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Irrigate for the moon

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It’s the third number. Please give me a guarantee.

But I can’t think of a lot of words to make me laugh, so I’ll share the word count of my answer in the book review section.

Book friend Jianfeng Louzhu said:

The plot has been advancing very fast recently, and the description and characterization of the characters are often in Guan Guan talking to himself, and there is a little less time for the characters to express themselves. Isn't Guan Guan a bit lazy?

My answer: It’s best to give an example, otherwise I won’t be able to understand what you are referring to specifically. I will use the chapter I just posted to explain it. This chapter is not very detailed. [ ] is the turning point of the story, so it is all

I will write it briefly so that what follows is compact. If I want to write it in detail, I can write at least ten chapters on this content.

The watering starts. If you want to water, how to do it is as follows:

First of all, by gathering officials from several yamen, I can give a detailed explanation of the appearance, conversation, arrangement and analysis of the content, at least for one chapter.

Second, arrange for people to investigate the merchants of Timurid, and then describe positively the content of one or two merchants inquiring about information in various places. Another chapter

Three, four: The process of celebrating the New Year, visiting the royal family, going to the Xu family, accepting visits from friends and factional forces, and thoroughly displaying Xia Xun's energy. At least two chapters can be written.

Five: Zi Qi gave birth to a child, everyone’s nervousness and thoughts before the birth, the birth process, Xia Xun became a father after the birth, the feeling of holding the child, the feelings of the whole family, and each other’s thoughts, another chapter.

Six, seven: Because she is a daughter again, the thoughts of the family, the protagonist’s thoughts, plus a little plot to tease some little daughters, and then make out with Ming’er, tell her what she knows about parenting, Ming’er finds a few

The sisters took a breather, and then Su Ying thought of collecting information in this area, and then used her secret relationship with Qianlong when she was on Yangjiao Island to find a few big bosses, introduce them to them, and then they go about their mission.

, at least two chapters.

Eight: What was it like when I left Jinling? How was the reception received by the local government when I arrived in Zhenjiang? How did I travel around the mountains and rivers along the way? When taking the sea route, I also talked about the large number of grain ships heading north and how effective the suppression of Japanese pirates was. Another chapter.

9: Arriving in Qufu, the process of visiting the Confucius Temple can be very solemn and solemn. At the same time, we also need to visit the descendants of the Confucius family. Everyone sits down to drink tea, and another tea.

Ten: Then go to Yanzhou and write about the intrigues between the two sides and the street scenes, which is a thousand words. What Altusha and others saw and heard while walking on the streets, and a few more conversations and emotions, are a thousand words. Then the protagonist

Going to Prince Yan's Mansion, the welcoming atmosphere, the appearance of Prince Yan, and a few words about his background, the end of chapter ten.

In fact, if I want to mix it up, these ten chapters are still short. I can add at least five chapters. If I continue to add more, I will not be good at it. Maybe someone can add twenty or thirty chapters.

But it will take ten days to update. After this ten days, you will find that nothing is actually said. Each chapter is not less written, and it is all active. In fact, drying it will not be of much use.

What I wrote, I really thought it was not helpful to the main plot, and it was completely unnecessary to write a big book.

Of course, my understanding may not be correct, and I need you to give examples to prove it.

Come on, I don’t do it, I’m a good boy, so, vote_

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