Chapter 258 My mother-in-law is a loyal servant (2)
"Little D, please give me the script first."
He Tiantian was not in a hurry to ask classmate Xiao D about the details of this new mission.
After the rescue mission that just ended, He Tiantian discovered that there was still a certain distance between the stories she heard from others and what she saw and experienced personally.
Just like in the previous world, without actually entering the novel world, it would be difficult for He Tiantian to discover the reason for the failure of the previous writer based solely on the introduction of Xiao D's classmate.
The script may not be as intuitive as personal experience, but if you study it carefully, you can still find some clues.
"Okay!"
Little D didn't know what He Tiantian was thinking, so he readily agreed and transferred the original script and the scripts written by the first two writers to He Tiantian in sequence.
He Tiantian received the original script first——
Well, how should I put it, this is a very wonderful farming novel in ancient Chinese.
There is no time travel, no rebirth, a very orthodox ancient romance novel.
There is farming, business, power planning, and palace fighting.
The key is that the author's writing style is very good, and the framework structure of the novel world, character settings, and detailed descriptions are all very good.
Although there is no time-travel plot, it still makes people feel immersed while reading it.
Because she portrays the characters in a very three-dimensional, full, and vivid way. The protagonists, supporting characters, and even some minor characters who do not appear directly and only exist in other people's mouths are also impressive.
Not a pale paper figure, no facial makeup.
And the characters of some important characters have not collapsed from beginning to end.
The plot doesn't overwhelm, the perfect characters don't collapse, and it makes people feel hearty while reading it.
It stands to reason that such a novel, which can be called a masterpiece, should not need to be revised by the writer.
However, He Tiantian read through it carefully again and finally discovered a small problem.
"This short plot cannot be said to be poorly written, but it seems that the overall standard of the book is a little bit behind."
He Tiantian has completed more than a dozen missions and written more than a dozen novels, and has already surpassed the level of a newbie.
She has experience, and she has become smarter and sharper.
Therefore, she quickly found an uncomfortable place in this exquisite piece of ancient farming literature.
"Gu Xiuniang! There is something wrong with the character of the hero's adoptive mother!"
He Tiantian's eyes fell on a villain who only appeared once or twice.
He Tiantian did not rush to ask, but kept this idea in mind and continued to read the script rewritten by the first writer.
Although this writer failed, she was very keen and discovered the problem with Gu Xiuniang's character.
According to the character setting in the script, Gu Xiuniang is a vicious villain who favors boys over girls.
After she married her husband, she was childless for several years.
There was no pressure from my husband's family. Both my mother-in-law and my husband said they would let nature take its course.
Gu Xiuniang herself was anxious. In order to give birth to a child, or to be precise, to give birth to a son, she went a little crazy.
She used all kinds of birth control remedies, whether they were reliable or not.
After struggling for several years, her mother-in-law couldn't stand it and wanted to give her a good beating. As a result, at this time, Gu Xiuniang became pregnant.
This was originally a good thing, but Gu Xiuniang was too capable.
When I was seven or eight months pregnant, I always felt that my pregnancy was not good and I looked like a daughter.
Gu Xiuniang dreamed of getting a boy at one stroke, and she became a little crazy after she suspected that the child in her belly was a daughter.
She actually "stole a dragon and turned a phoenix" out of the blue.
Quietly ask people to ask around to see if there are any pregnant women who have given birth at the same time.
He spent a lot of money and bought several pregnant women.
Gu Xiuniang's plan was absurd and crazy: after she gave birth, it would be fine if the baby was a son.
If it was a daughter, and as long as there was one son among those pregnant women, she would exchange the two children!
She was so calculating, but she was still stupid, and was quickly noticed by her shrewd mother-in-law.
Coincidentally, Mrs. Hou, who was being served by her mother-in-law, was about to give birth, and something happened at this time, so her mother-in-law had an idea and came up with a trick.
Soon after, Gu Xiuniang, Mrs. Hou and those other women all gave birth to children.
As expected, Gu Xiuniang gave birth to a daughter, but Mrs. Hou gave birth to a son.
Among those women, two also gave birth to sons.
Gu Xiuniang's sister-in-law secretly took the newborn girl to be exchanged with one of the families according to the instructions of taking care of Xiuniang.
The mother-in-law took the opportunity to intervene and gave Mrs. Hou's son to Gu Xiuniang.
And this son is naturally the male protagonist.
Gu Xiuniang became the male protagonist’s adoptive mother.
Gu Xiuniang herself didn't know it, but she was so satisfied that she raised the male protagonist as her darling.
But Gu Xiuniang's daughter became the daughter of the Hou family.
However, within a few years, something happened to the Hou Mansion, and the house was confiscated and sold.
Although Gu Xiuniang's mother-in-law works as an errand in the Hou Mansion, her man is a good citizen, and with the support of the Hou Mansion, he has a small income.
After the Hou Mansion was defeated, Gu Xiuniang's men quickly bought her out.
But this old nanny was a loyal servant. She cared about her old master and asked her son to redeem Mrs. Hou and her daughter, and also bought a small courtyard to house them.
Later, the Marquis was redressed and the Marquis's mansion regained its glory.
But in that accident, Mr. Hou was injured and could no longer have children.
Such a large prince's house cannot be without heirs.
At this time, the male protagonist was already twelve or thirteen years old, and he was making progress in his studies, and he seemed to be a famous young talent around him.
Gu Xiuniang's mother-in-law took the initiative to expose her daughter-in-law, saying that her daughter-in-law was audacious, stealing from others, and confusing the bloodline of the Hou family for her own selfish interests.
Once this strange news was exposed, it immediately attracted a lot of attention.
In the end, of course, everyone returned to their respective places, and Gu Xiuniang, the selfish and bold vicious sidekick, also got the end she deserved.
Although this plot is about the male protagonist, it does not account for a large proportion of the whole story.
If it were a TV series, it would probably be the plot of the first two episodes.
After all, the most exciting part of this article is the various plots after the male protagonist grows up.
The love line, career line, revenge, and exploring more secrets are the focus of the novel.
And the reason why the author created Gu Xiuniang to be such an excellent adoptive mother is not without reason:
Firstly, it is to give the male protagonist from a wealthy family a reason to become childhood sweethearts with the female protagonist from a commoner background.
Secondly, it is to highlight the personal charm of the male protagonist. A good bamboo shoots out of a bad bamboo, and a good one emerges from the mud. Even though he was raised by a top class, he can still become a glorious, kind and upright person.
Third, it would be simpler. Such a complicated life experience is consistent with the identity of the male protagonist, and it also makes the plot more twists and turns.
The author created the characters very vividly, and when readers read about Gu Xiuniang, they gritted their teeth with hatred.
However, if you read it carefully, it will feel awkward.
Gu Xiuniang is such a superb person, and she raised the male protagonist by herself, even though he only raised him until he was twelve or thirteen years old.
However, at this age, people are basically able to determine.
Gu Xiuniang has a poor character, but she raised an excellent son. Of course, this is to show that the hero himself is good enough.
However, the influence of the family of origin and the words and deeds of parents are really important.
The male protagonist is still perfect, somewhat fake.
In addition, after the scandal of Gu Xiuniang's "child exchange" was exposed, the male protagonist was shocked and heartbroken. Although he begged Gu Xiuniang for mercy, in the end he made the choice to help with the marriage rather than help with the marriage.
The author wants to highlight the hero's calmness and rationality, as well as his adherence to three views and the bottom line.
However, there are still a small number of readers who think that the male protagonist is too ruthless. Although Gu Xiuniang is shameless, she is really kind to the male protagonist. It is not an exaggeration to say that she feels her heart and soul.
Moreover, Gu Xiuniang did not plan to secretly change the young master of the Hou Mansion. The pregnant women she found were all from poor backgrounds.
It was Gu Xiuniang's mother-in-law and his biological mother, Mrs. Hou, who really made the hero Hou, a proud man of heaven, grow up in a small family and not enjoy the glory and wealth he deserved.
After all, no matter how vicious Gu Xiuniang is, she is just the daughter-in-law of a servant's house. She can't even enter the gate of the Marquis' mansion without being summoned.
It is impossible for her to secretly change the prince's son.
After the male protagonist was switched to Gu Xiuniang, Gu Xiuniang regarded him as her lifeblood.
Open your heart and soul and give it all you have!
Therefore, everyone in the world can criticize and scold Gu Xiuniang, but only the male protagonist cannot.
But the one who is truly pitiful and truly qualified to resent Gu Xiuniang is the "fake daughter", Gu Xiuniang's biological daughter Wei Yuanniang.
Wei Yuanniang became the fake daughter of the Hou family, not of her own free will.
Later, her life experience was exposed, and she went from being the legitimate daughter of a noble prince to being the granddaughter of a servant. In the end, she ended up being married off to a foreign country and died tragically at a young age.
How innocent is she?
Even if she was transferred to the Hou Mansion and became the so-called daughter, she would only live a wealthy life for a few years.
Later, the Hou family was convicted, and she suffered a lot with Madam Hou, and her face was disfigured because of saving Madam Hou.
After finally enduring the injustice in the Hou Mansion, she became the "civet cat" who "swapped the civet cat for the prince" again!
He Tiantian:......
"Well, Wei Yuanniang is really miserable. No wonder some readers sympathized with her and made complaints!"
It was originally a very good work, but because of this small plot, readers complained, and Dian Niang Library had to send a writer to make revisions.
So, there was the first writer.
The target of her time travel is naturally Wei Yuanniang.
After traveling through time, Wei Yuanniang was familiar with the plot, so she started a counterattack in the face.
The process was very enjoyable, but the main framework of the plot was messed up, and the male protagonist was almost killed.
The male protagonist and female protagonist are the pillars that maintain the world of the novel. If something goes wrong with the male protagonist, the entire small world is in danger of collapse.
So, the first copywriter failed.
Then there was a second writer.
This one learned the lesson from his predecessor and instead of killing everyone, he started to cooperate with the male protagonist.
She is kind, she is gentle, and she also used the goods she purchased at Dianniang Mall to help the original owner restore her appearance, and then——
Well, there is no more.
The novel world suddenly issued a warning that it was in danger of collapse!
The second writer was directly deceived: She didn’t go against the male protagonist or the female protagonist, and she didn’t change the main plot. How could she endanger the entire small world?!
It's so unjust, can't it be true!
"...If it weren't for Tiantian's experience in your previous world, the system wouldn't know about it."
"It is precisely because of your discovery that the system came up with a guess: Wei Yuanniang may have also awakened!"
Classmate Little D was chattering in He Tiantian's ear.
"It's not like I haven't encountered awakened characters in Dianniang Library, but most of them are male protagonists or female protagonists, or even important supporting characters."
As for Wei Yuanniang, let alone the first and second daughter, she is not even considered a supporting actress.
At most, he's just a sidekick with a name.
Her awakening could actually affect the stability of the entire novel world, which even the system did not expect.
"Apart from this plot, this novel is actually very good. The system doesn't want such a good work to be removed from the shelves, so I just want to save it again!"
"Of course, because this task is difficult, the points are very considerable. In addition, the writer also has a certain degree of autonomy——"
Classmate Xiao D continued to introduce.
He Tiantian nodded slowly, "I understand! Is there no clear mission this time? As long as the world of the novel can be preserved?"
"That's right! Tiantian, this mission is indeed more troublesome than the last one, because the awakened Wei Yuanniang has turned dark—"
Classmate Xiao D shook Xiao Yuan's body and spoke slowly.
"You just said that this mission is very autonomous?" He Tiantian suddenly asked.
"That's right! Because it's difficult, and it failed twice, the system won't be too rigid. As long as the stability of the small world can be ensured and the work can be put back on the shelves, the contributors can play freely!"
Little D’s classmate answered obediently.
"Can I change the character who travels through time?"
"Huh? A character who travels through time?"
"Yes, Little D, don't forget, I am a 'professional villain', Wei Yuanniang is not a villain. At most, she is just a poor cannon fodder." A smile appeared in He Tiantian's eyes.
Little D’s classmate was a little dumbfounded as to why Tiantian started to actively act as a villain again.
Of course, Little D’s classmate is no longer the silly and sweet person he used to be.
After thinking about it for a moment, it reacted, "Tiantian, don't you want to travel through time and become Gu Xiuniang? You also want to advance the time-traveling node to before there is no change, right?"
"No, no, the plot of 'changing children' must be included, otherwise the whole plot will collapse."
Without "civet cat for prince", how could "prince" grow up among the people?
How can he grow up with the heroine and fall in love with each other?!
In addition, some subsequent plots will also be affected.
He Xiu Niang's mother-in-law, just because she had made great contributions in the matter of "exchanging children", later exposed her daughter-in-law, which was also a righteous act of annihilation.
She is the spokesperson of "Loyal Servant"!
If there is no "changer", how can this "loyal servant" show his daring loyalty?
Little D’s classmate was a little anxious and jumped up and down shouting.
"You don't need to travel through the node in advance. The 'swap' and other things will proceed normally. I just ask that I travel through time and become Gu Xiuniang!"
He Tiantian glanced at the fretful little classmate D, hum, you know that "autonomy" and all that stuff are all lies.
Of course, He Tiantian also understood.
If the main plot could be changed at will, then the novel world would have collapsed long ago, and there would be no need for the writer to save it.
