When I first read your book review of "Big Tomcat", to be honest, I was a little unhappy. But after looking at the content carefully, I found that it was an old reader. But to be honest, I am still a little uncomfortable with your accusations.
Regarding sincerity, I'm afraid you and I have different opinions. When I started writing at a certain point, I had just been demobilized and was suddenly liberated from the pressure. The thought of writing a book was just a whim because of the severe book shortage at that time.
, except for the part where Asuma uses cigarettes to test the protagonist's team, I actually wrote the rest with a boring and coping attitude. I was having a lot of fun at the time, and I didn't make any money writing books. It was really difficult to do.
To write sincerely.
I believe you still remember the "..." segments that appeared frequently at that time. In fact, I thought about learning the "—plot segmentation-" method to make up the number of words...
At that time, I thought of coming to Zongheng, firstly because the page at a certain point was getting more and more disgusting, and secondly, because I flipped through the first edition of Kinoshita at that time, and I only had one feeling - strong complaints**!
At that time, many readers commented that the first edition of Kinoshita was completely broken in the later period, but because of my mentality at the time, I didn't care much about it. Until my mentality changed, I realized that even I couldn't read the writing... and it still remained the same.
The strong collection made me not want to give up this book, and I was already working at the time. I suddenly discovered that when writing a book, reading readers' reviews, and thinking about coding, although it was quite hard, it made me feel at ease.
In fact, if you have friends who have written serialized novels, you should have experienced that compared to skipping paragraphs in one stroke, conceiving the environment, figuring out the context and psychological activities, and conceiving the battle, which one is more laborious and troublesome.
And to be honest, although the revised version of the Wave Country arc is still not as good as the skills of many mature authors, the author is personally very satisfied because it is indeed written with care. The first version of the Wave Country arc and the establishment of the Shikamaru Bridge are fundamentally different
It did not write about the impact and shock of the protagonist on the Land of Waves, Dazuna and Inari at that time, as well as the possible changes in the Land of Waves in the future and the foreshadowing of the protagonist's involvement. If it is a comic, with the help of visuals, the protagonist and other characters
Actions and expressions, combined with the context, can naturally easily achieve the atmosphere, but the same cannot be said for novels. Without foreshadowing, it is as straightforward as writing a primary school student's composition. It is dry and boring to read.
The only thing that makes me feel bad about the revised version is the last two chapters of the written test. Because some regulations in the Chuunin Exam require translating the original work, which may cause some sense of déjà vu, but if I want to skip it with ellipsis, the author is reluctant.
, because if you don’t want to narrate plainly and often skip paragraphs, you need to constantly conceive of the environment, characters, etc., it is easy to get stuck in thinking and unable to write. The author is not strong enough in writing, and it is easy to escape the situation like the first version - everyone still remembers
In the first edition, Shikamaru was promoted to Jonin. I wanted to write about the Jonin assessment process, but I just skipped the chapter because I was too lazy to come up with it... including the later stage when Shikamaru couldn't control his strength. In fact, he often played jump chapters.
The consequences of...
In fact, if I really want to make plain narratives and skip paragraphs, I can do it, but it is meaningless. I once said that this book will not be put on the shelves - it may seem a bit brazen. After all, there are targets for putting this book on the shelves, but it is simply a book.
Friends are more powerful. Collections, clicks and red tickets are all increasing slowly but surely (black tickets are also increasing!) - but I don’t want to cut corners because of this, so I will use an outline flow or something like that to quickly
To end this book, I still want to work hard to write this book well, write it seriously, write it carefully, and do not deal with it, and I will not be impetuous. In my opinion, this book must be at least one million words long, with a secret plot.
To tell you the truth, my outline is set until the Fifth Ninja War...
So, if you say that my updates are slow, I admit it, after all, I have a job and I have to eat, but if you say that my revised version is just coping and perfunctory, I firmly deny this.
In other words, Tomcat, you must accuse me when I am ready to finish this book before writing a million words! Just use these words and this promise I made! ^_^
(ps: Today is the night shift, go to bed immediately, you don’t have to wait for the second update... I just thought, I hope you don’t forget to clock in when you get off work this time...) dd