I open two single chapters a day, I believe you can find my dilemma. I am in a mess, and I have been criticized recently. I don’t know what’s wrong, and I can’t find my own problems. I admit that the fight part was deliberately created by me.
It was fun, but it was self-defeating. Family drama
The several chapters about the Spring Festival and the Spring Festival were all designed to create warmth and nostalgia, but they also received criticism. I really don’t know what to do. The original plan was to update it first and save the manuscript, but it turned out that the Spring Festival chapter was not pleasing to me either.
It’s better to finish it as soon as possible, and then the big boss will appear.
The self-summary has the following problems: 1. There are too many family scenes, which makes it annoying to watch, or like water injection. Jiang Nan wanted to write a warm feeling, but ended up digressing thousands of miles away from the topic, and the details are inappropriate. 2. It is similar to the chapter about Spring Festival greetings, which is purely Jiang Nan
Designed for nostalgia, combined with family drama, everyone reacted in a delayed manner
It's outrageous. I've also reflected on this. If one or two say it, I won't take it seriously. If a few old book friends react, it's my problem. If the young master said, ignore these words and write your own, you can write
This is all for you to see. The information you fed back is terrible, so I naturally have to reflect on it.
Lesson: get to the topic as soon as possible and write less about family drama in the future. If you can’t stand it, stick with it for another hundred chapters. Anyway, the probability of this book being on the shelves is low, and it doesn’t cost money, so just support Jiangnan’s click-through rate.