one month, which is more than enough.
Maybe when I'm writing, some inspiration will burst out, and suddenly something with unclear meaning will appear.
Therefore, this book should be able to be completed as planned!
Let me say it again, the ending is very exciting! It’s both exciting and romantic! All the hints are buried!
If you feel sick now, go away! Go away! I might make you sick later!
PS: Let me make a bold prediction. There will definitely be people who don’t understand what I am talking about in such a long article and say that I am going to cut it again. If you don’t believe me, we will wait and see.