Several prominent problems in the explanation book
Let’s talk about some of the more concentrated issues in the book. If a reader responded, it was inappropriate to comment in the group or in the book review area, so I opened a single chapter.
First, many readers complain that there are too many fights. There is nothing we can do about this. In addition to relying on nostalgia, the fun in the early stage is only supported by fighting. Although most of the readers in the group are currently in their forties, they may be more disgusted with this.
, can be the most extensive
The audience of readers is still young men in their twenties. Passionate and refreshing writing is the demand of the market. I try to control this as much as possible. In short, this book is the bones of refreshing writing, the flesh and blood of hot-blooded writing, and it uses a cane to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger.
Wearing a cloak of nostalgia.
Secondly, the little guy has too many scenes. This is true. I want to say that there is nothing I can do about it. I’m afraid you have to spit on my face. How should I put it? Nowadays, there are more family scenes, and the little guy’s character and age
Determined that she is the most active and quirky, she naturally steals the spotlight.
The key character of the book. Most of the scenes she appears in are warm and funny, used to dilute the seriousness and restriction of that era, which is also a cute point of the book. In addition, some book friends said that the little girl is unethical and disgusting. I can't help it.
If you accept it, I won't criticize you. You can face the wall by yourself.
Thirdly, the book enters the main theme too slowly. It’s almost a hundred chapters, and even a section chief didn’t let the protagonist get involved. What kind of official document is this? Haha, if I give the reason, you must say it’s sophistry.
It’s like this. This article has been subject to regulation, as mentioned before. First, it turned to writing business articles.
, one is to continue to control the writing of official documents. So it was a two-way road at that time, and I was struggling for a week, so I delayed letting the protagonist go, just because I was afraid that it would be too late to turn around. Now I am fine, I have decided on the direction. Around next Wednesday
, I should go to the commune, Jiang Nan will file a lawsuit here.
Fourth, it is a cliché, but it must be discussed. You still need tickets. The quality and length of the book interact with the tickets you give. The quality of this book is not bad, but the collection is really not good.
It's been a few days since I broke 5,000, and I've been updating ten times, but there's been no movement at all. I thought back to when I said Zhou Tuiqian
Ten, just ten updates. You guys immediately promoted me. Why can’t I change it to the collection? Could it be that one person really voted for ten chapters? Haha. Let me say one more thing. The current collection is over three thousand.
The daily collection exceeded five thousand, and Jiangnan vomited blood for fifteen updates. I couldn't bear it these days, so I scattered all the manuscripts.
Okay, that’s all the wordiness. I asked you to join the group, and there were not many responses. I said everything, and the key parts that cannot be mentioned will be shared in the group. I wish you a happy mood and enjoy reading.