Well, I finally finished the first volume. In fact, I found that I am really not suitable for writing about characters like The Godfather. It is too tiring. You can’t make the protagonist an extremely funny guy. You have to maintain his positive image and you can’t let him say whatever he wants.
In just two sentences, players should be given full attribute auras. Let them improve slowly, and make every victory have a reason. You can't just let the protagonist defeat a certain team just because the weather is good today or the author is in a good mood.
Team, this feeling is not wonderful. Just like watching a movie, I always choose to watch movies that are worth watching from beginning to end while holding potato chips, and I am not sensitive to those movies that try to express their own thoughts in the movie. Pest Pie
Pesk and Black Dolan are undoubtedly two movies with different styles. If Pesk's story is a crispy and delicious appetizer, then Black Dolan's story is the wine on the table.
You swallow it in one gulp, but slowly, slowly, let the taste bloom on your tongue and taste buds.
But fortunately, I still expressed some things of my own in the first volume, such as some tactics, such as finding some sense of rhythm. But no matter what, the first volume is still very bad in my eyes, because I think I can write it
It's better. Also, regarding the last game, I saw some people asking why they didn't try to describe the game. Well, actually that was my attempt. Every book will put as much emphasis as possible on the last game.
The description of the game tried to show the importance of the game as much as possible, so I changed the story and used a pregnant woman to change everything. Our Blake Dolan chose the latter between the most important game in his life and saving lives.
In fact, the first volume has a completely different ending, but I don’t have the courage to write it out because I’m afraid I’ll be scolded to death. Black Dolan didn’t get the first championship in his life because he sent a pregnant woman to
The game was delayed due to being admitted to the hospital. In the end, he was taken back to the police station by the police. When the police car passed the Giants Stadium in East Travert, he looked at the New York fans with sad faces and passed by.
See, I can only think about this kind of ending. If it really happens, then this book may really end. Although, I prefer the ending with more dramatic conflict than Black Dolan’s unruly counterattack.
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Finally, a reader once asked me why I didn’t write about a black coach. I explained here that to be honest, it’s mainly because there are too few female stars for black people to choose from, and it’s not realistic for black people to pick up those white female stars.
You can’t expect actresses like Jessica Alba, Taylor Swift or Keira Knightley to fall in love with a black man, even if he is extremely handsome and extremely rich. So when I was reading the book, I saw that the protagonist
I can't help but laugh out loud when I am born a black star but pick up white female stars all over the world. Of course, this kind of thing does not exist in the United States, but it is very rare. Just like in China, the proportion of men marrying foreign girls is about the same.
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The first volume has come to an end. According to the old rules, we will conduct an interview with the characters in the book and take a look at what stories are waiting for them next.
Protagonist Blake Dolan: "Volume 2, what is my new identity?"
With a romantic look on his face: "In this book, you have no other identity except coach and team manager. My child, your dream of being a psychiatrist can start after the story of this book ends, but that is not my responsibility anymore. I wish you the best."
good luck."
Sheldon Cooper: "I'm a cheat, I'm a modifier, I'm a cheat!"
With a romantic look on his face: "You are stupid. In the second volume, you will find out how miserably an otaku who only understands technology will die. I suggest you learn to take care of yourself and socialize as soon as possible."
Liv Tyler: "I'm going to be the girlfriend of a rich kid, right?"
With a romantic look on her face: "Okay, I admit, I want you to be my girlfriend, but the reality is too cruel. I can only settle for the next best thing and let you be the girlfriend of the protagonist. But I want to say that wearing that inlaid
It’s not easy to get a 31-carat victory diamond wedding ring.”….
Schneiderbook: "I'm not going to show up, right? I'm just a small character?"
With a romantic look on his face: "Believe me, everything is possible."
Louis Huang: “When will I be cured of facial paralysis?”
With a romantic look on his face: "You have no chance in this book, I'm sorry."
Delonie Blake: "I became a Kathryn Porcher, right?"
With a romantic look on his face: "I don't know, I only know that for some reason, your view of the protagonist has changed. Friendly reminder, it was late at night."
Daryl Morey: "I'm not a soy sauce guy, I have a hunch."
With a romantic look on his face: "Yeah, you have a brighter future than the Rockets manager, but don't think wrongly, you have no chance to get involved with the Knicks."
Blake Dolan: "Who will be my partner in the next volume?"
With a charming look on his face: "Please allow me to introduce you to the following characters in advance."
Patrick Ewing: "You know what, I finished filming Exorcist 3 and I have a new nickname, boys! The Angel of Death! From today on, I will teach you how to survive in the Knicks Zoo!"
Charles Oakley: "Between training hard or me smashing your balls with a shovel! Choose one! Cubs! Your Oak Daddy is here!"
Sam Presti: "In addition to being the youngest head coach and manager, his assistants are equally young. I am Sam Presti, assistant general manager of the Knicks."
Louis Wong: "We meet again, Blake."
Blake Dolan: "You want to replicate the zoo?"
With a romantic look on his face: "No, it's much more than that. I want to revive the Knicks gang and introduce some of your new players. You will like them!"
Eddie Griffin: "Sooner or later! I'm going to kick that bastard Charles Oakley's balls out! And by the way, don't jerk off to the poster of a woman on your locker in the locker room!"
An insider said: "Who knows how long it will take me to be drilled by Ewing before I can leave here! Let me go! Damn orangutan!"
A player: "This is the locker room with the best atmosphere in the league! Trust me, you won't want to go in!"
A player: "If you play outside the United States, please remember not to believe the beautiful lies of those Knicks scouts, otherwise, you will see how miserable your end will be. Of course, I am talking about off the court.
, not on the field!”
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"Tell me, what is the tradition of the Knicks?"
"Center?"
"Kill the Miamians?"
"Gold Club?"
"Gangster."
"We can lose the game, we can be called for fouls, but we want those teams, as long as they mention the Knicks, they will think of all the pain. We are a nightmare for hypocrites and gentlemen, because basketball has never been
No need for gentlemen, let's tell this league, the Knicks gang is here."
