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CEO dad, you lost mommy [Long comment]

If I remember correctly, I read this article by Mrs. Xiao Qiao because she was coming to one of our studios for review, and the link she sent at that time was to this article. At that time, I asked Mrs. Xiao Qiao a lot about this article. Although I can’t remember the general content of the question clearly, I still remember the general content of a conversation we had at that time. I asked, “Which chapter in this article do you think is the best?” And Mrs. Xiao Qiao was Answered like this: "This article is my hard work, so every chapter is the best in my heart."

Yes, when I read Mrs. Xiao Qiao's articles carefully, I found that this is indeed the case. Every chapter has its own characteristics, and every chapter is very good.

In the first chapter of this article, the humanistic environment in the pub is described very well. The noise and chaos in the pub are well described. In the second chapter, Shen Junyu’s feelings after drinking the “cocktail” are described. The description of actions and portraits when you feel uncomfortable are very good.

It is definitely not enough to write a novel with description alone. In Lady Xiao Qiao's writing, the character creation is also very successful.

Shen Junyu was confused at first, but later became soft yet firm.

Situ Haoyan is ruthless and ruthless (only to people other than his wife, of course), but he can show his tenderness and childish side in front of Shen Junyu. This naturally highlights that Situ Haoyan loves his wife. The fact that I love my wife (can I add the word "wife-afraid"?)

Of course, it’s not just the protagonist’s characterization that is successful in the supporting roles as well.

Situ Haoyan’s two talented sons and daughters, Situ Mingxuan and Situ Mingsi

His wife's best friend Qing Ling, her best friend's husband Lian Zheng, and his wife's best friend's daughter Yinger

They all have their own characteristics and have their own merits

Finally, be optimistic about Madam Xiao Qiao and her Wenwen. Come on! Work hard!

I wish Mrs. Xiao Qiao’s Wenwen a hit!!

[ps Mrs. Xiao Qiao... I'm sorry for you... I'm really unhappy typing this... Wow~~~ I was wrong...]

by Ji Yunshaohua

2013011912:42


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