Following the mark at the end of September, the plot of Novice Village is finally over.
Congratulations~~~
The next volume is after opening the air shield and entering the world map.
In addition to tower defense elements, some elements of hegemony and exploration will also be added.
Tens of thousands of races compete for hegemony, so stay tuned.
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Take this opportunity to review what you didn't do well in the first volume.
In terms of characters, Queen Bei, Lu Xuelin and Teacher Zhuo were not well written.
He was sprayed into shit by everyone.
I originally wanted to write Queen Bei as a heroine, a strong woman, a heroine like an empress.
As a result, I ended up writing an idiot, and in the end I had no choice but to continue writing as an idiot.
Change her identity to an assistant and reduce her role...
It was also through this that I realized that I still wasn’t capable of writing a female protagonist.
Next, I plan not to write about the heroine, but only about the slave girl.
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Lu Xuelin was originally set up as a villain who would perform a ritual to obtain treasure at the end of the volume.
It's a pity that I didn't write it well in the mid-term, and the immediate hatred was too great.
It disgusts many paying book lovers.
Many scenes had to be cut and saved.
I also want to thank all the book friends for their support and giving the author a chance to make things come true.
Although the round shape was a bit awkward at the end, I finally managed to get over it and kill the sacrifice to the sky.
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Teacher Zhuo was originally planned to be the protagonist’s younger brother and a military advisor, but it didn’t turn out well.
Teacher Zhuo didn't write it well. I analyzed the reason. It was because the original plan was for him to be the protagonist's younger brother, so I didn't dare to let him do many bad things.
But in this way, his character was not established.
There is no way to talk about his shrewdness and human spirit. In the end, he is just a paper person.
The end result is that the only option is to kill Ji Tian.
I learned from my experience…
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In addition, in terms of plot, some people started criticizing Mr. Zhuo’s auction at the third time.
In fact, the original purpose of the auction was to show that the protagonist was rich in supplies.
Unfortunately, the protagonist of the auction takes too few shots, and some readers seem to think it is a bit watered down.
The first two auctions were okay, but later book friends felt they were a bit watered down.
I am also reflecting on this.
However, there will no longer be these things in the second volume, because there is a shop on [Trade].
In addition to the protagonist’s No. 1 store, other alliances will also open stores in the future.
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On the other hand, in terms of plot, I felt that it was a bit hard at the end.
I haven't finished writing a lot of things, so I can't open the air shield and can't go out.
I myself feel that there are too many things going on, and it’s a bit boring.
I analyzed the reason, and it may be due to Lu Xuelin's incident, which made me cut a lot of things I originally planned to write, and the final translation was a bit stiff.
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In addition, some book friends talked about hydrology. I also summarized this.
Some people are really interested in it, while some book friends are just making noise and joining in the fun.
But actually, I feel like I have no water...
I've thought of two solutions in this regard.
One is to update more every day, so that when watching the unfolding plot, everyone will not feel disconnected.
I think everyone thinks that Shui may not be enjoyable to read.
Another way is that when I write next, there will be less foreshadowing and the plot will be more compact.
Try to reduce everyone's feeling of water as much as possible.
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With the above summary, I continue to write the second volume.
Thank you all for your support!
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PS: Paying book friends, please write down your thoughts in the VIP chapter at any time. I read it three times a day and adjust some details according to everyone's taste at any time. The general direction remains unchanged, but the details can be adjusted.